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i honestly this story was interesting to read from chapter 1-20.but after that it was very boring. the example of the plot was archaic it was too forced and very boring.
Not worth to read at all, the author looks like made the IA write a lot of the chapters, the characters are dumbed down or their personalitys change, bs after bs is pulled out like Nick fury having equipment that messes with magic fields or getting someone that can see the future of someone even ancient struggles too with the time stone, the mc is REALLY STUPID and the relations and friendships are as artificial as PRIME can be.
Usually I don't write reviews to complain, I just forget about it and remove from my library. But man this mc is dumb af. And the forced plots and everything, making me angry after each chapter. I'm sorry author bro, if you want to delete the review do it. I'm out ... It's actually 1 star review, but I didn't wanna make author feel bad more.
'Strongest Ninja' in the Marvel Universe doesn't sound very strong. Y know with the cosmic beings and all. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . ..
GPTness can get a bit much, but it's an okay read that has it's moments. Filler text for character count is a pain to create but alas, I really said all I had to say
This author is known to nerf all his MCs. Here too he nerfs the character very badly. He gives him uzumaki bloodline but the chakra increase after gaining the bloodline is only 4 times whereas normally it is 100 times stated in the manga. He still didn't get the bloodline completely just 50 percent. If you want a story with a good shinobi with powers then this isn't for you. He will also abandon this novel like all others he did in around 3 months. He may also delete this review. After chapter 49.
Loved it 🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽. One of the best fanfics on Webnovel. The plot keeps you on your toes, the MC is not a Gary Stu, Chinese young master, a psycho or a narcissist. He's a very relatable character with a likeable personality and pragmatic mindset. You won't regret reading this. Go for it.
This novel is pretty good, the only problem I could find is the fact that Tony is out of character, he's supposed to be snarky and filled with humor. Not like how he is now. He feels AI generated because of that.
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Feels like it’s written by an si or at least assisted by one. It’s so verbose with a lot of unneeded description just to fill in world count. Otherwise everything is good or has potential
It is very good until now. And it has a lot of potential. So please dont stop and please update daily if possible.[img=update][img=recommend]
Es un fanfic raro parece bueno pero ni un personaje de video juegos es tan exagerado con los encuentros. Si no tenes idea del mundo de Marvel entonces está bueno para leer
It is very good up until now, i don't know how it will be in future but i can feel it would be good because it has lot of potential. I need a bulk update if possible.
Overall good, I recommend reading the first 20 Chapters and then dropping it, or someone else could use the first 20 chapters as a template for the concept and ignore anything after that. Was a great read, and I highly anticipated what would happen next, at least until chapter 20, then it all went downhill in quality and creativity. Hope to see another fic that's like the first 20 chapters but actually continues phenomenally!
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The story is very good. Really very good. The protagonist is well developed and his progress, although slow, is just right. He still has 4 years before the events of 'Avengers 1' and he won't even participate, since he kind of can't. The only thing I have to complain about, for lack of a better word, is that some chapters are very short and some events that could be summarized in 1 or two chapters last longer. The time jumps are short. From time to time, you can skip 3 months and then say what was done in that time. I won't complain. So, the story is perfect. Hope you don't mess up, huh? There is. One suggestion from me is that he starts going after HYDRA bases or after the worst human beings in the world. Drug dealers, murderers, dictators and others. And for the costume, although I love Akatsuki's outfit, I would like to see him dressed as Red Hood with the red cloud symbol on the back. That's my assessment. To be continued. Please.
I like it )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))[img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]
I really like the concept of the story. I just hate his name i mean really Harry potter Williams the ninja -__-
I hope it creates a Ninja Faction something like the League of Assassins. I'm enjoying the way the story is going, I hope you continue it. (Google translate)
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i honestly this story was interesting to read from chapter 1-20.but after that it was very boring. the example of the plot was archaic it was too forced and very boring.
Not worth to read at all, the author looks like made the IA write a lot of the chapters, the characters are dumbed down or their personalitys change, bs after bs is pulled out like Nick fury having equipment that messes with magic fields or getting someone that can see the future of someone even ancient struggles too with the time stone, the mc is REALLY STUPID and the relations and friendships are as artificial as PRIME can be.
Usually I don't write reviews to complain, I just forget about it and remove from my library. But man this mc is dumb af. And the forced plots and everything, making me angry after each chapter. I'm sorry author bro, if you want to delete the review do it. I'm out ... It's actually 1 star review, but I didn't wanna make author feel bad more.
'Strongest Ninja' in the Marvel Universe doesn't sound very strong. Y know with the cosmic beings and all. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . .. . ..
GPTness can get a bit much, but it's an okay read that has it's moments. Filler text for character count is a pain to create but alas, I really said all I had to say
This author is known to nerf all his MCs. Here too he nerfs the character very badly. He gives him uzumaki bloodline but the chakra increase after gaining the bloodline is only 4 times whereas normally it is 100 times stated in the manga. He still didn't get the bloodline completely just 50 percent. If you want a story with a good shinobi with powers then this isn't for you. He will also abandon this novel like all others he did in around 3 months. He may also delete this review. After chapter 49.
Loved it 🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽🤌🏽. One of the best fanfics on Webnovel. The plot keeps you on your toes, the MC is not a Gary Stu, Chinese young master, a psycho or a narcissist. He's a very relatable character with a likeable personality and pragmatic mindset. You won't regret reading this. Go for it.
This novel is pretty good, the only problem I could find is the fact that Tony is out of character, he's supposed to be snarky and filled with humor. Not like how he is now. He feels AI generated because of that.
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Feels like it’s written by an si or at least assisted by one. It’s so verbose with a lot of unneeded description just to fill in world count. Otherwise everything is good or has potential
It is very good until now. And it has a lot of potential. So please dont stop and please update daily if possible.[img=update][img=recommend]
Es un fanfic raro parece bueno pero ni un personaje de video juegos es tan exagerado con los encuentros. Si no tenes idea del mundo de Marvel entonces está bueno para leer
It is very good up until now, i don't know how it will be in future but i can feel it would be good because it has lot of potential. I need a bulk update if possible.
Overall good, I recommend reading the first 20 Chapters and then dropping it, or someone else could use the first 20 chapters as a template for the concept and ignore anything after that. Was a great read, and I highly anticipated what would happen next, at least until chapter 20, then it all went downhill in quality and creativity. Hope to see another fic that's like the first 20 chapters but actually continues phenomenally!
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The story is very good. Really very good. The protagonist is well developed and his progress, although slow, is just right. He still has 4 years before the events of 'Avengers 1' and he won't even participate, since he kind of can't. The only thing I have to complain about, for lack of a better word, is that some chapters are very short and some events that could be summarized in 1 or two chapters last longer. The time jumps are short. From time to time, you can skip 3 months and then say what was done in that time. I won't complain. So, the story is perfect. Hope you don't mess up, huh? There is. One suggestion from me is that he starts going after HYDRA bases or after the worst human beings in the world. Drug dealers, murderers, dictators and others. And for the costume, although I love Akatsuki's outfit, I would like to see him dressed as Red Hood with the red cloud symbol on the back. That's my assessment. To be continued. Please.
I like it )))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))[img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]
I really like the concept of the story. I just hate his name i mean really Harry potter Williams the ninja -__-
I hope it creates a Ninja Faction something like the League of Assassins. I'm enjoying the way the story is going, I hope you continue it. (Google translate)
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