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Great Story, great reactions from harry and his peers. Highly enjoyed reading this ff. Can't wait for ch 96
ive been bench reading these chapters. in simple words its plain awsome. you really get drawn into the story. character of gf en the other people feel real en wel written. realty love the story. greetings from the Nederlands
great story over all. good intro. great seeing a version of him taking control on his own. only things I Would suggest would be involving him with goblins again sooner rather than later. he needs access to that political power and him being in the tournament should automatically emancipate him, so that should happen sooner. 🤞 keep in coming. like I said great story.
So far a very good fanfic, I wish it updated faster, but otherwise very consistent. Good job
I really like this one. Harry was so simple in the movies. I know that was to be accepted by children but so many things that happened in the books made me question some of the happenings. Why did Harry and co have to have those adventures? Where was the all powerful Dumbledore? Why didn't he get the letters and gifts? Thanks for showing what was happening in the background.
Great Story, great reactions from harry and his peers. Highly enjoyed reading this ff. Can't wait for ch 96
ive been bench reading these chapters. in simple words its plain awsome. you really get drawn into the story. character of gf en the other people feel real en wel written. realty love the story. greetings from the Nederlands
great story over all. good intro. great seeing a version of him taking control on his own. only things I Would suggest would be involving him with goblins again sooner rather than later. he needs access to that political power and him being in the tournament should automatically emancipate him, so that should happen sooner. 🤞 keep in coming. like I said great story.
So far a very good fanfic, I wish it updated faster, but otherwise very consistent. Good job
I really like this one. Harry was so simple in the movies. I know that was to be accepted by children but so many things that happened in the books made me question some of the happenings. Why did Harry and co have to have those adventures? Where was the all powerful Dumbledore? Why didn't he get the letters and gifts? Thanks for showing what was happening in the background.