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寫檢討
rather boring development and a let down of an mc honestly. also the system seems rather unimpressive considering its name and origin... :/ new concept in a way for a character start but welp the way it develops its best to save the time and not read it to be getting disappointed by this kind of mc
揭示劇透
This is one of the most interesting DxD fanfiction concept I hope you countinue this but don't make him too op and like make it a unreasonable harem please.
Do you will continue this story in the future? or a some chapters and drop? i just dont know do i need to read this or not, thats few chapters is not enough to start))
rather boring development and a let down of an mc honestly. also the system seems rather unimpressive considering its name and origin... :/ new concept in a way for a character start but welp the way it develops its best to save the time and not read it to be getting disappointed by this kind of mc
揭示劇透 This is one of the most interesting DxD fanfiction concept I hope you countinue this but don't make him too op and like make it a unreasonable harem please.
Do you will continue this story in the future? or a some chapters and drop? i just dont know do i need to read this or not, thats few chapters is not enough to start))