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- 人物形象設計
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I like the story, everything is great! I truly hope you will focus on character development, aside from all that everything is flowing great don't flop this[img=recommend]
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Character ✅ Storyline ✅ World background ✅... In my own opinion, the book good, interesting, and also need little bit of corrections. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
I personally am loving it and quite possibly in the near future this work will become 4/5 in writing and 5 in the rest it uses several resources of narrative connection and character development that are only noticeable in best sellers. But although the writing in particular is still somewhat immature, it has everything to improve and be a great work.
Novel with good development, well written characters and a slowly created world. A very interesting system and even the cliches are well used. I expect great things from this work.
I hope you enjoy reading this novel as I am enjoying writing it. Please leave your comments and ratings, I read them all and take them into consideration in my writing.
I like the story, everything is great! I truly hope you will focus on character development, aside from all that everything is flowing great don't flop this[img=recommend]
Hi, I'm loving your book - it's a true gem! Are you planning to release an updated edition or explore new ways to share your work with even more readers
Character ✅ Storyline ✅ World background ✅... In my own opinion, the book good, interesting, and also need little bit of corrections. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
I personally am loving it and quite possibly in the near future this work will become 4/5 in writing and 5 in the rest it uses several resources of narrative connection and character development that are only noticeable in best sellers. But although the writing in particular is still somewhat immature, it has everything to improve and be a great work.
Novel with good development, well written characters and a slowly created world. A very interesting system and even the cliches are well used. I expect great things from this work.
I hope you enjoy reading this novel as I am enjoying writing it. Please leave your comments and ratings, I read them all and take them into consideration in my writing.