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Ai yo! This is a very interesting premise from the author la! We meet the main character at the worst time in his life. And truthfully, he was like, "Ai yaaaaaaaahhhhhh." But then, he suddenly found himself in an interesting situation la! I can't tell you what it is, but highly recommend that you read. Story is very interesting and author writes with compelling language. Great job la!
I’ve deleted my first review. I’ve taken some stars off due to the obvious similarities to RotSSG. As mentioned in my original review the similarities can take you out of the story. That being said having reread 1100ish chapters I’ve come to realize why this story is so superior. At the time of writing the first review I had just started rereading RSSG and that may have coloured my opinion. The author attempts to write more compelling characters in his story and while some characters seem analogous at first glance to characters in the older series, you quickly see that they are much deeper. The similarities are shallow in every aspect. As soon as you leave the shallows and actually dive into the series you realize that you actually have a story. At the moment we’ve not seen any lost plot point, where the older series kept recycling plot points this series has kept things fresh, the similarities don’t make it to the plot. In short if we are to compare both stories, this newer book has better characters, characters that feel real and have goals. It has yet to recycle any plot points, if it ever does. Though the pace might be slightly slower due to developing its characters and plot.
why is a healer wearing classes can't he just heal his eyes lol.......................................................................................
Look, this story was great going up to chapter 440, then from there until 518 it was ONE SINGLE RAID.... Such an abrupt and drawn out delay in moving the story forward hurts like a MFer. Like, if this is the rest of the novel it is going to SUCK. And no author, I do not care about the fancy moves and sniffing out backstabbers. Could have made this whole 80 chapter stretch into 30 chapters and it would have been fine, but you did not, and after skipping well over half of those chapters I swear I will drop if something like this happens again. Again I say, 80 whole chapters of nothing but the same space, the same people, and almost no forward progress in any way during that time. Hell, of the chapters I did read I swear 6 or 8 of them could have been AT MOST 2 if you did not drag out the conversations over and over and over and over again.
I don't know, man... I knew it would be similar to TSSG after reading reviews and your comments, but I'm so damn disappointed. Reading it just makes me soooooo angry! You had everything at your disposal from TSSG - detailed world, excellent game mechanics, decent plot. Even though TSSG has it's own problems, I thought you would change it for the better and make a better version of TSSG.But the way you changed it, oh man, it sucks. Characters, story, world - everything there is to it is messed up. Its's just so frustrating 😞
MC is a groomer and a manipulator. Extremely greedy but spends insane quantities of money for no reason. Supposedly was an orphan, does not show. EXP makes 0 sense in this novel. million exp for 4-5, 10 million for 7 and so on, while quests, hard overlevelled large quests from rare NPC's will give you 10 000-15 000 exp, so absolutely nothing. MC gets an exp curse to reduce mob exp for 3 days by 99%, he also knows dying will remove any debuff and doesnt kill himself at level 1 for reasons unknown. MC is supposedly 9000 IQ, but really everyone around him has an IQ equal to their shoe size. Single raid can take like 150 chapters where most of the novel is just bla bla bla traitors and moles. Idk, just became very painful to read. Can't recommend
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The setting is good, the storyline has potential, but the MC is pretty boring. The MC is a liar and a thief. He signs a bad contract, deals with the consequences, and regresses. The outcomes isn’t even that poor. It’s just forced retirement. I didn’t get far enough into the story to see if there were other issues with the MC and the guild. However, with the MC personality he was most likely willingly doing anything that would be morally questionable. Examples are One of the first things he does is punch his best friend, lie, and steal. The MC keeps lying the entire time. He “tricks” NPCs with nonsensical things and it appears to be an attempt at being funny, but it falls flat for me. In one paragraph he says not to mess with NPCs and then in the same chapter he’s lying, stealing, and tricking the NPCs.
Author, how far is the story in? Is the plot still in the beginning, or already about to finish? spam spamspamspamspamspam spam spam spam spam
This novel delivers an engaging story with well-developed characters and a captivating plot. The author does a great job of building tension and keeping the reader interested from start to finish. The pacing is balanced, with moments of action, emotion, and intrigue woven together seamlessly. While some parts may feel predictable, the overall storytelling keeps you hooked, making it a satisfying read for fans of the genre. Whether you're new to the author or a longtime fan, this book is definitely worth picking up!
