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Harry Potter: The combat instructor

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作者: AssClappicus

3.19 (19 評分)

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In the world of magic, Ciaran Frémont had spent eight years honing his skills as a graduate of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Despite the passage of time, his longing to return to Hogwarts lingered, this time not as a student but as a professor. His wish seemed to manifest when a letter arrived from none other than Principal Dumbledore himself, inviting him for an interview. Ecstatic yet conflicted, Ciaran's joy was tempered by the realization of an urgent task awaiting him. Before he could embark on this journey, he needed to tell his boss the current Director of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, the pinnacle of authority within the Ministry of Magic.

I've decided to translate and fix up this fanfic in my spare time since it wasnt looking to good. No hate plz im trying my hardest :(

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霍格沃茨新任教授

每周推薦票狀態

Rank -- 推薦票 榜單
Stone -- 推薦票

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1stDrunkenImmortal

How do you become a combat teacher if you never seen combat

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WaitWhoWhat

Word count chapter. There's not much more to say.

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Whadyamean

Just find this translation weird as the person who did so seems to not know English all that well, put it through a translator or just couldn’t care to go back and fix mistakes. It feels and reads like an above average native English chinese author, which although bearable isn‘t all that good. who made their work English to grab a larger audience. I’m all for translations however going back theough chapters at least once would be nice as it stands the grammar severely inhubits the characterization. Not to mention that if you don’t read nonsensical books with weird grammar you’ll barely have any idea of what’s going on. Overall just find it a little lazy which because of the neglect has the characterization and overall worldbuilding suffer. It also makes you feel dumber as with all badly translated works you have to pick iut what makes sense slowing down your reading quite a bit.

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ChibiPanda65

Haven’t actually read it so I just gave five stars but was wondering if there’s romance in this

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interven

raw name ?....................................................................................................................................

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David19687

the translations feels like it getts worse and worse every chapter the gender of the mc switches multipel times and at this point its a chore to keep reading so im dropping it.

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AssClappicus

shameful 5 stars liked the story so i decided to translate it

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Hippo9999

This story is good. The writing is commendable all the way till chapter 36. From chapter 37 and beyond, spelling mistakes, gender-benders, grammar mistakes, and odd phrases become visible. It’s almost like the translation gets worse and worse. A couple of chapters include hard to read paragraphs, but otherwise the story is good.

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Gray224

overall it's not a bad story just a few bits that could be checked to make the reading smoother and constant gender change of the MC drag it down

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Hmmmmmmmh

is it good ??????????!!!!!!?!?!!!!!!!!!!

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aragis

not bad beginning, but rather is bold mc. he wants to steal sorting hat. which 1000 years old, there must way summon, mark thief... magical world after all. original name?

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JSirMixalotL

Another interesting idea, another AI translation that is annoying to read. If yoh have no problem with that you should give the story a try

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nobody189

a combat professor without any combat experience🤮🤮😆😆

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hiatusy
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good read so far. hopefully it won't be dropped.

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Starry_Sky_0213

man I've never read such a boring novel in my life like nothing was good nothing was bad just pure I wish this story would end already vibes the whole time. like seriously the mc is useless he doesn't train he doesn't try to get strong only taking the easy way out nothing special happens, the mc is a rock and feels like one the story flow is just a normal guy doing normal things in a normal boring way

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Tim_QQQ

Its AI translated im pretty sure. the writing is much better than MTL but its still clearly some trashy chinese novel. also, the AI translated the spells into proper english so you get the mc using fantastic spells such as "flames come out!" *vomits in mouth*

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Daoist4nO38i

Me ha gustado mucho la verdad, me parece parece interesante lo que se propone........................áaaaaaaaaaasssssssssaaasssaassaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaajdkdksakskdjkslalsjdjdjsklalsjsdjjkdkslsksjdjddlslaksjdjskslsksjdj

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Mortal_God

I want to ask beforeI read this. is this reincarnation or transmigration or just self insert?

