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Liked it till his gf died because of his stupidity of not taking her to the base, and was kinda cringe ,i knew from the start The author wanted to make Alicia the FL but i kinda liked the og character and her death was kinda rushed and bit because of stupidity.
Está todavía no la he leído tampoco jaja, pere hice esta imagen, lo hice tomando la foto de portada y las que pusiste en el capítulo auxiliar como referencia, también lo hice con un imagen tipo realista ya que la serie es sobre TWD que es una serie con personajes reales, ojalá te guste:), sigue con el buen trabajo
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Gostei bastante até agora. O MC é bastante inteligente, gosto do rumo que as coisas estão tomando, gosto das mudanças que ele fez, ansioso por mais
SrCuervo Excellent Fanfic Keep up the Great Work You can do this the Last of Us Fanfic idea directly after Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse Last of us harem fanfiction Synopsis: In his last life, Jack Summers was a gamer. He loved playing Last of Us games and watching the TV show. He dies from a heart attack. He meets God and asks to be sent into the Last of Us world with an enhanced body and mind a year before the outbreak so he can get prepared. OCs are mine. All Artwork can be found on DeviantArt. Harem Connie Adler looks : Mature Golddigger by PepperGirls Amanda Adler (OC) looks: Party Bimbo by 818Bimbos Sasha Cruz (OC) looks : Monica by 818Bimbos Alextra Nune (OC) looks: 3017 by zebbaz Denise looks : Maci by 818Bimbos Tahira looks: 1113 by zebbaz Heather Graham (OC) looks: 3010 by zebbaz Selana Graham (OC) looks : Heidi looking fine by 818Bimbos Kimberly Graham (OC) looks: 2203 by zebbaz Rose Graham looks: Haughty Latina 2 by JackVInsanity Kathleen Coghlan looks: 5001 by zebbaz Dina Mel looks: 2210 by zebbaz
So far I really like it, but it's no surprise, since the author has an incredible creativity that makes me hate the original works, and makes me prefer these fanfics, great work as always.
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MC has amazing base with all important stuff behind a big wall. MC doesnt let his girlfriend inside until after apocalypse start. Shie dies... MC isnt in his base when everything start for no reason... MC doesnt go to his base immediately for no reason... It is just dumb. If you did not build the place for MC i would be ok with everything else going on in this fic. But now it just sucks
História incrível o enredo tudo,por favor não a abandone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of the best Fear The Walking Dead fics, there aren't many that really catch my attention and I'm really loving this one... The character development is very good, I'm looking forward to seeing more interaction with Alicia
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Master Srcuervo picked up a pen again, so we all know a masterpiece is being made
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Truly magnificent, I hope you keep up the excellent work and don't let it drop please and thank you................................................ ......... .
yknow since your first Walking dead novel I've been in wait for another checking every so often glad to see you back haven't read this one yet but if it's anything even remotely compared to the last in quality i know i will love it keep up the good work :D
A Fear The walking Dead fic from the G.O.A.T SrCuervo. I must have done something good in the past month for this to happen [img=update][img=update][img=update]
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The story is really good so far, slowly we are getting closer to the original story and thus to the canon start, I wonder how the story will develop... The characters, so far, are well described and also have a good depth without giving too much of them away... The Walking Dead is of course a super world as a universe, but I hope that you (dear author) don't add too many mutants of your own, so create them based on the already existing ones (but its your story, so your choice)... I can't wait to read more :)
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Honestly you're a great author! In terms of the survival genre, world background, you don't disappoint your readers. The hype and the cliffhangers LoL . anyways I'm here again to support you! 🫶🏼
The story is a little slow at the beginning, you can feel that it is slow due to the long prologues. But everything that connects later gives meaning to the story
Según la reseña, y un par de capítulos del prólogo, mc reencarna? Además, no son solo twd, talvez también resident evil? Esos osos no son broma, es probable que no dejen supervivientes en toda una ciudad si aparecieran en la serie, estaba leyendo la otra historia, la cual era un poquito demasiada aburrida, así que prove está historia para ver si conseguía un poco de cobre, por ahora va bien, pero digo, esos osos son realmente locos, diria que estan un nivel por debajo del tank, es realmente demaciado exagerado poner algo asi al comienzo del apocalipsis!! Solo se necesita un par de ellos, y las películas de resident evil solo habría tenido dos capítulos.
Liked it till his gf died because of his stupidity of not taking her to the base, and was kinda cringe ,i knew from the start The author wanted to make Alicia the FL but i kinda liked the og character and her death was kinda rushed and bit because of stupidity.
