Harry Potter: A Different Sirius免費線上閱讀

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Sirius took Harry on the night Voldemort attacked and and left England.
What will happen now?
How will the story change?
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Dao_of_laziness420

It's a good idea and mostly well-executed but to be honest it doesn't match my tastes. For example, I like the idea of schemes within schemes in the literature I read but the characters seem more upfront and don't seem to be working towards certain goals but otherwise pretty good.

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i_love_cultivation

well out of all the HP Fanfics this by far one of the best. I like how you made Sirius more grounded and more responsible. I like Harrys character, He's not the weak boy from cannon or the nxt dark lord, he also isnt a pervert or Arrogant.