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Story is great but it could use a little better grammar (is grammar the right word if there are just straight up missing words at places). I love what you are doing with the mc tho. Ps it almost feels like you are accentuating that fact that kuruma is Naruto’s only family so that you can kill him off and pierce all of the reader’s hearts
The work is perfect as it is, some people may complain because the training really is the focus and not an idiotic and broken system, The only problem with the work is the updates that are not consistent
Naruto, despite future knowledge is even dumber than before. Even more childish and his goal is so stupid it would only happen because author forced it. Dropping hard.
Author I have to say this is one of the best stories about someone reincarnated as Naruto that I've ever read and I've read a lot of them, the only thing that's a bit annoying is the very long chapter releases
...........I need more, the only problem remains the update speed, but this is one of the best Naruto FanFics of all...............Effort is always the solution!!!!!!
Quite good, it's not a fast fanfic, and you can feel the emotions, so you can tell the author is a good writer. Hopefully he can keep the same pace, and not be hasty to advance in the story. Also remember that you can always can go to other worlds, so you can avoid time skips. Anyway, it's pretty good!
So far the work is simply very good, it has its emotional side, it shows Naruto making a real effort to become stronger, it shows a good relationship between him and Kurama. I hope it stays that way, the work is simply fantastic
I know all his previous work and they are gems in this garbage app , nowadays everyone just releasing Chinese translations so yaa you can expect better quality for his current and previous fic and novel ……….
I'm really enjoying this story. The writing is great, the updates are good and the character development here is very good, I really liked how you make Naruto constantly evolve both physically and mentally in a very gradual way considering all his Buffs and his knowledge of the future. Overall, it's a very enjoyable story to read and I'm very curious to see the future of this story. (Google Translator)
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I do like your fan fiction but they are some information you don't know or you forgot... That was naruto,s clone technique was multiple shadow clone technique it's a forbidden jutsu its rank above normal shadow clone jutsu which happen to be rank b . Multiple Shadow clone jutsu only Naruto can use it because of his special circumstances 1.he was a uzumaki 2.jinjureki 3.his modified baiju seal. Other can't be like him. If they try his clone jutsu there brain 🧠 will get fried after one use.
Nice story at least until now, hope updates will be smooth and story still interesting
I like this story, but i do not realy like idea for Naruto to only have seggs friends and one night stands, he deserve a real love and relationship,that's why i propose a small harem for him, max five girls made of: Hinata of course, Sakura and Ino because Funk Sasuke emo punk, Tenten since in Baruto timeline she will end up all alone, and Tamari since she deserve much better then that lazy bum Shikamaru.
So far this is a really good and flushed out story. I highly recommend to fellow readers.
Just the story is very good I hope you don't let it die 10 out of 10 the story smells of limos and qualified it with 10 tomatoes I seriously hope you can continue writing thanks for the chapter
9/10 bastante bueno-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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we have a broken, smart , strong Naruto with great discipline. I strongly recommend this book
I am writing this only for more chapters😏.................................................................iiiiiiiiiiii. nnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeddddddd mmmmmmmoooooorrrrrrrrreeeee
I have read the first 13 chapters, and I must say it's very good. I like the idea of Naruto's soul consuming the invading soul, and the writing is quite decent. Naruto's new goal seems original to me, or at least I haven't seen it before. I hope you continue with this work.
Very good Naruto fanfic. I like it . Naruto very good boy and i hope the boy gets his happiness some day and will pray for him while reading his journey. Great work author sama
I miss this work so much 🥺 it had so much potential, What ever happened to the Author? Did he just give up? I have high hopes for Work, I hope you come back soon
Story is great but it could use a little better grammar (is grammar the right word if there are just straight up missing words at places). I love what you are doing with the mc tho. Ps it almost feels like you are accentuating that fact that kuruma is Naruto’s only family so that you can kill him off and pierce all of the reader’s hearts
The work is perfect as it is, some people may complain because the training really is the focus and not an idiotic and broken system, The only problem with the work is the updates that are not consistent
Naruto, despite future knowledge is even dumber than before. Even more childish and his goal is so stupid it would only happen because author forced it. Dropping hard.
Author I have to say this is one of the best stories about someone reincarnated as Naruto that I've ever read and I've read a lot of them, the only thing that's a bit annoying is the very long chapter releases
...........I need more, the only problem remains the update speed, but this is one of the best Naruto FanFics of all...............Effort is always the solution!!!!!!
Quite good, it's not a fast fanfic, and you can feel the emotions, so you can tell the author is a good writer. Hopefully he can keep the same pace, and not be hasty to advance in the story. Also remember that you can always can go to other worlds, so you can avoid time skips. Anyway, it's pretty good!
So far the work is simply very good, it has its emotional side, it shows Naruto making a real effort to become stronger, it shows a good relationship between him and Kurama. I hope it stays that way, the work is simply fantastic
I know all his previous work and they are gems in this garbage app , nowadays everyone just releasing Chinese translations so yaa you can expect better quality for his current and previous fic and novel ……….
I'm really enjoying this story. The writing is great, the updates are good and the character development here is very good, I really liked how you make Naruto constantly evolve both physically and mentally in a very gradual way considering all his Buffs and his knowledge of the future. Overall, it's a very enjoyable story to read and I'm very curious to see the future of this story. (Google Translator)
揭示劇透 I do like your fan fiction but they are some information you don't know or you forgot... That was naruto,s clone technique was multiple shadow clone technique it's a forbidden jutsu its rank above normal shadow clone jutsu which happen to be rank b . Multiple Shadow clone jutsu only Naruto can use it because of his special circumstances 1.he was a uzumaki 2.jinjureki 3.his modified baiju seal. Other can't be like him. If they try his clone jutsu there brain 🧠 will get fried after one use.
Nice story at least until now, hope updates will be smooth and story still interesting
I like this story, but i do not realy like idea for Naruto to only have seggs friends and one night stands, he deserve a real love and relationship,that's why i propose a small harem for him, max five girls made of: Hinata of course, Sakura and Ino because Funk Sasuke emo punk, Tenten since in Baruto timeline she will end up all alone, and Tamari since she deserve much better then that lazy bum Shikamaru.
So far this is a really good and flushed out story. I highly recommend to fellow readers.
Just the story is very good I hope you don't let it die 10 out of 10 the story smells of limos and qualified it with 10 tomatoes I seriously hope you can continue writing thanks for the chapter
9/10 bastante bueno-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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we have a broken, smart , strong Naruto with great discipline. I strongly recommend this book
I am writing this only for more chapters😏.................................................................iiiiiiiiiiii. nnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeddddddd mmmmmmmoooooorrrrrrrrreeeee
I have read the first 13 chapters, and I must say it's very good. I like the idea of Naruto's soul consuming the invading soul, and the writing is quite decent. Naruto's new goal seems original to me, or at least I haven't seen it before. I hope you continue with this work.
Very good Naruto fanfic. I like it . Naruto very good boy and i hope the boy gets his happiness some day and will pray for him while reading his journey. Great work author sama
I miss this work so much 🥺 it had so much potential, What ever happened to the Author? Did he just give up? I have high hopes for Work, I hope you come back soon