Está todavía no la he leído tampoco jaja, pere hice esta imagen, lo hice tomando la foto de portada y las que pusiste en el capítulo auxiliar como referencia, también lo hice con un imagen tipo realista ya que la serie es sobre TWD que es una serie con personajes reales, ojalá te guste:), sigue con el buen trabajo
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Gostei bastante até agora. O MC é bastante inteligente, gosto do rumo que as coisas estão tomando, gosto das mudanças que ele fez, ansioso por mais
SrCuervo Excellent Fanfic Keep up the Great Work You can do this the Last of Us Fanfic idea directly after Fear the Walking Dead: Survive the Zombie Apocalypse Last of us harem fanfiction Synopsis: In his last life, Jack Summers was a gamer. He loved playing Last of Us games and watching the TV show. He dies from a heart attack. He meets God and asks to be sent into the Last of Us world with an enhanced body and mind a year before the outbreak so he can get prepared. OCs are mine. All Artwork can be found on DeviantArt. Harem Connie Adler looks : Mature Golddigger by PepperGirls Amanda Adler (OC) looks: Party Bimbo by 818Bimbos Sasha Cruz (OC) looks : Monica by 818Bimbos Alextra Nune (OC) looks: 3017 by zebbaz Denise looks : Maci by 818Bimbos Tahira looks: 1113 by zebbaz Heather Graham (OC) looks: 3010 by zebbaz Selana Graham (OC) looks : Heidi looking fine by 818Bimbos Kimberly Graham (OC) looks: 2203 by zebbaz Rose Graham looks: Haughty Latina 2 by JackVInsanity Kathleen Coghlan looks: 5001 by zebbaz Dina Mel looks: 2210 by zebbaz
So far I really like it, but it's no surprise, since the author has an incredible creativity that makes me hate the original works, and makes me prefer these fanfics, great work as always.
揭示劇透 MC has amazing base with all important stuff behind a big wall. MC doesnt let his girlfriend inside until after apocalypse start. Shie dies... MC isnt in his base when everything start for no reason... MC doesnt go to his base immediately for no reason... It is just dumb. If you did not build the place for MC i would be ok with everything else going on in this fic. But now it just sucks
História incrível o enredo tudo,por favor não a abandone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is one of the best Fear The Walking Dead fics, there aren't many that really catch my attention and I'm really loving this one... The character development is very good, I'm looking forward to seeing more interaction with Alicia
[img=proud][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Please Write more This is the best TWKD Fan novel i have read in a Long Time gerate work cep it up[img=recommend] Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great Great
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FINALLY ANOTHER TWD FANFIC!!!!!!! ITS SRCUERVO, WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED TO KNOW? FINALLY ANOTHER TWD FANFIC!!!!!!! ITS SRCUERVO, WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED TO KNOW? FINALLY ANOTHER TWD FANFIC!!!!!!! ITS SRCUERVO, WHAT MORE DO YOU NEED TO KNOW? Important things must be said 3 times
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Master Srcuervo picked up a pen again, so we all know a masterpiece is being made
.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Truly magnificent, I hope you keep up the excellent work and don't let it drop please and thank you................................................ ......... .
yknow since your first Walking dead novel I've been in wait for another checking every so often glad to see you back haven't read this one yet but if it's anything even remotely compared to the last in quality i know i will love it keep up the good work :D
A Fear The walking Dead fic from the G.O.A.T SrCuervo. I must have done something good in the past month for this to happen [img=update][img=update][img=update]
[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The story is really good so far, slowly we are getting closer to the original story and thus to the canon start, I wonder how the story will develop... The characters, so far, are well described and also have a good depth without giving too much of them away... The Walking Dead is of course a super world as a universe, but I hope that you (dear author) don't add too many mutants of your own, so create them based on the already existing ones (but its your story, so your choice)... I can't wait to read more :)
💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕 . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Honestly you're a great author! In terms of the survival genre, world background, you don't disappoint your readers. The hype and the cliffhangers LoL . anyways I'm here again to support you! 🫶🏼
The story is a little slow at the beginning, you can feel that it is slow due to the long prologues. But everything that connects later gives meaning to the story
Según la reseña, y un par de capítulos del prólogo, mc reencarna? Además, no son solo twd, talvez también resident evil? Esos osos no son broma, es probable que no dejen supervivientes en toda una ciudad si aparecieran en la serie, estaba leyendo la otra historia, la cual era un poquito demasiada aburrida, así que prove está historia para ver si conseguía un poco de cobre, por ahora va bien, pero digo, esos osos son realmente locos, diria que estan un nivel por debajo del tank, es realmente demaciado exagerado poner algo asi al comienzo del apocalipsis!! Solo se necesita un par de ellos, y las películas de resident evil solo habría tenido dos capítulos.