3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
the story is great, however simplicity is needed to enjoy the novel. In my opinion, a balance is needed to enjoy reading but in most chapters I have read, most of the words are not words persons would use in a natural conversation. It is tiring reading so I have the author does something about it otherwise I will have to drop it. This is sad since the story line is really likable.
Nice one👍 story is interesting, english is good 👍 author your wrting is fantastic👏👏👏 hopefully story will not stop midway??? Thanks love itttttt😀😀😀
the story is great, however simplicity is needed to enjoy the novel. In my opinion, a balance is needed to enjoy reading but in most chapters I have read, most of the words are not words persons would use in a natural conversation. It is tiring reading so I have the author does something about it otherwise I will have to drop it. This is sad since the story line is really likable.
Nice one👍 story is interesting, english is good 👍 author your wrting is fantastic👏👏👏 hopefully story will not stop midway??? Thanks love itttttt😀😀😀