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Nice idea, excellent creativity, i love the book author. Also, is there a chance i could get the former picture you put up of the MC. The one with blue cloud like pigment aroud him?
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I really enjoyed reading the story, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus theme story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
quite an interesting book you have here, I like the aspect of conquering the whole world. another good thing to point out would be the SYSTEM---- it's different from the usual you see nowadays.......it doesn't spoon feed our main character everything ....that i quite like....i am very excited to see how will the story unfold. here is a suggestion i would like to give------plz don't make our character a one man army....he is trying to conquer a world....and no one can conquer a whole world by themselves...he should build an army of SPIRITS BEASTS as well as his COMPANIONS as well......i would love to see a proper kingdom building in making here.
So, read the available chapters. Perfectly written and interesting so far. The world looks interesting, spirits and stuff seems intriguing . Anyway I am waiting for more chapters to be release.👊❤️
I have actually read alpha version of this book before purple release it, and I have to say he improved a lot in it... the scenes are still rough around the edges, but the writing quantity is makes up for that... only few chapters now, but it's truly fast paced... give it a try for a few chapters and you'll know whether it's for you or not.... goodluck purple...
Read the available chapters, so far it's a really intriguing read. The writing is really good, and the grammar is perfect. Would recommend 10/10!
Author here with da mandatory five-star review to help you out. First of all: No harem, No snu snu, No nothing (get ya mind out of the gutter). MC, well, my MC is coolio. He's not an outright bad person or a good dude. So this is not the place for a morally black main character, but it might still be for you! Last of all, expect a lot of kingly behaviour in this book, and a lot of cool scenes and stuff that kings would do! Don't know what kings would do? Just read it then!
Nice idea, excellent creativity, i love the book author. Also, is there a chance i could get the former picture you put up of the MC. The one with blue cloud like pigment aroud him?
揭示劇透 I really enjoyed reading the story, I hope the author doesn't drop it. Just in case you're a lover of an erotic, succubus theme story, then 'My perfect demon' is definitely a book you should read. Trust me, you'll love it.
quite an interesting book you have here, I like the aspect of conquering the whole world. another good thing to point out would be the SYSTEM---- it's different from the usual you see nowadays.......it doesn't spoon feed our main character everything ....that i quite like....i am very excited to see how will the story unfold. here is a suggestion i would like to give------plz don't make our character a one man army....he is trying to conquer a world....and no one can conquer a whole world by themselves...he should build an army of SPIRITS BEASTS as well as his COMPANIONS as well......i would love to see a proper kingdom building in making here.
So, read the available chapters. Perfectly written and interesting so far. The world looks interesting, spirits and stuff seems intriguing . Anyway I am waiting for more chapters to be release.👊❤️
I have actually read alpha version of this book before purple release it, and I have to say he improved a lot in it... the scenes are still rough around the edges, but the writing quantity is makes up for that... only few chapters now, but it's truly fast paced... give it a try for a few chapters and you'll know whether it's for you or not.... goodluck purple...
Read the available chapters, so far it's a really intriguing read. The writing is really good, and the grammar is perfect. Would recommend 10/10!
Author here with da mandatory five-star review to help you out. First of all: No harem, No snu snu, No nothing (get ya mind out of the gutter). MC, well, my MC is coolio. He's not an outright bad person or a good dude. So this is not the place for a morally black main character, but it might still be for you! Last of all, expect a lot of kingly behaviour in this book, and a lot of cool scenes and stuff that kings would do! Don't know what kings would do? Just read it then!