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this novel is clearly AI generated please try to make it appear human like 👍. But its a has a good storyline
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It's the mostly written by AI and the quality is bad i men very very bad 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
story is all over the place. MC who is a reincarnated Soul knows who his parents are so ther is no need to put that his ground shifted or his parantage in mystery etc...
sling ring???? you got be kidding me ..[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
after every paragraph there is an annoying monologue. is you would like to read a serious book, this is not for you. if you are 13 years old, you would probably enjoy this. if you like asoiaf or LOTR you will hate this
this novel is clearly AI generated please try to make it appear human like 👍. But its a has a good storyline
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It's the mostly written by AI and the quality is bad i men very very bad 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
story is all over the place. MC who is a reincarnated Soul knows who his parents are so ther is no need to put that his ground shifted or his parantage in mystery etc...
sling ring???? you got be kidding me ..[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
Very good story More chapter update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 🤩🤩🤩🤩😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍💯💯💯💯
after every paragraph there is an annoying monologue. is you would like to read a serious book, this is not for you. if you are 13 years old, you would probably enjoy this. if you like asoiaf or LOTR you will hate this