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I really like novels which do not have a fixed mc. Author has brilliantly done this here. 10/10 recommendation if u are a fan of world building and suspense scenes . Pls don't drop this
I'm a fan from your previous works (Batman in MCU, Eren yeager one and the other ones) so i'm looking foward to see the changes. A mysterious first chapter, hope we can have a long story ahead
enjoying this so far, gunna keep reading... so I decided starts for writer now
a very novel and interesting concept, with a well written story. the premise is very intriguing. i look forward to the updates, and hopefully it wont be dropped.
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Very good, original, no evident grammar mistake but i can't really judge as English is my third language. Dont bother guessing why its marked under spoiler
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good potential, interesting background. do not give up.............................................................................................
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I really like novels which do not have a fixed mc. Author has brilliantly done this here. 10/10 recommendation if u are a fan of world building and suspense scenes . Pls don't drop this
I'm a fan from your previous works (Batman in MCU, Eren yeager one and the other ones) so i'm looking foward to see the changes. A mysterious first chapter, hope we can have a long story ahead
enjoying this so far, gunna keep reading... so I decided starts for writer now
a very novel and interesting concept, with a well written story. the premise is very intriguing. i look forward to the updates, and hopefully it wont be dropped.
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揭示劇透 Very good, original, no evident grammar mistake but i can't really judge as English is my third language. Dont bother guessing why its marked under spoiler
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揭示劇透 good potential, interesting background. do not give up.............................................................................................
While writing a review, consider this- I am not a professional author, and I correct mistakes raised in paragraph comments. I also have a record of dropping fics due to low comments, so what score of your review will be appreciated? A five out of five, or a four? . postscript- (another thing might be how I don't consider the scenario where this fic receives a three) post postscript- (Another thing to consider is how I don't even imagine getting a two even in my postscript) post post postscript- (you know what is the purpose of the post post postscript, don't you?)