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one of the best story i've read but withy current life i maybe not see the end I hope author still go on on updating this and not drop and thank for the story
The baseball story is amazing. However, with all due respect, author. This is not an action novel. Why do you involve SOOO much drama especially violate drama such as gang fights dragged over multiple chapters? It feels so out of place and the share amount of drama feels endless, like does he ever get a chance to focus on baseball? Either drama or his love trouble with Ai.
je ne suis pas fan du baseball, mais cette histoire est incroyable. c'est sans doute la meilleure histoire de système de sport que j'ai eu la chance de lire.
I absolutely love this novel, it scratches all the itches I have been craving. A well rounded protagonist who has goes through character development, a great supporting cast where it doesn’t feel like a bunch of recycled character. Good progression with enough action that always leaves me on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter. The author also has a very good schedule, updating very frequently. I can’t wait for more chapters to come
j'aime beaucoup ce novel que je lis de ça sortie, le seul défaut et le rythme que je trouve trop lente.
Best Sports novel on site. Absolutely loved the progression hoping for 21 chapters per week
If Ken has so many Maijor league points y does he not buy golden tickets and stack up on skills he has hella points but just waits to upgrade the whole system
"A Must-Read Thriller!" The story is so compelling and full of twists that you’ll lose track of time. This book proves why the thriller genre is so addictive.
I have a question, who is the real MC Ken or Daichi?, since while the MC had to kill himself training, Daichi with few trainings was already 10 steps above him. It seems like he is the reincarnation of Alex Rodriguez and Barry Bonds combined. I'm only on 50 chapters but he knows he's inferior to Daichi with his system and everything, and yet he takes it normal, any competitive athlete would feel frustrated by that.
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It’s a good book if you’re like me and love a good sports story. Baseball stories aren’t even something I lean towards but I’m hooked on this.
This novel? Chef's kiss. It has been awhile since I had sleepless nights to read a novel, and I forgot how exhilarating that could be. The action, the characters, the story; everything just pulls you in. The more I read, the more captivating it becomes. Now I can't help but wonder, what will I ever do once this novel ends...
It's difficult bro. I like everything about this novel. The writing is really good, characters are properly introduced. There are some inconsistencies for plot convenience like how Koshien pitches keeps throwing to guys who hit homeruns every at bat , but ignoring that, everything was great until i started feeling the pitfall of system novels. Mc in his first year became soo op that it became boring
cerita yang menarik untuk dibaca dan direkomendasikan untuk teman lainnya.
I read all 600 chapters currently out in one day. I woke up at noon and it is now 3 am.
Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition. It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements. I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work
Reading this novel, I have the same feeling as a watching an anime. exaggerated characters, plot armors, etc. can be seen very often. But it is not bad. After reading some chapters i really enjoyed it. But the story suddenly involved gangster elements out of no where. Although novel needs twist and spices to become enjoyable, gangster and yakuza plot felt like inappropriate. in my opinion, it would have been much better without it.
揭示劇透 the only thing breaking my immersion is, why is it that they don't walk heavy hitters, especially since it has reached highschool Arc. We already know they do from Carlos but why do they not walk the like of ken, hiruto and daiki
The story is good and I love it its well paced has interesting matches and the romance is done well My question is how fast do baseball players 17-18 year old's pitch
I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.
couldn't get through the start, none of the characters felt real and the friendship felt so unnatural and forced. Maybe it picks up later on but the first 40 chapters for me were boring
I really love this story keep it up please don’t skip days I read the new chapter within 20 minutes pretty much every time
i want to start it but before that i have 1q , is the romance good or slow and bad?..???????????????????????????????? (u can spoil) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author here. Originally I posted this story back in January, taking it down as it was in another competition. However, since I did not have any great success in said competition, I have decided to upload exclusively to Webnovel. First volume is complete and I will be releasing 2 chapters a day while I continue to write the Second volume. For those of you who have already read the first volume, there have been no changes so unless you wish to rehash what you've already read, then there's no need to read again. A few points to note below: No romance in first volume despite the romance tag. MC is in Middle School and I am not one to write such things. This is primarily a slice-of-life/youth drama novel, mixing School Life and competitive sports together. The book is based in Japan. Names are read as (First name, Family name) ie: Ken Takagi, Daichi Suzuki. There are some Japanese puns/references throughout which I do my best to explain afterwards, even if it takes some of the humor away from it. No I am not Japanese, however I do my best to research everything possible. Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the story. Please feel free to comment below or on any of the chapters should you feel the urge to, I'd be happy to answer them.
one of the best story i've read but withy current life i maybe not see the end I hope author still go on on updating this and not drop and thank for the story
The baseball story is amazing. However, with all due respect, author. This is not an action novel. Why do you involve SOOO much drama especially violate drama such as gang fights dragged over multiple chapters? It feels so out of place and the share amount of drama feels endless, like does he ever get a chance to focus on baseball? Either drama or his love trouble with Ai.
je ne suis pas fan du baseball, mais cette histoire est incroyable. c'est sans doute la meilleure histoire de système de sport que j'ai eu la chance de lire.
