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This fanfiction leaves much to be desired. It feels disjointed, with the author jumping from one concept to another without fully developing any of them. For example, the sudden introduction of Kamar-Taj feels out of place and doesn’t fit the original premise of the story. Additionally, relationships are rushed and lack depth—especially one where intimacy occurs only due to a curse, which feels forced and disconnected from any real emotional buildup. The crossover with Marvel is also never mentioned in the description, which leave me feeling blindsided by the unexpected plot elements. So overall due to the grammer mistakes and the overall rushed story, this is a 4/10fanfiction.
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Amazing… i dont understand why no one has thought of something similar before… simply amazing long chapters no too much info dump really good Pls continue
Horrific grammar. Pronouns are constantly flip between male and female for characters. The sentence structure in places is janky, and in some places the idioms are nonsense. It reads like it was written in another language and fed to an AI translator software with no editor to confirm that the output was correct. Story is great, but it it is simply unreadable.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing mistakes ruin it for me, the rest is good tho, the author should probably edit the first chapters unless he wants more people to give up on the novel, like i did
The Story is really good so far but with the inclusion of Marvel in this I am probably gonna drop it
i will give you 5 stars just for the title finaly something new , and the op hagrid fics are so rare to find .................................................
good story i really like fiction from hagrid's pov there are very few of them and this one I can feel will be very great if the author doesn't stop midway🐧
the story itself seem pretty awesome , but the gramma and writing is really funky and outright funny sometimes like hagrid was about to pay for a trip on the knight buss , and the one taking the money said something like !hey it cost 8 sickels but we take 9 hot chocolade" wut? :'D
The story is quite good, and I find it interesting . The only downside is that the grammar is a bit off, but it does not take anything away from the story, and it is a very interesting story with a great concept, so please carry on the good work.
I do it because it seems like everyone does it and it's become a tradition. I hope you will support me with constructive criticism. I would like to remind you once again that my native language is not English. If you can be understanding and warn me about spelling mistakes, I will try to correct them.
This fanfiction leaves much to be desired. It feels disjointed, with the author jumping from one concept to another without fully developing any of them. For example, the sudden introduction of Kamar-Taj feels out of place and doesn’t fit the original premise of the story. Additionally, relationships are rushed and lack depth—especially one where intimacy occurs only due to a curse, which feels forced and disconnected from any real emotional buildup. The crossover with Marvel is also never mentioned in the description, which leave me feeling blindsided by the unexpected plot elements. So overall due to the grammer mistakes and the overall rushed story, this is a 4/10fanfiction.
揭示劇透 Amazing… i dont understand why no one has thought of something similar before… simply amazing long chapters no too much info dump really good Pls continue
Horrific grammar. Pronouns are constantly flip between male and female for characters. The sentence structure in places is janky, and in some places the idioms are nonsense. It reads like it was written in another language and fed to an AI translator software with no editor to confirm that the output was correct. Story is great, but it it is simply unreadable.
Muy buen libro. .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The writing mistakes ruin it for me, the rest is good tho, the author should probably edit the first chapters unless he wants more people to give up on the novel, like i did
The Story is really good so far but with the inclusion of Marvel in this I am probably gonna drop it
i will give you 5 stars just for the title finaly something new , and the op hagrid fics are so rare to find .................................................
good story i really like fiction from hagrid's pov there are very few of them and this one I can feel will be very great if the author doesn't stop midway🐧
the story itself seem pretty awesome , but the gramma and writing is really funky and outright funny sometimes like hagrid was about to pay for a trip on the knight buss , and the one taking the money said something like !hey it cost 8 sickels but we take 9 hot chocolade" wut? :'D
The story is quite good, and I find it interesting . The only downside is that the grammar is a bit off, but it does not take anything away from the story, and it is a very interesting story with a great concept, so please carry on the good work.
I do it because it seems like everyone does it and it's become a tradition. I hope you will support me with constructive criticism. I would like to remind you once again that my native language is not English. If you can be understanding and warn me about spelling mistakes, I will try to correct them.
honestly it's a great read and I'm enjoying it eminencely