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You know, when I read the title for the first time, I thought to myself, why Min Byung Gyu (you know who 😉) couldn't reincarnated? 😭 This story has all the elements to get excited. Each chapter ends with giving you a drive to read the next one. I'm not giving any spoilers, nope! zipping it!
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
really good story but why the chapters are "blocked" 50 chapters prior. I can understand to give advantage to the one who pays but still... 50 chapters ... that's insane.. super sad 😢
[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞
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Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] First of all, if you have read Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God (RSSG), you might see similarity between these novels.. The MC of this novel is Xu Feng(real name)/Lin Feng (game name), while RSSG novel MC name is Ye Feng.. Same as Snow Wind (this novel) and Gentle Snow (RSSG).. They both VRMORG type of game.. Both MC are Regressor who regret a lot of their previous decision and get betrays by their own guild.. Both have one best friend.. Both do the 1st dungeon clearance.. Both are the first alchemist/ create pill.. BUT The storyline is quite different.. If you love RSSG, you will love this one too.. The pace is quite slow.. I guess it might follow the same path as RSSG, which has 3,900+ chapters and is still ongoing.. There was no instantaneous power up or power boost yet so far.. I am only disappointed that there are huge differences between privileges.. Like half of the novel ahead.. There are 106 chapters released, and only 56 chapters are accessible for non-privileges.. That is 50 chapters different between privileges and non-privileges, and don't forget, this novel just started.. Well, if you like this novel that much, you can just purchase the privileges.. But as I already read RSSG, I might continue reading this novel, but not to the point that I would go for privileges..
I love playing as support/healer in any game, so the premise is very interesting for me. You should give it a try too! Zhen is great at story telling!
A very good start. Although it's similar to RSSG, this novel has its own beauty. I'm excited how mc's fights will be executed since he's a healer. Hope it will be thousand chapters soon...
Drop the other books, read this one~ It's probably a lot better than what you're reading. Also, Zhao Kai 4 Life. I wave my Zhao Kai flag. Angry bear-man lovers unite!
This is very similar to RSSG, I hope there will be more differences in the future....... Overall a good start.................................
Reading until chapter 13 and i found my self was drawn into the story, it's been long time since the last time i'm reading vrmmorgp novel and when i reading this novel i quiet like it. waiting for future update!
the theme is nice. and the intro of the characters are good as well. I'm picky when it comes to punctuation and all so, don't mind that. But great Job!
I am amazed by the great skills in writing! I am so curious to find out what happened to the best friend and all the mysteries about his disappearing . 💕🙏
I love reading novels that implement gaming systems but not many usually grab my attention past the third chapter. The author had me reading this in the middle of class. I enjoyed each aspect and our MC is so funny at times. I can’t wait for more chapters!
As a reader of VMMORPGs, I think this started well enough. While it did feel a little slow at first (a lot of exposition in the first several chaps) I guess many of the concepts introduced would be integral in the latter part of the story. An overall interesting read and worth a try for people who like this genre.
A refreshing take on the VR regression novel genre, with a healer as the archetype. Story flows well and the charecters mesh properly. Looking forward to reading more.
Read it. Nothing else to say. This is written by the only man that I respect and follow. The master of them all. I'm his number one glazer and will remain like that until the end of my life. His novel is peak. You're wrong if you say otherwise.
First! Hehehohohuhuha!!!! Obligatory warning and notice that this review will contain spoilers!!! You have been warned!!! Maaaaan this novel right here? Chefs kiss!!!! Xu Feng is an amazing MC and Zhen has done some magic creating him and giving him life! Zhao Kai is definitely best bro! His interactions with Xu are realistic, wholesome, and honestly? Exactly what you’d expect from your best bro! We learn that he wasn’t in Xu’s life before his reincarnation, so we definitely need to save him this time around! Poor Xu got cheated out his guild and knew there was no point to starting over, but guess what? He went back in time, so now we get to see how much stronger he will become with all his knowledge! The writing is impeccable, the pacing is perfect, the plot is juicy, and the characters, even though we really only have two atm, are amazing! Honestly, I expected nothing less, and can’t wait to see how far this goes, definitely a strong contender! Keep up the amazing work and what are you doing still reading this? Shoooo!!!! Get in there and read for yourself how great this masterpiece is!!!
Ai yo! This is a very interesting premise from the author la! We meet the main character at the worst time in his life. And truthfully, he was like, "Ai yaaaaaaaahhhhhh." But then, he suddenly found himself in an interesting situation la! I can't tell you what it is, but highly recommend that you read. Story is very interesting and author writes with compelling language. Great job la!
