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no es mi tipo de lectura, pero es muy entretenido y me gusta que el autor le agregué a la trama sus toques , creo que sí has visto la serie te guste o disguste no se, me parece muy entretenido. ojo no es la gran novela pero creo que es mejor que el promedio, dale una oportunidad 👍👍👍
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I’m really into the concept. Raj has always been an underused character, and seeing him finally get some depth is exciting. His new confident side is a fun twist, but I’m glad he’s still the same lovable geek we know. Keep it focused on Raj’s growth and new dynamics, and I’m totally on board for what’s next.
Without a doubt the best TBBT fic, at least of the few I've seen. It's interesting how Raj still has his essence even though he receives memories from someone else, how his personality changes, but he also maintains his essence.
only on the first chapter, but it doesn't feel like a reincarnation, just that he got someone else's memory that's it
Aunque no he visto la serie más allá de clips me está gustando mucho la novela jaja, hice esta imagen portada, ojalá te guste, no soy muy bueno en eso de poner cabezas sobre otro cuerpo pero intento mejorar
muy buena historia, me parece increíble y me gusta mucho que le des recuerdos y personalidad diferente sin incluir nada del futuro o la trama, aunque es algo inconsistente la personalidad que fluctúa mucho, no sé si esa es tu intención pero le da algo más de color a el personaje. buen trabajo amigo
Not very interesting. This story doesn't seem to be about Raj. The other three seem to have more scenes than Raj who looks like a background character in his own story. When we finally get chapters about Raj it isn't him talking to girls, making advancements at work, it's all with a stupid motorcycle gang. Raj's whole new personality revolves around a motorcycle and it just doesn't seem like TBBT, more like sons of anarchy.
The fanfic is amazing; there aren’t many fanfics about *The Big Bang Theory*, and yours is incredibly realistic. I liked the character of Raj on the show, but they really didn’t do justice to him until the end of the series. I’m glad someone finally gave him the justice he deserves. I wish I could put the author in a jar and make them keep writing. I can’t wait for more!
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absolutly loving it thanka author please keep going i cant wait for more !!
i really like this story, espacially the Raj self insert, because it changes him but main character traits of Raj are still there, which i like. Keep up the good work
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Awesome story keep up the good work 👍[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=update][img=update]
In the most recent chapter, 11. If you want Missy Cooper to be his girlfriend, you need make Raj taller, at least 5'10, as she is 5'9. I think the stories thus far are still enjoyable for me. However, regarding David's previous memories, perhaps you could write a chapter about his background so that we might learn more about him.
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If I am to keep my review, brief; this is simply just a story with a well defined plot and properly developed protagonist
i havent read this yet but take my stones we cant let another tbbt fanfic to die there arent many tbbt fanfics out there in the first place.................
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very good idea to use a character different from the one normally used and very well executed, hoping for more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GOOD,WANTO MORE!!!!!!!!!!
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hasta ahora no me aburro de leer cada capitulo, es como un cambio completo de los personajes y el potencial que llevan guardando. [img=recomendar]
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its good, amazing grammers (from my perspective) amazing character development of raj according to the situation and little character development of the crew to is amazing.
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I wasn’t going to do a review of the book, but I had nothing else to do… it’s good because I can already share some curiosities about the book with you. 1- I opened a poll to decide who would be the FML of the book, and most people chose Missy Cooper, so it’ll be her. I’ll try to create a good relationship between the two; I’m confident about the dynamics, I have lots of ideas. 2- Raj’s personality will be improved in this fanfic, but he’ll still be the same funny Raj from the series because, after all, we like him for his personality. 3- For now, there won’t be too many OCs, but I created a few, and they will be important at a certain point. 4- This fanfic is completely a product of my mind. I only use AI to help provide some of Sheldon’s dialogues since I’m not smart enough to come up with those on my own. So you won’t see typical phrases like “With a determined look” or anything like that, but you will read some repeated lines, as I’m just a humble amateur author… 5- Chapter updates will happen almost every day; it’s rare for me to go three days without publishing something. 6- At the end of each chapter, I hope you’ve at least had a laugh. After all, I’m writing a comedy fanfic. This is all purely for fun, the chapters will be free, and there won’t be a Patreon. If you want to support the author, just leave a positive comment, and I’ll already be happy.
no es mi tipo de lectura, pero es muy entretenido y me gusta que el autor le agregué a la trama sus toques , creo que sí has visto la serie te guste o disguste no se, me parece muy entretenido. ojo no es la gran novela pero creo que es mejor que el promedio, dale una oportunidad 👍👍👍
............... ...............S2......................................... ......................................................................S2........
