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摘要
A man in his mid-20s got sent to the wheel of reincarnation for his soul to reincarnate thanks to the mistake of a little employee of the gods he got a chance to live a second life with some perks and his memory intact. Follow Ace as he carves his path in his new life!
a little message from the author here: this is my first try at writing so please be gentle with me xD also English is not my first language so if I make any mistake and my prose seems basic I'm sorry and I'll try to grow better as the story goes. Thank you!
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The grammar is really bad. It's also hard to tell who's talking a lot of the times, there needs do be less of those long paragraphs because it makes the dialogue difficult to read. But besides all that I am enjoying it so far and I hope the author continues and improves.
shameless author review here so that i can at least have 1 review on my work xD
I love this one of the more romantic works I've seen in this genre of rebirth entertainment I've read I just hope the author pics it up again
卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1:Did they forgot about me... 11 months ago
- 2 Chapter 2:New life... 11 months ago
- 3 Chapter 3: On my way to my new home 11 months ago
- 4 Chapter 4:New home 11 months ago
- 5 Chapter 5: 1 year birthday party and first system mission 11 months ago
- 6 Chapter 6: 14 years time skip and updated status 11 months ago
- 7 Chapter 7 : Exams day and little incident 11 months ago
- 8 Chapter 8: End of summer as a deadline 11 months ago
- 9 Chapter 9: Test result and discrepancy 11 months ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Decision and talk with Uncle 11 months ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Scarlett and travelling 11 months ago
- 12 Chapter 12: Welcome to the U.S 11 months ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Having fun at rucker park and First friend! 11 months ago
- 14 Chapter 14: A day bonding with new friends 11 months ago
- 15 Chapter 15: everyone thoughts 10 months ago
- 16 Chapter 16: 2 long weeks and travelling sooner than expected 10 months ago
- 17 Chapiter 17: Making plans 10 months ago
- 18 Chapter 18: Making plans 2 10 months ago
- 19 Chapter 19: Honest feelings 10 months ago
- 20 Chapter 20: First meeting with mother-in-law and dropping a bomb 10 months ago
- 21 Chapter 21: Mother vs Daughter 10 months ago
- 22 Chapter 22: Making a call and showing off my culinary skills 10 months ago
- 23 Chapter 23: Pseudonym And song 10 months ago
- 24 Chapter 24: First night under the same roof 10 months ago
- 25 Chapter 25: Shopping day 10 months ago
- 26 Chapter 26: 1st NBA game and Harlem's thieves 10 months ago
- 27 Chapter 27: Nets vs Cavaliers 10 months ago
- 28 Chapter 28: Girl talk 10 months ago
- 29 Chapter 29: 1 week later and 1st meeting 10 months ago
- 30 Chapter 30: Songs release 10 months ago
- 31 Chapter 31: making the buzz and talent 10 months ago
- 32 Chapter 32: Family time 10 months ago
- 33 Chapter 33: Treated like a Queen 10 months ago
- 34 Chapter 34: On our way to Smith's island 10 months ago
- 35 Chapter 35: Back home 10 months ago
- 36 Chapter 36: Warm welcome 10 months ago
- 37 Chapter 37: Unreliable allies 10 months ago
- 38 Chapter 38: Magic Night (R-18) 10 months ago
- 39 Chapter 39: Start of the school year 10 months ago
- 40 Chapter 40: Teasing my Best friend (Alicia P.O.V) 10 months ago
- 41 Chapter 41: Emily's reactions 10 months ago
super fire I'm a fan but please improve the writing other than that everything else is amazing go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go