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I am really enjoying reading your fanfic so far, even thought you only have a couple chapters out I am really enjoying the way you portray the character in the story making it seem like theu van really be the character. I am also very intrigued about the system you gave the character and i can't wait to see how you explore it!! W fanfic
I am really enjoying reading your fanfic so far, even thought you only have a couple chapters out I am really enjoying the way you portray the character in the story making it seem like theu van really be the character. I am also very intrigued about the system you gave the character and i can't wait to see how you explore it!! W fanfic