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Ngl i thought it was just those copy & paste novels but nope this is much different and i like it very much. And i like that the mc behave like a child would behave. He feels real and emotionally And f**k the mother why would u do that to ur own child ps( i like that development though ) I like when the mc started going bullistic on his father just reading it u feel the mc's emotions , they where the emotions of a child. I give props for that U best not drop this author because you are on casp of makig a masterpiece here. Anyway good luck on the book hope to see more of that pls.
well what to say ....the gist of it is stick around for some agonizing chapters but u will finally find gold lol . the starting chapters r very rough , u can see very clearly that he is a beginner author .short chapters .. inconsistent (a bit) ... frustrating nerfing tactics ..sigh ....BUT it gets good eventually starting from about chapter 17 , it starts delivering what it promises bit by bit ...tho it still has a way to go i am very excited to keep on reading. u should definitely give it a try ....just get the imp parts of the starting chapters and ignore the annoying stuff ...cuz it won't really matter in the long run .
Story was good until chapter 30 with interesting plot and characters but from then on it just went downhill fast on one side you have literal adult woman offering to give bj and s*xually harassing a 9 year, and on the other you have illogical scenarios like there is this character that is Called Mary trying to kill MC who is Royal Subject, which is highest class in the story because she suspected him a 9 year old of impersonation and forgery a literal 9 year old no trial no nothing, and remember Mary isn't some type of police officer No she is just an office worker ,so an office worker was trying to kill a royal because she had some suspicion which then lead to mc getting nerfed like it feels like author regretted giving the mc these powers and is trying to pull every plot twist he can to nerf and balance it out somehow and cherry on the top mc is pervert like every time he sees a woman you are guaranteed to be given a 4 paragraph comment about her chest
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The first 20-30 chapters are ok but it starts eating away on your brain cells any later. The author probably has ADHD. Going off topic too add 3 unnecessary paragraphs to every paragraph. One single arc took about 30 chapters starting from chapter 20 and as i see it from the titles, it is gonna go on for a lot more. The writing style is annoying. Info dumps every now and then. It would be more practical to introduce new things when they are actually needed. Forinters or whatever were not needed here right now so it was pointless. The Academy introduction was pointless unless he went there or met someone from there. The plot is forced with the mother, the system shutting down and that Mary Woman in train station (you cant just kill a guy holding Royalty ID just cuz u suspect him, run a dna test, check account balance and confirm of he deserves to be royalty before fkin around). Anyway this was my review. This book got potential. Edit and change. Thats how it works. Imma drop it. Do let me know if it changes. Ill give it a read then. Thanks
ok so i'm honestly still early into the book so i can't give a very detailed review but what i can say is this book is a hidden gem . mc = perfection. the story is very well written and has a comedic side . keep up the good work author 👍[img=strong]
Great novel overall, when saw the title iIthougjt it was going to be one of the chinese face slapping novels, but the novel was surprisingly unique ; i haven't seen anything quite lile it.
from reading everything so far (chapter 11) I'm already in love with this novel, I love these types of novels that offer OP auxiliary help to the MC
The novel is really good but the only issue i have is that the author tends to "rant" a lot, especially in the world explanation and in filler chapters. It kinda kills the already built-up momentum like in the train ride where the MC and the officers just yap continuously for like 3-4 chapters. it might seem like you're giving details and more depth in the novel but it's more like embellishing unimportant parts of the novel. Overall i love the novel and it really has potential. These are just my takes😊
Well I guess the concept is good but Mc is too much of a crybaby in the early chapters like do you expect a Full grown man to cry like that, Not very realistic, Character development I guess it's good, reality checks are kinda annoying but life is often like that, Annoying, so that kinda adds some realistic points.
