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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
3 things I don't like. 1. Mc is way too Gary stu. He is perfect, the best at everything and everyone loves him. 2. The time travel stuff at the beginning was so bad, time travel almost never makes sense in fiction and has plenty of paradoxes and it's the same here. 3. I had to drop it at ch22 where I died of cringe after he got confessed to and his response went something like "I love u too but I need a harem bro please" (I can't remember the exact words cux I've already repressed the memory)
best fanfic of this work that I have seen, take my 5 stars.........................................................................;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
I'm going to translate this as I read it, probably 2 or 3 chapters a day... Reasons being, firstly I don't have a computer and I've seen snails type faster than me on mobile phones. Secondly, I have other novels to read on my Playlist... So yeah, don't wait for me, you can always use Google Translate, it's readable if you're used to MTL.
3 things I don't like. 1. Mc is way too Gary stu. He is perfect, the best at everything and everyone loves him. 2. The time travel stuff at the beginning was so bad, time travel almost never makes sense in fiction and has plenty of paradoxes and it's the same here. 3. I had to drop it at ch22 where I died of cringe after he got confessed to and his response went something like "I love u too but I need a harem bro please" (I can't remember the exact words cux I've already repressed the memory)
best fanfic of this work that I have seen, take my 5 stars.........................................................................;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
I'm going to translate this as I read it, probably 2 or 3 chapters a day... Reasons being, firstly I don't have a computer and I've seen snails type faster than me on mobile phones. Secondly, I have other novels to read on my Playlist... So yeah, don't wait for me, you can always use Google Translate, it's readable if you're used to MTL.