4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
truly Masterpiece and Great story. [img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud] 18 days not chapter man do more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] write is great no mistake 😉 and author cook it.
It's a totally gripping and immersive piece of writing, the writing is great and the character design is even better, not to mention that the secondary characters are also very well written. I haven't come across any Itachi fanfic that was so well done and I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop it. I hope you don't get discouraged and drop it.
This is amazing, like the author's other works, the first 7 chapters are already showing that it is a banger in the making, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
truly Masterpiece and Great story. [img=proud][img=proud][img=proud][img=proud] 18 days not chapter man do more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] write is great no mistake 😉 and author cook it.
It's a totally gripping and immersive piece of writing, the writing is great and the character design is even better, not to mention that the secondary characters are also very well written. I haven't come across any Itachi fanfic that was so well done and I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop it. I hope you don't get discouraged and drop it.
This is amazing, like the author's other works, the first 7 chapters are already showing that it is a banger in the making, and I can't wait for the next chapter.