2評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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I really like the beginning of the Novel, and I’m looking forwarded how the story unfolds. Keep up the good work author!
I liked the story line from the start and I hope that author will be going to do better in future. But I thought that his blond friend is going to be like a enemy pretending to be friend but who know how the story is going to twist in future.
LV 15 ![Badge]()
I really like the beginning of the Novel, and I’m looking forwarded how the story unfolds. Keep up the good work author!
I liked the story line from the start and I hope that author will be going to do better in future. But I thought that his blond friend is going to be like a enemy pretending to be friend but who know how the story is going to twist in future.