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Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Need to edit more names are weird it just makes the story more confusing and irritating to read...............................................
Yea bro ngl from reading this it seems a lot like a translation that needs editing and while there ain't the usual issues with most translations its weird when they be using new terms like “east china sea” instead of just t east blue and when u be calling people by devil fruit names 💀 I wont say the story is bad cuz its not but it needs a lot of work with grammar and terms maybe if u got a beta reader or some sort of editeor to fix up these mistakes then I would give it a 4-5 star for being alright. I wish u luck in doing this and hope you can improve
Nice Novel it should be a fafFic but keep on working and upload more chapter. i would you to add more infromation about the future Of the novel on some chapters
Nice story Gud pace !+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!!+!+!+!+!+!+!!+!+!+!+!+!+!!!++!+!+!+!+!+!+
Obligatory 5-star review from the author. This is my latest story, which I plan to make long. I hope you give it a try and see if you enjoy it. If you find any errors please do go easy on me.
Very nice story More chapters update please 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 I liked the story 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Need to edit more names are weird it just makes the story more confusing and irritating to read...............................................
Yea bro ngl from reading this it seems a lot like a translation that needs editing and while there ain't the usual issues with most translations its weird when they be using new terms like “east china sea” instead of just t east blue and when u be calling people by devil fruit names 💀 I wont say the story is bad cuz its not but it needs a lot of work with grammar and terms maybe if u got a beta reader or some sort of editeor to fix up these mistakes then I would give it a 4-5 star for being alright. I wish u luck in doing this and hope you can improve
Nice Novel it should be a fafFic but keep on working and upload more chapter. i would you to add more infromation about the future Of the novel on some chapters
Nice story Gud pace !+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!+!!+!+!+!+!+!+!!+!+!+!+!+!+!!!++!+!+!+!+!+!+
Obligatory 5-star review from the author. This is my latest story, which I plan to make long. I hope you give it a try and see if you enjoy it. If you find any errors please do go easy on me.