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Was a great fic until the chapters were locked. Just as bad as ghostyz trying to profit off of a fanfiction.
It’s an alright read translation is decent. Tang San bashing and so far following canon at least up till chap 40, the main problem with it is the chapters are locked after chap 40. I mean wth it’s a fanfic why is it locked other that that it’s okay.
trash story .. always tang hao tries to kill MC and MC just tries to slap tang san in return. It's just like tom and jerry .. MC is also not using his knowledge of the story. tang san gets all his golden finger..in story and MC can't even stop it .. it's the most pathetic fanfic I have read I think out of nearly 500 chapters of story around 250 is about tang hao going after MC like Tom and Jerry cartoon ! literally the worst headache fanfic I have ever read
was shocked that their were locked chapters for a ff but i dont mind watching ads for it.
it's a good fanfiction but you to let your greed win over and made it pay to read even other douluo fanfiction have paywall protection That's just like the author with Z who turn everything to patro@n deal
sigh..... I am giving up on this fanfiction because you locked the chapters other fanfiction like yours also locked there chapters as well goodbye
man it was good story and all suddenly it got premium asking free pass to unlock day before yesterday it was free till now
If you turn off your brain to get over the plot holes, you might find it full-filling at the least. [img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp]
honestly it is a good fanfic. [professional review:- it is a good novel with characters being used properly. Most of the fanfic directly state that tang hao and tang are hypocrites but they never show the process like in this novel it is shown how tang hao character tries to kill him just because of small children quarrel and his talent is Astonishing that might become threat in future for his son, and judging by behaviour of original tang ha he would do the same if he saw a more talent person is not friends with him. world building and story development is okay. there are some plot holes like him being taken by qian ranqxue and not being interested in his secret and even fall in love with him...] [personal:- *remember this is not serious I am just talking about myself and martial soul*. I like fanfic with fan service and harem. degenerate isn't it, yup I am. i don't like women who are beside MC taken away from him like dugu yan and zhu qing , although qing cut ties with her fiance but still their relationship is nothing romance .and by situation it doesn't seems like romance will bloom also that yan girl already become gf of some yu guys. there is no harem and wish fulfilment]
became too cumbersome to read. . . . feels like an mtl but a little bit better. . . . the translator doesn't even bother to make the name consistent. if made using grammarly, it will surely improve the quality of the work.
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i pessimist ic that this book is actually good at first knowing that usually doulou fic is bad because most reincarnated mc treat the world and people in douluo like a pokemon game where girls like pokemon, mc in those fic is so much detached unrelatable to both reader and douluo world. but to my surprise, this one mc is quite relatable. he start as humble and powerless, having to use his cunning to beg and grovel to both tang san and yu xiaogang just so that he can survive another day, its so pitiable and relatable. normal your daily life boy thrown into the world of full of all powerful talented spirit master cultivators with no system and talent whatsoever, how can he survive without relying on alliance and protection or grovel for knowledge in front of revered all knowing sage? but when the fate decide to let him dying, the system is awakened. and mc suege of power doesnt make him snobbish or cocky, eventho he is still have petty hate to bith tang san and xiaogang which tbh relatable and understable. well sometime he forgot his humble beginning but that kind of thing is so rare happened. its a good fic so far
Honestly, this fanfic is one of my favourites right now. Started hating Tang San following his hypocrisy and how he dealt with Yuhao and now seeing him getting defeated everytime he faces MC is really refreshing. Anyway enough talk about Tang San, now I should probably talk about the MC who in my opinion has been written well. The system is not overly powerful and the MC still has to work hard. I would probably like it more if the story revolved more around the MC and him finding his own opportunities and maybe romance, but I guess the author will write about it in the near future since this arc is the first one involving Shrek. Good work author and hope you keep up the good work and for godsake don't drop it like some other authors do with their fanfic.
Just finished reading the available chapters on MTL. The MC is extremely passive, and the author uses Tang Hao like he is God. Shows up everywhere, literally everywhere like the man has fast travel and chases the MC. I'm tired of it, 505 chapters, and the MC still hasn't used his available resources in an intelligent manner to take care of the Tang Hao or even the Xiaogang problem. I recommend the translator move onto a better fic
More pls the story is very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Man this was awesome and refreshing read who was searching for a fanfiction story ... It's a very good and happy to read it thanks
Not the intellectual property of the poster however expects us to pay for it ..pretty sure there's a copywriting law this violated. Put it under fanfiction to avoid this. The story itself isn't bad per se. The mc lacks a lot of personality.Just another poorly done iteration of a reincarnated cultivation novel.I was so hoping it would get better.
