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LV 15 ![Badge]()
👎🏻 inconsistent names and nouns. Story line seems pretty bad so far too with the constant scheming and just not making any sense.
LV 13 ![Badge]()
The only downfall that I really can't stand about this book is the author talks too much about irrelevant things that have nothing to do with the story inside the chapters therefore taking up word space. there's a little bit of gramical issues here and there but the characters design and world story is really fascinating. it's a simple story but at the same time it's got me coming back to keep reading more chapters to see how everything develops.
LV 15 ![Badge]()
👎🏻 inconsistent names and nouns. Story line seems pretty bad so far too with the constant scheming and just not making any sense.
The only downfall that I really can't stand about this book is the author talks too much about irrelevant things that have nothing to do with the story inside the chapters therefore taking up word space. there's a little bit of gramical issues here and there but the characters design and world story is really fascinating. it's a simple story but at the same time it's got me coming back to keep reading more chapters to see how everything develops.