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I don’t have much to say this time but I like this story and hope to see the author continue it and improve along the way
I liked the story very much. it is a very interesting concept of chaldea in Marvel. I just hope the author doesn't drop the ff and if he can add more ch.
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the story writing, story devlopment, MC char design, and world building is all nice in My opinion. But plz author update this novel more frequently, really this is that good for Me to beg an more chapter updates in a week.
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Tô adorando a história,o único defeito é ela ainda não ter uns 100 cap para mim poder ler sem parar,fora que tô no hype para ver como ela vai seguir daqui em diante pq achei muito top
I just want to tell you something pal.I got your back.This is amazing I have been searching for crossover between two franchises .There was one but its Minor .I wanted to write Myself but I am a trashy author and cannot dedicate to much time on that .I love the beginning although there are some mistakes but you will improve over time. I just cant imahine what interactions will be like too lany possibilities .
Really good so far, with the possibility of rising to the top... I just hope that it won't be a typical, we help the heroes fanfiction, and that he appears more as a being of his caliber... That would mean he helps when he wants, and not when he's expected to lol I think it leaves a bad taste in your mouth if he becomes just another system-driven idiot :)
Another mediocre story from your trashy author here! If you expecting a masterpiece here, then quickly leave before my story hurt your brain! The story will potentially leaving the reader with a madness enhancement! Warning: It's a HAREM, wish fulfillment, and a cliche plot!!!
I don’t have much to say this time but I like this story and hope to see the author continue it and improve along the way
I liked the story very much. it is a very interesting concept of chaldea in Marvel. I just hope the author doesn't drop the ff and if he can add more ch.
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揭示劇透 the story writing, story devlopment, MC char design, and world building is all nice in My opinion. But plz author update this novel more frequently, really this is that good for Me to beg an more chapter updates in a week.
I like thisㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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Tô adorando a história,o único defeito é ela ainda não ter uns 100 cap para mim poder ler sem parar,fora que tô no hype para ver como ela vai seguir daqui em diante pq achei muito top
I just want to tell you something pal.I got your back.This is amazing I have been searching for crossover between two franchises .There was one but its Minor .I wanted to write Myself but I am a trashy author and cannot dedicate to much time on that .I love the beginning although there are some mistakes but you will improve over time. I just cant imahine what interactions will be like too lany possibilities .
Really good so far, with the possibility of rising to the top... I just hope that it won't be a typical, we help the heroes fanfiction, and that he appears more as a being of his caliber... That would mean he helps when he wants, and not when he's expected to lol I think it leaves a bad taste in your mouth if he becomes just another system-driven idiot :)
Another mediocre story from your trashy author here! If you expecting a masterpiece here, then quickly leave before my story hurt your brain! The story will potentially leaving the reader with a madness enhancement! Warning: It's a HAREM, wish fulfillment, and a cliche plot!!!