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A really good story. shame it's coming to an end but thanks authors for the story😁😁
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The novel is beautiful and light for the reader, I finished it in about two or three days, and if the writer decided to write a new volume for this novel, I would be very happy. I wish he could show the world of Bleach and connect the Big Three, I really hope he does.
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Hey Author, I Really Like This Story And I Appreciate You Sharing It With Us. ..................................................................................................................................................
Estoy Satisfecho con la Velocidad de la trama, aunque diria que falta mas especificación del nivel de Fuerza de los Hollow en One Piece.....
I'm on the edge of my seat every day waiting for an update and it's worth every second. I loved this story. I truly love it. I hope you continue with such high quality writing.
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
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Its not bad ... i think its pretty great for people like me who like op mc, a great pick among the naruto fanfics you can definitely read it ...
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This is my new fav Naruto fanfic. Though this book may not be perfect, it's still the most enjoyable Naruto fanfic i have ever read. Everything from MCs personality to the story to the other characters are amazing and the plot just keeps getting more and more interesting as u read it.
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Hey author ! Quick question... Will he go to bleach world somehow after his death or something or he will just casually go there ?
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It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a very great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I don't mind about MC/Ryujiro is too op (as long as he's not become strong in instaneous / he still need training or time to get stronger, then it's ok).. I like Mihawk template, he's one of my favourite character.. He's so strong without chakra, but it still can be done in Naruto world.. But I think MC 2nd template (Aizen) is a little too absurd/strong,, how MC/Ryujiro play with soul like he experiment to create hollow is wrong.. There should be no hollow in Naruto, because who can defeat it?? Can't wait to see next chapter author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
it really amazing to read this book. Everytime I read a new chapter I'm amazed on how good it is. I just wish it update new chapters faster so that I can read more .
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its honestly fun to read op and naruto fans arguing about the power system lol anyway honestly its good ill recommend to read this and read the comments of all paragraph lol i laughed so hard
It makes one of my favorite anime characters an puts home in a very good anime.
conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
The quality of this story is top notch loved reading it. Just one request please don’t make the mc a missing nin I think it may ruin the story.
Everything was good... The only downside was actually my knowledge of the Naruto world. so it was hard to catch up on who the nation,characters,and powers were. I had to search it up. so nothing on you, it was just hard to catch up on the story.
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A really good story. shame it's coming to an end but thanks authors for the story😁😁
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The novel is beautiful and light for the reader, I finished it in about two or three days, and if the writer decided to write a new volume for this novel, I would be very happy. I wish he could show the world of Bleach and connect the Big Three, I really hope he does.
[img=proud][img=nervous][img=update][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=nervous][img=proud][img=thinking][img=strong][img=golden ticket][img=update][img=proud][img=proud][img=update][img=thinking][img=nervous][img=update][img=thinking][img=update][img=thinking][img=nervous][img=update][img=golden ticket][img=nervous][img=proud][img=update]
Hey Author, I Really Like This Story And I Appreciate You Sharing It With Us. ..................................................................................................................................................
Estoy Satisfecho con la Velocidad de la trama, aunque diria que falta mas especificación del nivel de Fuerza de los Hollow en One Piece.....
I'm on the edge of my seat every day waiting for an update and it's worth every second. I loved this story. I truly love it. I hope you continue with such high quality writing.
there isn't much to hate on this only good points, writing quality is good, pretty OP MC, not one of those spineless simps, as of now no harem(only hinata) idm if there's one anyway, not a goody two shoes kinda MC, i like both the story and the MC, just hope that you won't drop this
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Its not bad ... i think its pretty great for people like me who like op mc, a great pick among the naruto fanfics you can definitely read it ...
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This is my new fav Naruto fanfic. Though this book may not be perfect, it's still the most enjoyable Naruto fanfic i have ever read. Everything from MCs personality to the story to the other characters are amazing and the plot just keeps getting more and more interesting as u read it.
............................................................... ............................................................... ............................................................... ...............................................................
Hey author ! Quick question... Will he go to bleach world somehow after his death or something or he will just casually go there ?
very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !very good !
It's a great Naruto fanfiction!! I like it!!! 👍👍 It have a very great story/plot and great english/translation.. The grammar is great too... I don't mind about MC/Ryujiro is too op (as long as he's not become strong in instaneous / he still need training or time to get stronger, then it's ok).. I like Mihawk template, he's one of my favourite character.. He's so strong without chakra, but it still can be done in Naruto world.. But I think MC 2nd template (Aizen) is a little too absurd/strong,, how MC/Ryujiro play with soul like he experiment to create hollow is wrong.. There should be no hollow in Naruto, because who can defeat it?? Can't wait to see next chapter author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
it really amazing to read this book. Everytime I read a new chapter I'm amazed on how good it is. I just wish it update new chapters faster so that I can read more .
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its honestly fun to read op and naruto fans arguing about the power system lol anyway honestly its good ill recommend to read this and read the comments of all paragraph lol i laughed so hard
It makes one of my favorite anime characters an puts home in a very good anime.
conqueror haki is impossible for a ninja who do things according to villages command so either he goes rouge nin or have a big fight with konaha
The quality of this story is top notch loved reading it. Just one request please don’t make the mc a missing nin I think it may ruin the story.
Everything was good... The only downside was actually my knowledge of the Naruto world. so it was hard to catch up on who the nation,characters,and powers were. I had to search it up. so nothing on you, it was just hard to catch up on the story.
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