Soo.. yeah i bought privilage and read further novel chaps, you made some Info dump chaps dude and most people does not have "patience" to read through it BUT it is okay since you seem to be a new face in this business... Here is an advice about how to make better "Info dumps":you can distribute infos and write them part to part and integrate them to the story(this aldı adds some mystery but repetition of this method is a bad thing cuz it gets predictable and bores reader) rather than gibing Info in its bare form you can make us "feel" it through mcs pov( let MC explain it part bu part what he sees or feel of new continents structure for example, let him COOK) other than these, characters are still lacks some depth(as expected cuz story barely started) story needs some timekip and he needs to buy that physique thingy, if you make us wait too long it will lose its importance and that aspect will get boring. Update rate is great. Mc design is also good but needs improvement, we have seen some thoughts of MC about his past but no character developement(New continet ican be the reason of it) writing quality is good. Thats all for now, i shall return for a 3rd review once this novel is at chap 120+.
I like the story, it's entertaining. my problem is is the author continues to list stats that are pointless. nothing has changed. the character hasn't moved forward in their status and yet they'll list stats every chapter or twice in a chapter I've seen.
Chapter a7 seems super forced and confusing about how it comes together like the mom sold him out somehow and was somehow pretending all along
it was the perfect novel until I had to pay to read, now it's just excellent 🤣🤣🤣
it's a gem ,loved the plot,loved the writing style ,has a unique structure, solid 5/5 ⭐
Upload rate is good and stable if not perfect, information about world background is meh, blok has more than 30 chap and i think we deserve an Info dump but it is my personal opinion. As for character design, they have no depth but it is understandable since most of them are not even semi-permanent side characters but MC needs more depth (next arc can be the solution for this, something like training and buildimg foundation on a new continent, writing quality is good but a bit rough, story is not something original or dope but has potential just needs more details and depth that i hope soon would arrive.
So far, so good. Hopefully, the author doesn't drop off the face of the earth like most. The only thing that will keep me here since the premise of the book is great is the update stability of this book. Kindly keep up the good work and all the best.
Finally a great novel very interesting. Author don't drop and[img=recommend] continue to upload chapters daily don't be like other authors who upload a few chapters and don't bother to upload chapters for months.
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Ngl i thought it was just those copy & paste novels but nope this is much different and i like it very much. And i like that the mc behave like a child would behave. He feels real and emotionally And f**k the mother why would u do that to ur own child ps( i like that development though ) I like when the mc started going bullistic on his father just reading it u feel the mc's emotions , they where the emotions of a child. I give props for that U best not drop this author because you are on casp of makig a masterpiece here. Anyway good luck on the book hope to see more of that pls.
well what to say ....the gist of it is stick around for some agonizing chapters but u will finally find gold lol . the starting chapters r very rough , u can see very clearly that he is a beginner author .short chapters .. inconsistent (a bit) ... frustrating nerfing tactics ..sigh ....BUT it gets good eventually starting from about chapter 17 , it starts delivering what it promises bit by bit ...tho it still has a way to go i am very excited to keep on reading. u should definitely give it a try ....just get the imp parts of the starting chapters and ignore the annoying stuff ...cuz it won't really matter in the long run .
Story was good until chapter 30 with interesting plot and characters but from then on it just went downhill fast on one side you have literal adult woman offering to give bj and s*xually harassing a 9 year, and on the other you have illogical scenarios like there is this character that is Called Mary trying to kill MC who is Royal Subject, which is highest class in the story because she suspected him a 9 year old of impersonation and forgery a literal 9 year old no trial no nothing, and remember Mary isn't some type of police officer No she is just an office worker ,so an office worker was trying to kill a royal because she had some suspicion which then lead to mc getting nerfed like it feels like author regretted giving the mc these powers and is trying to pull every plot twist he can to nerf and balance it out somehow and cherry on the top mc is pervert like every time he sees a woman you are guaranteed to be given a 4 paragraph comment about her chest
揭示劇透 The first 20-30 chapters are ok but it starts eating away on your brain cells any later. The author probably has ADHD. Going off topic too add 3 unnecessary paragraphs to every paragraph. One single arc took about 30 chapters starting from chapter 20 and as i see it from the titles, it is gonna go on for a lot more. The writing style is annoying. Info dumps every now and then. It would be more practical to introduce new things when they are actually needed. Forinters or whatever were not needed here right now so it was pointless. The Academy introduction was pointless unless he went there or met someone from there. The plot is forced with the mother, the system shutting down and that Mary Woman in train station (you cant just kill a guy holding Royalty ID just cuz u suspect him, run a dna test, check account balance and confirm of he deserves to be royalty before fkin around). Anyway this was my review. This book got potential. Edit and change. Thats how it works. Imma drop it. Do let me know if it changes. Ill give it a read then. Thanks
ok so i'm honestly still early into the book so i can't give a very detailed review but what i can say is this book is a hidden gem . mc = perfection. the story is very well written and has a comedic side . keep up the good work author 👍[img=strong]
Great novel overall, when saw the title iIthougjt it was going to be one of the chinese face slapping novels, but the novel was surprisingly unique ; i haven't seen anything quite lile it.