I’ve deleted my first review. I’ve taken some stars off due to the obvious similarities to RotSSG. As mentioned in my original review the similarities can take you out of the story. That being said having reread 1100ish chapters I’ve come to realize why this story is so superior. At the time of writing the first review I had just started rereading RSSG and that may have coloured my opinion. The author attempts to write more compelling characters in his story and while some characters seem analogous at first glance to characters in the older series, you quickly see that they are much deeper. The similarities are shallow in every aspect. As soon as you leave the shallows and actually dive into the series you realize that you actually have a story. At the moment we’ve not seen any lost plot point, where the older series kept recycling plot points this series has kept things fresh, the similarities don’t make it to the plot. In short if we are to compare both stories, this newer book has better characters, characters that feel real and have goals. It has yet to recycle any plot points, if it ever does. Though the pace might be slightly slower due to developing its characters and plot.
why is a healer wearing classes can't he just heal his eyes lol.......................................................................................
Look, this story was great going up to chapter 440, then from there until 518 it was ONE SINGLE RAID.... Such an abrupt and drawn out delay in moving the story forward hurts like a MFer. Like, if this is the rest of the novel it is going to SUCK. And no author, I do not care about the fancy moves and sniffing out backstabbers. Could have made this whole 80 chapter stretch into 30 chapters and it would have been fine, but you did not, and after skipping well over half of those chapters I swear I will drop if something like this happens again. Again I say, 80 whole chapters of nothing but the same space, the same people, and almost no forward progress in any way during that time. Hell, of the chapters I did read I swear 6 or 8 of them could have been AT MOST 2 if you did not drag out the conversations over and over and over and over again.
I don't know, man... I knew it would be similar to TSSG after reading reviews and your comments, but I'm so damn disappointed. Reading it just makes me soooooo angry! You had everything at your disposal from TSSG - detailed world, excellent game mechanics, decent plot. Even though TSSG has it's own problems, I thought you would change it for the better and make a better version of TSSG.But the way you changed it, oh man, it sucks. Characters, story, world - everything there is to it is messed up. Its's just so frustrating 😞
MC is a groomer and a manipulator. Extremely greedy but spends insane quantities of money for no reason. Supposedly was an orphan, does not show. EXP makes 0 sense in this novel. million exp for 4-5, 10 million for 7 and so on, while quests, hard overlevelled large quests from rare NPC's will give you 10 000-15 000 exp, so absolutely nothing. MC gets an exp curse to reduce mob exp for 3 days by 99%, he also knows dying will remove any debuff and doesnt kill himself at level 1 for reasons unknown. MC is supposedly 9000 IQ, but really everyone around him has an IQ equal to their shoe size. Single raid can take like 150 chapters where most of the novel is just bla bla bla traitors and moles. Idk, just became very painful to read. Can't recommend
揭示劇透 The setting is good, the storyline has potential, but the MC is pretty boring. The MC is a liar and a thief. He signs a bad contract, deals with the consequences, and regresses. The outcomes isn’t even that poor. It’s just forced retirement. I didn’t get far enough into the story to see if there were other issues with the MC and the guild. However, with the MC personality he was most likely willingly doing anything that would be morally questionable. Examples are One of the first things he does is punch his best friend, lie, and steal. The MC keeps lying the entire time. He “tricks” NPCs with nonsensical things and it appears to be an attempt at being funny, but it falls flat for me. In one paragraph he says not to mess with NPCs and then in the same chapter he’s lying, stealing, and tricking the NPCs.
Author, how far is the story in? Is the plot still in the beginning, or already about to finish? spam spamspamspamspamspam spam spam spam spam
This novel delivers an engaging story with well-developed characters and a captivating plot. The author does a great job of building tension and keeping the reader interested from start to finish. The pacing is balanced, with moments of action, emotion, and intrigue woven together seamlessly. While some parts may feel predictable, the overall storytelling keeps you hooked, making it a satisfying read for fans of the genre. Whether you're new to the author or a longtime fan, this book is definitely worth picking up!
揭示劇透 You know, when I read the title for the first time, I thought to myself, why Min Byung Gyu (you know who 😉) couldn't reincarnated? 😭 This story has all the elements to get excited. Each chapter ends with giving you a drive to read the next one. I'm not giving any spoilers, nope! zipping it!
