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Extreme fitness talent test meaning human He can cheat here because only the ancestors of man are his children only, they are 100%, but it is possible that there are various people, I do not know, after all they existed before man
I just want to say in case you don't understand but fangyuan is not obsessed with eternal life and it is not his dream, eternal life is just a goal in his life. so please don't just write a random goal when you are creating a character please try understand the goal that you're giving in the character like how you are giving yourself a goal give it emotion,reason and meaning so the story would be interesting and entertaining. And I'm sorry if you are offended but I don't mean anything bad😔 I just like it when the story has meaning not some other novel where the author will just give some super cheat and harem into the mc without a reason or meaning and I find those novel disappointing so I'm sorry
Very good novel And with the cheat mc has i have high expectations for him MOREEEEEEE CHAPSSSSSS
Currently the best RI fanfiction on this platform. No doubt about it. The Writing quality is good, Story development & Character Progression is even better. Most importantly, the MC is realistic and capable. So all in all it's satisfying
got to chapter 12 or so and i had to check out even though writing was decent and some character work .It was just boring because there were zero to little stakes combined with him just getting stuff continuously in his very very fortunate lifestyle.
Honorable elder, you can cook. I would even say that your food path attainment reaches Great Grandmaster. However, i must say that i liked the previous title picture better, as it was less generic and better suited the story thematically.
MASTER PIECE I don't even read much RI, don't realy know what I'm doing here, just know I aint going anywhere ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I don't know if I just like reverend insanity and its world, or this novel is actually that good, please continue writing your writing is amazing.
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This is a very good RI fanfic, makes me even miss Reverend Insanity even more
This story is very good and I would recommend it to others. However I fear the day when the mc crosses paths with Fang Yuan, I would be sad to see Fang Yuan losing against the mc. As much as I enjoy the mc if this fanfic I prefer Fang Yuan
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It's a good story give it a chance and I'm sure you'd like it too. i look forward to seeing new poison gu
Hasta el momento es el mejor fanfic de Reverend Insanity que he leído, me encanta en todos los aspectos, solo puedo desearle al autor que no se rinda, que no nos abandone, ya sufrimos la pérdida de RI, mi corazón no podría resistirlo otra vez!!! Mil gracias por todo!!! ♥︎
bro is this the golden age of RI fanfics this is the third ri fabric I found one after another
I... have no idea what I'm reading! That's probably because I'm not even halfway through Reverend Insanity, but I couldn't resist. In any case, this is enjoyable enough even with my confusion.
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Lovin'it! Poison path got a lot of possibility with refinement path, can't wait for Mc to start cooking some real nasty poison ! Or medecine, only diff is the dosage. Thx for your work so far, can't wait for more
Who stared to recomm other fanficton of RI ? Attainment levels start with ordinary followed by Master, Grandmaster, Great Grandmaster, and Supreme Grandmaster. In between those levels are sub-levels which are called quasi-attainment level, for example, quasi-master. But there are also 'levels' like nonexistent attainment and more vague terms such as low attainment which are generally speaking no real attainment levels and are therefore kept in square brackets [...]. Anything below master level lacks intuitions and the difference between them are generally in gu worm usage experience.
Hope for a finished story ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
some advice, put "reverend insanity" in the title if you want more visualization, when searching it's difficult to find your work I would think it would be cool if Mc created a new original path, to be practiced along with the path of poison and refinement, I think it would be very original and it would be interesting for Mc to gradually develop this path, and his work to hide it (it could be something like a potion path, since there is already a pill path)
This book feels like my late night snacks 🤤 and I love it, it tastes like dark chocolate 🍫 a little bitter and chocolaty. This MC is not exactly my favourite since I like a touch of romance 💝 but since you are reading this you must be here for a protagonist like FY right? Then I can garantie you that you are not gonna regret reading this ff. Although this MC has much easier life compared to FY, but they are fundamentally quite similar. Of course this is a premature review, so most of it is not gonna be accurate but let me tell you this MC is gonna turn out mad crazy. Also, I must tell you...What I like the most about this book is obviously the ✨AUTHOR-SAN✨. Lots and lots of love for you ACDPQS. P.S. It updates daily😏✨. keep up the good work.
Great start so far, mc is kinda a mad scientist type who strikes me as ruthless. Hope for more chapters!
Let’s see how long you last with this, I’ve seen many write rn novels but they usually don’t pass 70 in the end
Awesome beginning! Awesome world! The MC seems like a chill guy and since the author is a RI enjoyer, I don't believe this book deserve less than 5 stars. Keep it up bro! I believe in you!