Was a great fic until the chapters were locked. Just as bad as ghostyz trying to profit off of a fanfiction.
It’s an alright read translation is decent. Tang San bashing and so far following canon at least up till chap 40, the main problem with it is the chapters are locked after chap 40. I mean wth it’s a fanfic why is it locked other that that it’s okay.
trash story .. always tang hao tries to kill MC and MC just tries to slap tang san in return. It's just like tom and jerry .. MC is also not using his knowledge of the story. tang san gets all his golden finger..in story and MC can't even stop it .. it's the most pathetic fanfic I have read I think out of nearly 500 chapters of story around 250 is about tang hao going after MC like Tom and Jerry cartoon ! literally the worst headache fanfic I have ever read
was shocked that their were locked chapters for a ff but i dont mind watching ads for it.
it's a good fanfiction but you to let your greed win over and made it pay to read even other douluo fanfiction have paywall protection That's just like the author with Z who turn everything to patro@n deal
sigh..... I am giving up on this fanfiction because you locked the chapters other fanfiction like yours also locked there chapters as well goodbye
man it was good story and all suddenly it got premium asking free pass to unlock day before yesterday it was free till now
If you turn off your brain to get over the plot holes, you might find it full-filling at the least. [img=coins][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp]
honestly it is a good fanfic. [professional review:- it is a good novel with characters being used properly. Most of the fanfic directly state that tang hao and tang are hypocrites but they never show the process like in this novel it is shown how tang hao character tries to kill him just because of small children quarrel and his talent is Astonishing that might become threat in future for his son, and judging by behaviour of original tang ha he would do the same if he saw a more talent person is not friends with him. world building and story development is okay. there are some plot holes like him being taken by qian ranqxue and not being interested in his secret and even fall in love with him...] [personal:- *remember this is not serious I am just talking about myself and martial soul*. I like fanfic with fan service and harem. degenerate isn't it, yup I am. i don't like women who are beside MC taken away from him like dugu yan and zhu qing , although qing cut ties with her fiance but still their relationship is nothing romance .and by situation it doesn't seems like romance will bloom also that yan girl already become gf of some yu guys. there is no harem and wish fulfilment]
became too cumbersome to read. . . . feels like an mtl but a little bit better. . . . the translator doesn't even bother to make the name consistent. if made using grammarly, it will surely improve the quality of the work.
.............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................Perfect
i pessimist ic that this book is actually good at first knowing that usually doulou fic is bad because most reincarnated mc treat the world and people in douluo like a pokemon game where girls like pokemon, mc in those fic is so much detached unrelatable to both reader and douluo world. but to my surprise, this one mc is quite relatable. he start as humble and powerless, having to use his cunning to beg and grovel to both tang san and yu xiaogang just so that he can survive another day, its so pitiable and relatable. normal your daily life boy thrown into the world of full of all powerful talented spirit master cultivators with no system and talent whatsoever, how can he survive without relying on alliance and protection or grovel for knowledge in front of revered all knowing sage? but when the fate decide to let him dying, the system is awakened. and mc suege of power doesnt make him snobbish or cocky, eventho he is still have petty hate to bith tang san and xiaogang which tbh relatable and understable. well sometime he forgot his humble beginning but that kind of thing is so rare happened. its a good fic so far
Honestly, this fanfic is one of my favourites right now. Started hating Tang San following his hypocrisy and how he dealt with Yuhao and now seeing him getting defeated everytime he faces MC is really refreshing. Anyway enough talk about Tang San, now I should probably talk about the MC who in my opinion has been written well. The system is not overly powerful and the MC still has to work hard. I would probably like it more if the story revolved more around the MC and him finding his own opportunities and maybe romance, but I guess the author will write about it in the near future since this arc is the first one involving Shrek. Good work author and hope you keep up the good work and for godsake don't drop it like some other authors do with their fanfic.
Just finished reading the available chapters on MTL. The MC is extremely passive, and the author uses Tang Hao like he is God. Shows up everywhere, literally everywhere like the man has fast travel and chases the MC. I'm tired of it, 505 chapters, and the MC still hasn't used his available resources in an intelligent manner to take care of the Tang Hao or even the Xiaogang problem. I recommend the translator move onto a better fic
More pls the story is very good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Man this was awesome and refreshing read who was searching for a fanfiction story ... It's a very good and happy to read it thanks
Not the intellectual property of the poster however expects us to pay for it ..pretty sure there's a copywriting law this violated. Put it under fanfiction to avoid this. The story itself isn't bad per se. The mc lacks a lot of personality.Just another poorly done iteration of a reincarnated cultivation novel.I was so hoping it would get better.