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Chapter 86: doubts 5 months ago

卷 1

  1. 1
    Ciaran Frémont 8 months ago
  2. 2
    Resignation 8 months ago
  3. 3
    Gaining confidence 8 months ago
  4. 4
    back to hogwarts 8 months ago
  5. 5
    interview 8 months ago
  6. 6
    skip 8 months ago
  7. 7
    Adoption and Invitation 8 months ago
  8. 8
    the burrow 8 months ago
  9. 9
    Positioning yourself 8 months ago
  10. 10
    dinner 8 months ago
  11. 11
    platform nine and three quarters 8 months ago
  12. 12
    the train 8 months ago
  13. 13
    hogwarts 8 months ago
  14. 14
    branching 8 months ago
  15. 15
    Confirmation 7 months ago
  16. 16
    first lesson 7 months ago
  17. 17
    The most powerful spell? 7 months ago
  18. 18
    teaching 7 months ago
  19. 19
    the first weekend 7 months ago
  20. 20
    the room of requirement 7 months ago
  21. 21
    relationship changes 7 months ago
  22. 22
    Ravenclaw's diadem 7 months ago
  23. 23
    extra points 7 months ago
  24. 24
    promotion 7 months ago
  25. 25
    the story of deathly hallows 7 months ago
  26. 26
    the first attack 7 months ago
  27. 27
    office argument 7 months ago
  28. 28
    basilisk 7 months ago
  29. 29
    principle's password 7 months ago
  30. 30
    the legend of the chamber of secrets 7 months ago
  31. 31
    a meaningful lecture 7 months ago
  32. 32
    instructions 7 months ago
  33. 33
    The Basilisk Injury Incident 7 months ago
  34. 34
    the game is suspended 7 months ago
  35. 35
    encounter on the road 7 months ago
  36. 36
    grand inspection 6 months ago
  37. 37
    duelling club 6 months ago
  38. 38
    the real wizard show down 6 months ago
  39. 39
    new story-still carrying on this one 6 months ago
  40. 40
    duel in the duel club 6 months ago
  41. 41
    Parseltongue Exposed 6 months ago
  42. 42
    accident 6 months ago
  43. 43
    heir 6 months ago
  44. 44
    Myrtle’s Bathroom 6 months ago
  45. 45
    the entrance to the secret room 6 months ago
  46. 46
    finally entering the secret room 6 months ago
  47. 47
    riddle 6 months ago
  48. 48
    dialogue 6 months ago
  49. 49
    resentment and hatred towards dumbledore 6 months ago
  50. 50
    angry riddle 6 months ago
  51. 51
    basilisk 6 months ago
  52. 52
    solution 6 months ago
  53. 53
    leaving the secret room 6 months ago
  54. 54
    self blame 6 months ago
  55. 55
    Horcrux 6 months ago
  56. 56
    reminder 6 months ago
  57. 57
    banquet 6 months ago
  58. 58
    dobby 6 months ago
  59. 59
    mastermind behind the scenes 6 months ago
  60. 60
    argument 6 months ago
  61. 61
    Lucius Malfoy 6 months ago
  62. 62
    dobby the free house elf 5 months ago
  63. 63
    the end of the school year 5 months ago
  64. 64
    Candidates 5 months ago
  65. 65
    Gaunt’s Old House 5 months ago
  66. 66
    ring and resurrection stone 5 months ago
  67. 67
    promotion 5 months ago
  68. 68
    wanted order 5 months ago
  69. 69
    capture the dog 5 months ago
  70. 70
    deliberate 5 months ago
  71. 71
    chat 5 months ago
  72. 72
    debate 5 months ago
  73. 73
    notification 5 months ago
  74. 74
    return to school 5 months ago
  75. 75
    two new professors 5 months ago
  76. 76
    appointment notice 5 months ago
  77. 77
    magic wand 5 months ago
  78. 78
    advice 5 months ago
  79. 79
    worry 5 months ago
  80. 80
    absorption 5 months ago
  81. 81
    harry's request 5 months ago
  82. 82
    doubt 5 months ago
  83. 83
    the spiritual cat 5 months ago
  84. 84
    accident 5 months ago
  85. 85
    dropped 5 months ago
  86. 86
    doubts 5 months ago

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