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Extreme fitness talent test meaning human He can cheat here because only the ancestors of man are his children only, they are 100%, but it is possible that there are various people, I do not know, after all they existed before man
I just want to say in case you don't understand but fangyuan is not obsessed with eternal life and it is not his dream, eternal life is just a goal in his life. so please don't just write a random goal when you are creating a character please try understand the goal that you're giving in the character like how you are giving yourself a goal give it emotion,reason and meaning so the story would be interesting and entertaining. And I'm sorry if you are offended but I don't mean anything bad😔 I just like it when the story has meaning not some other novel where the author will just give some super cheat and harem into the mc without a reason or meaning and I find those novel disappointing so I'm sorry
Very good novel And with the cheat mc has i have high expectations for him MOREEEEEEE CHAPSSSSSS
Currently the best RI fanfiction on this platform. No doubt about it. The Writing quality is good, Story development & Character Progression is even better. Most importantly, the MC is realistic and capable. So all in all it's satisfying
got to chapter 12 or so and i had to check out even though writing was decent and some character work .It was just boring because there were zero to little stakes combined with him just getting stuff continuously in his very very fortunate lifestyle.
Honorable elder, you can cook. I would even say that your food path attainment reaches Great Grandmaster. However, i must say that i liked the previous title picture better, as it was less generic and better suited the story thematically.
MASTER PIECE I don't even read much RI, don't realy know what I'm doing here, just know I aint going anywhere ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
I don't know if I just like reverend insanity and its world, or this novel is actually that good, please continue writing your writing is amazing.
Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore Mooooooooooore_Mooooooooooore
揭示劇透 This is a very good RI fanfic, makes me even miss Reverend Insanity even more
This story is very good and I would recommend it to others. However I fear the day when the mc crosses paths with Fang Yuan, I would be sad to see Fang Yuan losing against the mc. As much as I enjoy the mc if this fanfic I prefer Fang Yuan
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It's a good story give it a chance and I'm sure you'd like it too. i look forward to seeing new poison gu
Hasta el momento es el mejor fanfic de Reverend Insanity que he leído, me encanta en todos los aspectos, solo puedo desearle al autor que no se rinda, que no nos abandone, ya sufrimos la pérdida de RI, mi corazón no podría resistirlo otra vez!!! Mil gracias por todo!!! ♥︎
bro is this the golden age of RI fanfics this is the third ri fabric I found one after another
I... have no idea what I'm reading! That's probably because I'm not even halfway through Reverend Insanity, but I couldn't resist. In any case, this is enjoyable enough even with my confusion.
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Lovin'it! Poison path got a lot of possibility with refinement path, can't wait for Mc to start cooking some real nasty poison ! Or medecine, only diff is the dosage. Thx for your work so far, can't wait for more
Who stared to recomm other fanficton of RI ? Attainment levels start with ordinary followed by Master, Grandmaster, Great Grandmaster, and Supreme Grandmaster. In between those levels are sub-levels which are called quasi-attainment level, for example, quasi-master. But there are also 'levels' like nonexistent attainment and more vague terms such as low attainment which are generally speaking no real attainment levels and are therefore kept in square brackets [...]. Anything below master level lacks intuitions and the difference between them are generally in gu worm usage experience.
Hope for a finished story ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
some advice, put "reverend insanity" in the title if you want more visualization, when searching it's difficult to find your work I would think it would be cool if Mc created a new original path, to be practiced along with the path of poison and refinement, I think it would be very original and it would be interesting for Mc to gradually develop this path, and his work to hide it (it could be something like a potion path, since there is already a pill path)
This book feels like my late night snacks 🤤 and I love it, it tastes like dark chocolate 🍫 a little bitter and chocolaty. This MC is not exactly my favourite since I like a touch of romance 💝 but since you are reading this you must be here for a protagonist like FY right? Then I can garantie you that you are not gonna regret reading this ff. Although this MC has much easier life compared to FY, but they are fundamentally quite similar. Of course this is a premature review, so most of it is not gonna be accurate but let me tell you this MC is gonna turn out mad crazy. Also, I must tell you...What I like the most about this book is obviously the ✨AUTHOR-SAN✨. Lots and lots of love for you ACDPQS. P.S. It updates daily😏✨. keep up the good work.
Great start so far, mc is kinda a mad scientist type who strikes me as ruthless. Hope for more chapters!
Let’s see how long you last with this, I’ve seen many write rn novels but they usually don’t pass 70 in the end
Awesome beginning! Awesome world! The MC seems like a chill guy and since the author is a RI enjoyer, I don't believe this book deserve less than 5 stars. Keep it up bro! I believe in you!
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more chapter please don't stop updating