I’m really into the concept. Raj has always been an underused character, and seeing him finally get some depth is exciting. His new confident side is a fun twist, but I’m glad he’s still the same lovable geek we know. Keep it focused on Raj’s growth and new dynamics, and I’m totally on board for what’s next.
Without a doubt the best TBBT fic, at least of the few I've seen. It's interesting how Raj still has his essence even though he receives memories from someone else, how his personality changes, but he also maintains his essence.
only on the first chapter, but it doesn't feel like a reincarnation, just that he got someone else's memory that's it
Aunque no he visto la serie más allá de clips me está gustando mucho la novela jaja, hice esta imagen portada, ojalá te guste, no soy muy bueno en eso de poner cabezas sobre otro cuerpo pero intento mejorar
muy buena historia, me parece increíble y me gusta mucho que le des recuerdos y personalidad diferente sin incluir nada del futuro o la trama, aunque es algo inconsistente la personalidad que fluctúa mucho, no sé si esa es tu intención pero le da algo más de color a el personaje. buen trabajo amigo
Not very interesting. This story doesn't seem to be about Raj. The other three seem to have more scenes than Raj who looks like a background character in his own story. When we finally get chapters about Raj it isn't him talking to girls, making advancements at work, it's all with a stupid motorcycle gang. Raj's whole new personality revolves around a motorcycle and it just doesn't seem like TBBT, more like sons of anarchy.
The fanfic is amazing; there aren’t many fanfics about *The Big Bang Theory*, and yours is incredibly realistic. I liked the character of Raj on the show, but they really didn’t do justice to him until the end of the series. I’m glad someone finally gave him the justice he deserves. I wish I could put the author in a jar and make them keep writing. I can’t wait for more!
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absolutly loving it thanka author please keep going i cant wait for more !!
i really like this story, espacially the Raj self insert, because it changes him but main character traits of Raj are still there, which i like. Keep up the good work
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Awesome story keep up the good work 👍[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=update][img=update]
In the most recent chapter, 11. If you want Missy Cooper to be his girlfriend, you need make Raj taller, at least 5'10, as she is 5'9. I think the stories thus far are still enjoyable for me. However, regarding David's previous memories, perhaps you could write a chapter about his background so that we might learn more about him.
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If I am to keep my review, brief; this is simply just a story with a well defined plot and properly developed protagonist
i havent read this yet but take my stones we cant let another tbbt fanfic to die there arent many tbbt fanfics out there in the first place.................
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very good idea to use a character different from the one normally used and very well executed, hoping for more.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!GOOD,WANTO MORE!!!!!!!!!!
more more more&more more&more more&more more&more more more more&more more&more more&more more&more more more more&more more&more more&more more&more
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hasta ahora no me aburro de leer cada capitulo, es como un cambio completo de los personajes y el potencial que llevan guardando. [img=recomendar]
揭示劇透 its good, amazing grammers (from my perspective) amazing character development of raj according to the situation and little character development of the crew to is amazing.
[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
I wasn’t going to do a review of the book, but I had nothing else to do… it’s good because I can already share some curiosities about the book with you. 1- I opened a poll to decide who would be the FML of the book, and most people chose Missy Cooper, so it’ll be her. I’ll try to create a good relationship between the two; I’m confident about the dynamics, I have lots of ideas. 2- Raj’s personality will be improved in this fanfic, but he’ll still be the same funny Raj from the series because, after all, we like him for his personality. 3- For now, there won’t be too many OCs, but I created a few, and they will be important at a certain point. 4- This fanfic is completely a product of my mind. I only use AI to help provide some of Sheldon’s dialogues since I’m not smart enough to come up with those on my own. So you won’t see typical phrases like “With a determined look” or anything like that, but you will read some repeated lines, as I’m just a humble amateur author… 5- Chapter updates will happen almost every day; it’s rare for me to go three days without publishing something. 6- At the end of each chapter, I hope you’ve at least had a laugh. After all, I’m writing a comedy fanfic. This is all purely for fun, the chapters will be free, and there won’t be a Patreon. If you want to support the author, just leave a positive comment, and I’ll already be happy.