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
really good story but why the chapters are "blocked" 50 chapters prior. I can understand to give advantage to the one who pays but still... 50 chapters ... that's insane.. super sad 😢
[Review from a reader at Chapter 10] There are a few things that i don't really like in the story so far. 1. The Chapter 1 of this story is uncomfortably similar to the first chapter of RSSG. The structure and the sequence. 2. So far (Chapter 10), the characters are 2D. I mean they sound so bland 3. The flow of the story is like a paper filled with holes. The thought process is always broken and made the story painfully bland to me. So far, that's the things i noticed in the story. Despite all of this, i will continue reading this hoping that the author will improve. I'll make another review once i reach Chapter 50. Sorry for this review, Author 😞
揭示劇透 Honest reviews are here.. [Spoiler Alert] First of all, if you have read Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God (RSSG), you might see similarity between these novels.. The MC of this novel is Xu Feng(real name)/Lin Feng (game name), while RSSG novel MC name is Ye Feng.. Same as Snow Wind (this novel) and Gentle Snow (RSSG).. They both VRMORG type of game.. Both MC are Regressor who regret a lot of their previous decision and get betrays by their own guild.. Both have one best friend.. Both do the 1st dungeon clearance.. Both are the first alchemist/ create pill.. BUT The storyline is quite different.. If you love RSSG, you will love this one too.. The pace is quite slow.. I guess it might follow the same path as RSSG, which has 3,900+ chapters and is still ongoing.. There was no instantaneous power up or power boost yet so far.. I am only disappointed that there are huge differences between privileges.. Like half of the novel ahead.. There are 106 chapters released, and only 56 chapters are accessible for non-privileges.. That is 50 chapters different between privileges and non-privileges, and don't forget, this novel just started.. Well, if you like this novel that much, you can just purchase the privileges.. But as I already read RSSG, I might continue reading this novel, but not to the point that I would go for privileges..
I love playing as support/healer in any game, so the premise is very interesting for me. You should give it a try too! Zhen is great at story telling!
A very good start. Although it's similar to RSSG, this novel has its own beauty. I'm excited how mc's fights will be executed since he's a healer. Hope it will be thousand chapters soon...
Drop the other books, read this one~ It's probably a lot better than what you're reading. Also, Zhao Kai 4 Life. I wave my Zhao Kai flag. Angry bear-man lovers unite!
This is very similar to RSSG, I hope there will be more differences in the future....... Overall a good start.................................
Reading until chapter 13 and i found my self was drawn into the story, it's been long time since the last time i'm reading vrmmorgp novel and when i reading this novel i quiet like it. waiting for future update!
the theme is nice. and the intro of the characters are good as well. I'm picky when it comes to punctuation and all so, don't mind that. But great Job!
I am amazed by the great skills in writing! I am so curious to find out what happened to the best friend and all the mysteries about his disappearing . 💕🙏
I love reading novels that implement gaming systems but not many usually grab my attention past the third chapter. The author had me reading this in the middle of class. I enjoyed each aspect and our MC is so funny at times. I can’t wait for more chapters!
As a reader of VMMORPGs, I think this started well enough. While it did feel a little slow at first (a lot of exposition in the first several chaps) I guess many of the concepts introduced would be integral in the latter part of the story. An overall interesting read and worth a try for people who like this genre.
A refreshing take on the VR regression novel genre, with a healer as the archetype. Story flows well and the charecters mesh properly. Looking forward to reading more.
Read it. Nothing else to say. This is written by the only man that I respect and follow. The master of them all. I'm his number one glazer and will remain like that until the end of my life. His novel is peak. You're wrong if you say otherwise.
First! Hehehohohuhuha!!!! Obligatory warning and notice that this review will contain spoilers!!! You have been warned!!! Maaaaan this novel right here? Chefs kiss!!!! Xu Feng is an amazing MC and Zhen has done some magic creating him and giving him life! Zhao Kai is definitely best bro! His interactions with Xu are realistic, wholesome, and honestly? Exactly what you’d expect from your best bro! We learn that he wasn’t in Xu’s life before his reincarnation, so we definitely need to save him this time around! Poor Xu got cheated out his guild and knew there was no point to starting over, but guess what? He went back in time, so now we get to see how much stronger he will become with all his knowledge! The writing is impeccable, the pacing is perfect, the plot is juicy, and the characters, even though we really only have two atm, are amazing! Honestly, I expected nothing less, and can’t wait to see how far this goes, definitely a strong contender! Keep up the amazing work and what are you doing still reading this? Shoooo!!!! Get in there and read for yourself how great this masterpiece is!!!