from reading everything so far (chapter 11) I'm already in love with this novel, I love these types of novels that offer OP auxiliary help to the MC
The novel is really good but the only issue i have is that the author tends to "rant" a lot, especially in the world explanation and in filler chapters. It kinda kills the already built-up momentum like in the train ride where the MC and the officers just yap continuously for like 3-4 chapters. it might seem like you're giving details and more depth in the novel but it's more like embellishing unimportant parts of the novel. Overall i love the novel and it really has potential. These are just my takes😊
Well I guess the concept is good but Mc is too much of a crybaby in the early chapters like do you expect a Full grown man to cry like that, Not very realistic, Character development I guess it's good, reality checks are kinda annoying but life is often like that, Annoying, so that kinda adds some realistic points.
Soo.. yeah i bought privilage and read further novel chaps, you made some Info dump chaps dude and most people does not have "patience" to read through it BUT it is okay since you seem to be a new face in this business... Here is an advice about how to make better "Info dumps":you can distribute infos and write them part to part and integrate them to the story(this aldı adds some mystery but repetition of this method is a bad thing cuz it gets predictable and bores reader) rather than gibing Info in its bare form you can make us "feel" it through mcs pov( let MC explain it part bu part what he sees or feel of new continents structure for example, let him COOK) other than these, characters are still lacks some depth(as expected cuz story barely started) story needs some timekip and he needs to buy that physique thingy, if you make us wait too long it will lose its importance and that aspect will get boring. Update rate is great. Mc design is also good but needs improvement, we have seen some thoughts of MC about his past but no character developement(New continet ican be the reason of it) writing quality is good. Thats all for now, i shall return for a 3rd review once this novel is at chap 120+.
I like the story, it's entertaining. my problem is is the author continues to list stats that are pointless. nothing has changed. the character hasn't moved forward in their status and yet they'll list stats every chapter or twice in a chapter I've seen.
Chapter a7 seems super forced and confusing about how it comes together like the mom sold him out somehow and was somehow pretending all along
it was the perfect novel until I had to pay to read, now it's just excellent 🤣🤣🤣
it's a gem ,loved the plot,loved the writing style ,has a unique structure, solid 5/5 ⭐
Upload rate is good and stable if not perfect, information about world background is meh, blok has more than 30 chap and i think we deserve an Info dump but it is my personal opinion. As for character design, they have no depth but it is understandable since most of them are not even semi-permanent side characters but MC needs more depth (next arc can be the solution for this, something like training and buildimg foundation on a new continent, writing quality is good but a bit rough, story is not something original or dope but has potential just needs more details and depth that i hope soon would arrive.
So far, so good. Hopefully, the author doesn't drop off the face of the earth like most. The only thing that will keep me here since the premise of the book is great is the update stability of this book. Kindly keep up the good work and all the best.
Finally a great novel very interesting. Author don't drop and[img=recommend] continue to upload chapters daily don't be like other authors who upload a few chapters and don't bother to upload chapters for months.
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