2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
LV 14 ![Badge]()
doing real good so far. Pretty good writing quality, the makings of a good story, well done
LV 4 ![Badge]()
Tried reading it, but the common sense of the people looking down on the MC had me seriously questioning everything. Sry, but having to give this work a hard pass. Why? I soon felt like the idiot was the guy tricked into reading it...
LV 14 ![Badge]()
doing real good so far. Pretty good writing quality, the makings of a good story, well done
Tried reading it, but the common sense of the people looking down on the MC had me seriously questioning everything. Sry, but having to give this work a hard pass. Why? I soon felt like the idiot was the guy tricked into reading it...