/ Anime & Comics / Naruto: Aizen's Shadow in Konoha
摘要
High above the battlefield, a figure slowly ascended. Below, the once vibrant village of Konoha lay in ruins. Minato Namikaze, clutching a bloody gash at his waist, looked up with a deep, questioning voice. "Aizen, have you fallen?"
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The story takes place in an AU universe of Naruto
Disclaimer: I don't own any of the characters or the fanfic I was merely translating this.
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I need more Btw author you should know that Aizen is the name of Aizen, not Sosuke which is his familly name, you made that mistake in the last chapter (chapter 20).
From what Ive seen, the author has superficial knowledge on both chakra and reiryoku, which is weird cus this novel exists. It ruins the immersion for someone well versed in both power systems. The idea of the story is good, but the author turned it into a psudo cultivation novel. also in the begining we were shown how the mc died, Id rather read one where the mc continued from where he stoped in his last life and make use of the knowledge to acheve his goals and the like. but thats besides the point, what ruins this novel is the lack and mix up of info from the corresponding worlds, for example he had mc gain the memories of Aizen then all of a sudden apparently there is a Shinigami technique that helps improve spiritual energy by ABSORBING energy from the surrounding which mind you is a QUINCY technique. Also mc keeps getting handed everything bro got at least 2 A rank ninjutsu's and a few more ninjutsu. FOR GOODNESS SAKE ITS ONLY 4 chapters. I wanted to give a 1 star but that wont be a fair review so I gave a 2.8
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Anybody who uses systems have to take into account the incongruity. How do these powers and items come to be. Its one of my biggest annoyances with system novels. using a system is both lazy and unimaginative. 0/5 if I could.
I think I have done quite well in translating this fic and I shamelessly deserve to give it 5 stars as the translator. I hope you guys enjoy this.
one of a kind fanfic ,, since the first line and the following ones ,,i couldn't only just to feel excited to the comming scenarioes or the upcoming trainning arcs or the interactions between the mc and other ,, really this one accomplished that thanks❤❤❤🖤🖤🖤🔥🔥🔥
So far the translation is good, as I have read only 20 chapters so far, couldn't say anything about the plot.
Reads like a reddit post. Too much info dumbs and fillers. Feels like a copy and paste. Such a terrible narration style. The author directly talks about other anime in length. So annoying. In the middle of fights you get the MC explaining his plans and powers to random enemies. The author likes to talk a lot to the readers directly. He just won't shut up.
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Story is pretty enjoyable so far. I really liked how Aizen handled the nawaki conflict in a low key and smart manner. Some of the other plot points are random nonsense, like he gets assassinated by a cloud ninja who randomly gifts him senju blood that he has for some reason. Still entertains me because I want to see evil scientist stuff so I’ll grudgingly give a pass And the grammar is terrible, it’s been run through the old version of chat got so sometimes the sentences will get stuck in a loop or say the opposite of what is intended. I recommend the story 5 stars so far and -2 for the poor translation
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you bum you gate keeping da raw tell me dat already bru you bot or else ima go sicko mode and fly to the moon don't leave so soon how can i get through?
卷 1
- 1 Transmigration 7 months ago
- 2 Kyōka Suigetsu 7 months ago
- 3 A Hollow Hope Blooms 7 months ago
- 4 The Original Owner's Talent 7 months ago
- 5 Kenjutsu 7 months ago
- 6 Minato 7 months ago
- 7 Spar 7 months ago
- 8 Fierce Fight 7 months ago
- 9 Victory and Loss 7 months ago
- 10 Respect and Recognition 7 months ago
- 11 Aizen's Path To Science 7 months ago
- 12 Uchiha Fugaku 7 months ago
- 13 Senju Nawaki 7 months ago
- 14 Threats 7 months ago
- 15 Confidence 7 months ago
- 16 The Battle Begins 7 months ago
