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Author san does warn you to read this at your own risk as their novel is not perfect. To clarify, the writing is peppered with irritating grammatical errors; for example a consistent lack of capital letters at the beginning of many sentences and even some of the proper nouns. There are other problems with syntax that would make readers who appreciate grammatically sound writing find this narrative bothersome. I wanted to edit it more than read it 😅 It’s a shame given that the plot sounded interesting and you can see the potential of the story.
From your one and only Author San. Thanks for your continuous votes, comments, and reviews. Love you guys🥰. You can check out my new novel "Alpha Lucas's Disguised Mate." Enjoy yourselves.😉
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Writing Quality - Good Story Development - Good Character Design - Wonderful Updating Stability - Don't Know World Background - Good I don't like the romance stuff, but this is something else, which makes people continue reading it. Loved It.
Reading this got me excited and wanting for more, the plots and character development was of good quality and could not wait for new chapters to be published. This is a well-made novel.
Honestly ,this is so good🔥. I haven't seen new concepts such as this and the way the author builds the characters is superb. I love the plot and everything about it, I really can't wait till I get moreeee
Author san does warn you to read this at your own risk as their novel is not perfect. To clarify, the writing is peppered with irritating grammatical errors; for example a consistent lack of capital letters at the beginning of many sentences and even some of the proper nouns. There are other problems with syntax that would make readers who appreciate grammatically sound writing find this narrative bothersome. I wanted to edit it more than read it 😅 It’s a shame given that the plot sounded interesting and you can see the potential of the story.
From your one and only Author San. Thanks for your continuous votes, comments, and reviews. Love you guys🥰. You can check out my new novel "Alpha Lucas's Disguised Mate." Enjoy yourselves.😉
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揭示劇透 Writing Quality - Good Story Development - Good Character Design - Wonderful Updating Stability - Don't Know World Background - Good I don't like the romance stuff, but this is something else, which makes people continue reading it. Loved It.
Reading this got me excited and wanting for more, the plots and character development was of good quality and could not wait for new chapters to be published. This is a well-made novel.
Honestly ,this is so good🔥. I haven't seen new concepts such as this and the way the author builds the characters is superb. I love the plot and everything about it, I really can't wait till I get moreeee
Loved how she went from weak to strong, although I wished if she got the change to deal with those 3 people who betrayed her in the past, I’m still angry about their betrayal
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