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I really like the character specially some with big bo- personality. just don't drop plzzzz 🥲
The world-building and story are quite good for the three chapters I read, but the grammatical issues, likely due to English being a second language, disrupt the immersion. Example "yesterday's night" instead of "last night."
the story is perfect. and the representation of scenes are good and if there are more ntr it will be very good
*cough cough* Fellow Daoist Melon is truly gifted in the Dao of Literature, a talent seen once in 696969 years.
Wow dude. Did you take inspiration from that manhwa? I will certainly add this to my library 😏
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like seriously what do you think about? this novel is really awesome please keep up the cultured work. you can also check out my novel, ultimate soul eraser system: otherworldly harem.
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Love the story and love how the plot is turning out and would recommend it 100,000,000%. And this story has a lot of fun scenes for all the well cultured people to read.
For people who read comment .....just try it I promise you won't be disappointed with it..
what a great novel, I must say this author is a genus, this is an inspiration. meanwhile you can tryout my novel THE primordial BLOODLINE 02 on webnovel, please like and comment it really means a lot for me
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ARGHHHHHH!!! DON'T READ MY BOOK!! THIS IS A CURSE!!! Don't read my book Unless you want your sword size by two or more inches. In the book, lemons are so bitter and the Smut scenes were written vividly. No cap bro! I have been having a hard time writing this novel with one hand;( Anyway, I warned you, and If you want to read this scripture, read at your own risk! Task: Author's shameless 5-star review progress: Completed
Hey, great cover, you inspire us all. May I know where you get them from? or on what tool you generate them? You have a great artistic sense in you.
This book is the Peak of culture. Smut scenes were god-tier and about lemons, They were very good. If you are a man of culture, this is a must-read for you. More importantly, There is No yuri and No ntr. Thank me later. Waiting for more chapters
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The book is great, but I have to give 3 stars for the writing quality because the author likes to put heart emojis on certain scenes and that makes it nearly unreadable and drastically lowers the writing quality. But outside of that, the book is great. Keep up the good work.
As a Man of Culture, I'm gonna give it 5star as I've seen some reviews and i like ROMANCE FANTASY and i can tell this is gonna be wholesome author 😁❤️
I really like the character specially some with big bo- personality. just don't drop plzzzz 🥲
The world-building and story are quite good for the three chapters I read, but the grammatical issues, likely due to English being a second language, disrupt the immersion. Example "yesterday's night" instead of "last night."
the story is perfect. and the representation of scenes are good and if there are more ntr it will be very good
*cough cough* Fellow Daoist Melon is truly gifted in the Dao of Literature, a talent seen once in 696969 years.
Wow dude. Did you take inspiration from that manhwa? I will certainly add this to my library 😏
At last, a reliable and effective service I can rely on! I can only imagine how many people are struggling with crypto-related issues and are likely also unsure of their ability to find practical solutions. This is where Space Spy Recovery rightfully enters the picture as the best provider of the service, and their success is clearly demonstrated by the fact that they were able to help me recover 550,000 EUROS that I had lost to online cryptocurrency theft. Get in touch for free: Email addresses: info@spacespyrecovery.pro and soacespy@hackermail.com. Telegram: @spacespy65; Skype: live: cid.2b75b0cf1ce9bf69; WhatsApp: +1 (657) 543-6038; YouTube: https://youtu.be/m8DDfVwc_lE, Website: https://spacespyrecovery.pro/
like seriously what do you think about? this novel is really awesome please keep up the cultured work. you can also check out my novel, ultimate soul eraser system: otherworldly harem.
My N— [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Love the story and love how the plot is turning out and would recommend it 100,000,000%. And this story has a lot of fun scenes for all the well cultured people to read.
For people who read comment .....just try it I promise you won't be disappointed with it..
what a great novel, I must say this author is a genus, this is an inspiration. meanwhile you can tryout my novel THE primordial BLOODLINE 02 on webnovel, please like and comment it really means a lot for me
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Wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww w w we we w w w w we w w w w w w w w w we w w w w w we w w w w w w w www w w w w w w wwww w w we w w we we w w eeee e W s s s s s s s
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ARGHHHHHH!!! DON'T READ MY BOOK!! THIS IS A CURSE!!! Don't read my book Unless you want your sword size by two or more inches. In the book, lemons are so bitter and the Smut scenes were written vividly. No cap bro! I have been having a hard time writing this novel with one hand;( Anyway, I warned you, and If you want to read this scripture, read at your own risk! Task: Author's shameless 5-star review progress: Completed
Hey, great cover, you inspire us all. May I know where you get them from? or on what tool you generate them? You have a great artistic sense in you.
This book is the Peak of culture. Smut scenes were god-tier and about lemons, They were very good. If you are a man of culture, this is a must-read for you. More importantly, There is No yuri and No ntr. Thank me later. Waiting for more chapters
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The book is great, but I have to give 3 stars for the writing quality because the author likes to put heart emojis on certain scenes and that makes it nearly unreadable and drastically lowers the writing quality. But outside of that, the book is great. Keep up the good work.
As a Man of Culture, I'm gonna give it 5star as I've seen some reviews and i like ROMANCE FANTASY and i can tell this is gonna be wholesome author 😁❤️