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This is genuinely one of the few great novels I've read in a while. Right off the bat, I was hooked by Emily's story. Keep writing, Author. You're doing just fine![img=update]
Okay first six chapters in and this goes straight into the library. Writing style is really good, I love it so much. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds without obvious vampire cliche. They are truly a well written characters! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!
I appreciate your work of art, this romance novel will surely become famous...
The book is so good I couldn't tear me eyes off it. It had me in all different emotions, surprise, anxiety and happiness. Can't wait for your next chapter ❤️
This book already had me hooked on the first few chapters. The charecter are very interesting and the plot if just amazing. I do have a problem with some of the word usage in the story and some of the grammar but other than that keep up the good work
Captivating and engaging! Too few chapters, but strong enough to force you to add it to your library. Pace is comfortable and writing style is easy to follow. A few errors here and there, but not enough to overshadow the work or break the rhythm. I need more chapters! I want to know what happens next! Author please update soon!
This is genuinely one of the few great novels I've read in a while. Right off the bat, I was hooked by Emily's story. Keep writing, Author. You're doing just fine![img=update]
Okay first six chapters in and this goes straight into the library. Writing style is really good, I love it so much. It’s easy to imagine the action and enviroment. Great Pacing! I love how everything unfolds without obvious vampire cliche. They are truly a well written characters! Good job author, I Recomend it 10/10!
I appreciate your work of art, this romance novel will surely become famous...
The book is so good I couldn't tear me eyes off it. It had me in all different emotions, surprise, anxiety and happiness. Can't wait for your next chapter ❤️
This book already had me hooked on the first few chapters. The charecter are very interesting and the plot if just amazing. I do have a problem with some of the word usage in the story and some of the grammar but other than that keep up the good work
Captivating and engaging! Too few chapters, but strong enough to force you to add it to your library. Pace is comfortable and writing style is easy to follow. A few errors here and there, but not enough to overshadow the work or break the rhythm. I need more chapters! I want to know what happens next! Author please update soon!