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This is a very interesting story. The only major issue is the inconsistency with names. In one chapter, the character is called Minato, and in the next chapter, the same character is called Boruto or something else. I have to expend brainpower trying to figure out which character they're referring to exactly. I rushed through the entire story, and this issue remains unresolved. At this stage, it feels like they're just dumping chapters on us instead of fixing their mistakes. I like the story development and the way the mc is portrayed as a hidden manipulator who hasn't gone off the bend yet. If anyone has time to fix the names of everyone in this story, it would get a 4-5* rating from me.
Hello please read what you are writing and fix the mistakes.These mistakes are quite easy to notice and difficult to ignore . .......,..................
This is a very interesting story. The only major issue is the inconsistency with names. In one chapter, the character is called Minato, and in the next chapter, the same character is called Boruto or something else. I have to expend brainpower trying to figure out which character they're referring to exactly. I rushed through the entire story, and this issue remains unresolved. At this stage, it feels like they're just dumping chapters on us instead of fixing their mistakes. I like the story development and the way the mc is portrayed as a hidden manipulator who hasn't gone off the bend yet. If anyone has time to fix the names of everyone in this story, it would get a 4-5* rating from me.
Hello please read what you are writing and fix the mistakes.These mistakes are quite easy to notice and difficult to ignore . .......,..................
Disgusting, that's all I can say about this attempt of a fic.