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Fue muy buena la forma en la que se establecio el personaje pero tiene los cliches clasicos: quiere con una sola pareja pero enamora a todas ,no muere sino se hace mas fuerte, poder debil que se hace fuerte ,enemigo al que humilla en reiteradas ocasiones etc...
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waaait a min... as far as i remember that trash harem tag wasnt there at the beginning...dayumn just wasted my time reading disgusting trash😒
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Fellow readers, I say that I transcended the moment I opened this novel on my digital device, just by reading this novel, I can say that I strained my brain so, so much that I can say with confidence that I can speak all different languages, just through this novel, that is, if you really want to make your brain boil just trying to understand this novel, I tell you, YOU ARE BRAVE !
The story itself is okay, the mc is a bit of a goody too shoes, but the depth of chinese martial arts culture is where this book really does shine, there's also limited character bashing (at this point at chapter 79)
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Fue muy buena la forma en la que se establecio el personaje pero tiene los cliches clasicos: quiere con una sola pareja pero enamora a todas ,no muere sino se hace mas fuerte, poder debil que se hace fuerte ,enemigo al que humilla en reiteradas ocasiones etc...
揭示劇透 I'm not a fan of Chinese robots, but this fanfic is just shedever!!! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong]
waaait a min... as far as i remember that trash harem tag wasnt there at the beginning...dayumn just wasted my time reading disgusting trash😒
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Fellow readers, I say that I transcended the moment I opened this novel on my digital device, just by reading this novel, I can say that I strained my brain so, so much that I can say with confidence that I can speak all different languages, just through this novel, that is, if you really want to make your brain boil just trying to understand this novel, I tell you, YOU ARE BRAVE !
The story itself is okay, the mc is a bit of a goody too shoes, but the depth of chinese martial arts culture is where this book really does shine, there's also limited character bashing (at this point at chapter 79)
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