I absolutely love this novel, it scratches all the itches I have been craving. A well rounded protagonist who has goes through character development, a great supporting cast where it doesn’t feel like a bunch of recycled character. Good progression with enough action that always leaves me on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next chapter. The author also has a very good schedule, updating very frequently. I can’t wait for more chapters to come
j'aime beaucoup ce novel que je lis de ça sortie, le seul défaut et le rythme que je trouve trop lente.
Best Sports novel on site. Absolutely loved the progression hoping for 21 chapters per week
If Ken has so many Maijor league points y does he not buy golden tickets and stack up on skills he has hella points but just waits to upgrade the whole system
"A Must-Read Thriller!" The story is so compelling and full of twists that you’ll lose track of time. This book proves why the thriller genre is so addictive.
I have a question, who is the real MC Ken or Daichi?, since while the MC had to kill himself training, Daichi with few trainings was already 10 steps above him. It seems like he is the reincarnation of Alex Rodriguez and Barry Bonds combined. I'm only on 50 chapters but he knows he's inferior to Daichi with his system and everything, and yet he takes it normal, any competitive athlete would feel frustrated by that.
Enjoying the story.[img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
揭示劇透 It’s a good book if you’re like me and love a good sports story. Baseball stories aren’t even something I lean towards but I’m hooked on this.
This novel? Chef's kiss. It has been awhile since I had sleepless nights to read a novel, and I forgot how exhilarating that could be. The action, the characters, the story; everything just pulls you in. The more I read, the more captivating it becomes. Now I can't help but wonder, what will I ever do once this novel ends...
It's difficult bro. I like everything about this novel. The writing is really good, characters are properly introduced. There are some inconsistencies for plot convenience like how Koshien pitches keeps throwing to guys who hit homeruns every at bat , but ignoring that, everything was great until i started feeling the pitfall of system novels. Mc in his first year became soo op that it became boring
cerita yang menarik untuk dibaca dan direkomendasikan untuk teman lainnya.
I read all 600 chapters currently out in one day. I woke up at noon and it is now 3 am.
Great story, bro! I've really enjoyed it from the very first chapter to the latest one. You've got something special here. However, I have a suggestion: consider drawing inspiration from Japanese sports manga and anime, especially when it comes to adding emotional depth. Series like Diamond no Ace or Haikyuu!! excel at incorporating sad or challenging moments without diving too deep into dark themes. Right now, it feels like you're introducing some really heavy, dark elements that don't quite fit the tone of a sports story, which should be more about youth, energy, and the spirit of competition. It's totally fine to have the main character face struggles on their journey to the top, but there are more fitting ways to explore those setbacks without turning every 50 chapters into a tragedy. You’re crafting an excellent story, and I truly believe it could be even better if you lightened up on the darker elements. I love your work, and I genuinely appreciate your storytelling. I just wanted to share my thoughts because I think your story has the potential to be even more enjoyable. Keep up the great work
Reading this novel, I have the same feeling as a watching an anime. exaggerated characters, plot armors, etc. can be seen very often. But it is not bad. After reading some chapters i really enjoyed it. But the story suddenly involved gangster elements out of no where. Although novel needs twist and spices to become enjoyable, gangster and yakuza plot felt like inappropriate. in my opinion, it would have been much better without it.
揭示劇透 the only thing breaking my immersion is, why is it that they don't walk heavy hitters, especially since it has reached highschool Arc. We already know they do from Carlos but why do they not walk the like of ken, hiruto and daiki
The story is good and I love it its well paced has interesting matches and the romance is done well My question is how fast do baseball players 17-18 year old's pitch
I gave it 5 ratings earlier but I changed my mind. The story is greatly marred by unnecessary cringey romance, which could've been kept for 2 chapters max. The budding rivalry between the siblings was making this novel interesting but the author wants to cater to Wattpad and AO3 sort of readers. The FL is not even well written tbh. If it was the guy instead of the girl who kept chasing despite getting rejected many times, the readers would be calling him a creep. The author has tried to make her a pure hearted Goddess but she's just an annoying side character who exists to drag the story. I think I'll drop this. The romance is just too cringey. I wish it didn't have Wattpad elements.
couldn't get through the start, none of the characters felt real and the friendship felt so unnatural and forced. Maybe it picks up later on but the first 40 chapters for me were boring
I really love this story keep it up please don’t skip days I read the new chapter within 20 minutes pretty much every time
i want to start it but before that i have 1q , is the romance good or slow and bad?..???????????????????????????????? (u can spoil) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author here. Originally I posted this story back in January, taking it down as it was in another competition. However, since I did not have any great success in said competition, I have decided to upload exclusively to Webnovel. First volume is complete and I will be releasing 2 chapters a day while I continue to write the Second volume. For those of you who have already read the first volume, there have been no changes so unless you wish to rehash what you've already read, then there's no need to read again. A few points to note below: No romance in first volume despite the romance tag. MC is in Middle School and I am not one to write such things. This is primarily a slice-of-life/youth drama novel, mixing School Life and competitive sports together. The book is based in Japan. Names are read as (First name, Family name) ie: Ken Takagi, Daichi Suzuki. There are some Japanese puns/references throughout which I do my best to explain afterwards, even if it takes some of the humor away from it. No I am not Japanese, however I do my best to research everything possible. Most importantly, I hope you enjoy the story. Please feel free to comment below or on any of the chapters should you feel the urge to, I'd be happy to answer them.