- 17 Fight Of Fire And Water 7 months ago
- 18 Ending and Healing 7 months ago
- 19 The Third Generation's Favor 7 months ago
- 20 Inexplicable Hostility 7 months ago
- 21 Senju Ryuken 7 months ago
- 22 Shikai 6 months ago
- 23 Uzumaki Kushina 6 months ago
- 24 Cloud Shinobi 6 months ago
- 25 First Show of Power 6 months ago
- 26 An Unexpected Parting Gift 6 months ago
- 27 Early Graduation 6 months ago
- 28 Rewards 6 months ago
- 29 Assessment 6 months ago
- 30 Elite Chunin 6 months ago
- 31 Kyoka Suigetsu 6 months ago
- 32 The Unremarkable Aizen 6 months ago
- 33 Minato Intuition 6 months ago
- 34 A sudden good thing 6 months ago
- 35 Danzo's Recruitment 6 months ago
- 36 Apprenticeship with Tsunade 6 months ago
- 37 The Medical Division 6 months ago
- 38 Hiruko 6 months ago
- 39 Actors meet Actors 6 months ago
- 40 Reiatsu and Senjutsu 5 months ago
- 41 Two years 5 months ago
- 42 Twists and Turns 5 months ago
- 43 Minato's Recommendation 5 months ago
- 44 Incorporated into Jiraiya Team 5 months ago
- 45 Goodbye 5 months ago
- 46 Ambush 5 months ago
- 47 47 5 months ago
- 48 Mitarashi Zashi 5 months ago
- 49 Anbu Big Three 5 months ago
- 50 Konoha's various forces 5 months ago
- 51 Maliciousness of Ryuken 5 months ago
- 52 Aizen's Guess 5 months ago
- 53 Chishui Castle 5 months ago
- 54 The Shining New Generation 5 months ago
- 55 Third kazekage shot 5 months ago
- 56 The Fine Tradition of Konoha 5 months ago
- 57 Changes 4 months ago
- 58 Sand Shinobi's Counterattack 4 months ago
- 59 White Fang 4 months ago
- 60 The Terrifying White Fang 4 months ago
- 61 Chiyo vs White Fang 4 months ago
- 62 The Keen White Fang 4 months ago
- 63 63 4 months ago
- 64 Behind the scenes 4 months ago
- 65 Shinno 4 months ago
- 66 Farewell, Senju Nawaki 4 months ago
- 67 Promotion 4 months ago
- 68 68 4 months ago
- 69 69 4 months ago
- 70 Malicious Ryuken 4 months ago
- 71 Departure 4 months ago
- 72 72 4 months ago
- 73 73 4 months ago
- 74 74 4 months ago
- 75 75 4 months ago
- 76 76 4 months ago
- 77 77 4 months ago
- 78 78 4 months ago
- 79 79 4 months ago
- 80 80 4 months ago
- 81 81 4 months ago
- 82 Past Events 4 months ago
- 83 83 3 months ago
- 84 84 3 months ago
- 85 85 3 months ago
- 86 86 3 months ago
- 87 87 3 months ago
- 88 The Last Battle 2 months ago
- 89 89 2 months ago
- 90 90 2 months ago
- 91 91 2 months ago
- 92 92 2 months ago
- 93 Fighting 2 months ago
- 94 94 2 months ago
- 95 95 2 months ago
- 96 Kato Dan 2 months ago
- 97 Tsunade's Heartache 2 months ago
- 98 The Birth of Sannin 2 months ago
- 99 End of second ninja world war 2 months ago
- 100 100 2 months ago
- 101 101 2 months ago
- 102 102 2 months ago
- 103 103 2 months ago
- 104 104 2 months ago
- 105 105 2 months ago
- 106 Flying Thunder God Technique 2 months ago
- 107 107 2 months ago
- 108 108 2 months ago
- 109 109 2 months ago
- 110 110 2 months ago
- 111 111 2 months ago
- 112 Gambling 2 months ago
- 113 Aizen vs Kai 1 months ago
- 114 The Good Man Aizen 1 months ago
- 115 Interception 1 months ago
- 116 Izanagi 1 months ago
- 117 117 1 months ago
- 118 A Cloud of Suspicion 1 months ago
- 119 Shattered Alliances 1 months ago
- 120 Angry Zashi 1 months ago
- 121 Hyuga Gin 1 months ago
- 122 The Curse of Ambition 1 months ago
- 123 Rōran Mission 1 months ago
- 124 A Divergent Timeline 29 days ago
- 125 The Good Guy Aizen 28 days ago
- 126 Planning Ashura Chakra 26 days ago
- 127 Return 25 days ago
- 128 Arrogant Mukade 23 days ago
- 129 Aizen's Shot 22 days ago
- 130 Sealing 16 days ago
- 131 Eternal Drakness 15 days ago
- 132 A HappyEnding? 14 days ago
- 133 Awakening Sage Body 13 days ago
- 134 Death of Rōran 12 days ago
- 135 Aizen's Gift 9 days ago
- 136 The real ending 8 days ago
- 137 Return to the Village 7 days ago
- 138 Orochimaru 4 days ago
- 139 Horrified Orochimaru 3 days ago
- 140 Cooperation 2 days ago
- 141 Dark Bargains 1 days ago
- 142 Third Great Ninja War 7 hours ago
Why is that always needs to be a self insert MC from earth who died, and got transferred to another world, where they finally acquire the power of an anime character. Why couldn’t we just take the anime character over to the other world. How come that the Aizen from earth memorys overwrites the one from Naruto, but the original Aizen doesn’t override the self insert protagonist from earth.