3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you. I hope you will like the book if you give power stone or golden tickets I will release extra chapter and there will be 7 chapters release per week
so far I really wnjoy the development seen in the characters, even with the time skip. The writing and grammar has been good so far and I'm excited to see more!
The main issue I have is with Lydia. People may not get along and I understand that Lydia is alone, but she misses her status and needs to outnumber someone before attacking. Somehow mc is attracted, but even then when Lydia talks, she always makes herself be in the right. Every person is always on Lydia's side, even the mother of the mc and makes it out to be both of their faults.
Hello! This is my newest book; I hope you will like it. To support me, please send powerstones and help spread the word about the story. What are my thoughts on the book? In my opinion did a decent job, but ultimately, the final say is up to you. I hope you will like the book if you give power stone or golden tickets I will release extra chapter and there will be 7 chapters release per week
so far I really wnjoy the development seen in the characters, even with the time skip. The writing and grammar has been good so far and I'm excited to see more!
The main issue I have is with Lydia. People may not get along and I understand that Lydia is alone, but she misses her status and needs to outnumber someone before attacking. Somehow mc is attracted, but even then when Lydia talks, she always makes herself be in the right. Every person is always on Lydia's side, even the mother of the mc and makes it out to be both of their faults.