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pretty slow novel but I liked it. Don't know why there are so many one star review without any actual criticism............................................................................................
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thanks for the fanfic it is my first fanfic and i really like it .................................................................................
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Great fanfic. Really interesting the way OC affects the plot. Thanks Autor [img=strong]
I really enjoy this fanfic first of all MC is not some op character young age like most fanfic were the MC is op at the age of 10 or 11 second is that most jutsu are from the original which is pretty good also they are divided correctly like jonin from land of earth are not using jutsu from land of lighting third it is slow pace but worth it
4.8 if you're not into a slow burn kind of novel, this ain't for you. MC ain't OP as in Super OP, "almost" OP is what I can say. hope this continues
I'd say semi-realistic SI/OC character development in a well known plot line. Good pacing with a nice view into operations of the 3rd ninja war.
I understand if you write a negative review because the novel isn't good... but giving it a bad rating solely because the plot is slow and 'boring'? There are times when I don't understand people. Although it is true that the grammar is poor at times. But for now, it's the only flaw I see...
A failed novel, as if it were a Chinese novel. Imagine he wants to enter a state of Senjutsu, and he hasn't even mastered chakra well? What is this stupidity? He hasn't even learned how to fight, hahaha. Brother, whoever reads this garbage and sees it as normal, congratulations on your backward mind. In addition to that, it's aimless, boring, and frankly negative.
This is an underapreciatted Great novel. The pacing problem go away after the 15~ cap. The MC is not op, but he is not unrealistic weak after years of training.
It's a complete copy of canon doesn't change anything, chapter 133. The MC character doesn't make an effort to change the story, everything happens the same until Minato dies! Surely the Uchiha massacre will also happen the same, the MC is just a spectator in the world of Naruto.
Whats the chiinese raw for this story? its an admittedly good translation but maybe you should provide the raw in the synopsis to give credit to the og
good if your bored out of your skull 25 ch in and i was ready to smash my phone just to end the monologue
I like the history, keep doing a good job, thanks for the updates. .............................. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::
Same story just from another character's perspective.....he didn't do anything exceptional hole time except making a better medical drug for making uchiha look good to others. And this thing continues till 50+ chapters idk after this as I'm already tired to this boring story.
Good fanfic, good writing, good story, rare typos, but the author has some annoying quirks, like being allergic to scene breaks. You know the lines like, " =========== " between paragraphs to indicate the end of one event and the beginning of another event? Or use a scene break to note a change in location or change in point of view? Probably 3/4 times when a scene break would be helpful, the author just doesn't use one, so you read the next paragraph go, "wait where the hell am I?" and need to re-read the past few paragraphs to find your footing.
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Very unlikeable und inconsistent MC. His personality is all over the place. He becomes an unreasonably perverted kid at some point, hated by all females he encounters (despite his 'sister') and getting cucked from left to right. The perspective of creating a reasonable Uchiha clan is realised by poorly and unreasonably bashing the rest of Konoha, its other clans and everyone in between. Further the MCs accomplishments while large feel nerfed due to stupidly overcomplicated hardships. All in all no mattet what he does, everything still goes the canon way, since he is a hated leecherous beta cuck Uchiha who isnt blessed by habing a single shred of Charisma (even tho its implied at thr start of the story) Dont bother, no matter how far in it only gets increasingly worse (~120 chapters)
This novel is good, definitely better than majority of the fics on this platform. The low rating does not do it justice. It’s 100% 4+ stars worth, imo. The story progression is decent, the characters are likable, the quality of the writing is good. I fail to see why it doesn’t get the love it deserves. Overall, I great pass-time read and I highly recommend y’all to just enjoy the ride.
Interesting fic but suffers the same problem as many other naruto fic. The author is too afraid to deviate from cannon that I might as well re-read the official manga instead of reading this. I'm currently still holding on to see if the Kyuubi rebellion or Uchiha massacre would change, but if nothing changes, yeah...
Good naruto fanfic. No instant op character nor frustrating slow nerf of character. Though a little explanation about his powerup journey would be good. A great read for people who want smart mc.
I really like the story its nice to see a si story where the protagonist does not just immediatly become op. I also am rather enjoying some of the twists your making from the original plot and am biting my nails hoping you dont kill rin. Overall its a fun story that im enjoying a lot.
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so far, so good, I just wish the author uploaded a bit more frequently. but otherwise it's pretty good
hope the pairing is an oc Uchiha instead of pakura and you should honestly do a timeskip till teenage in. have him get the hashirama cells and increase chakra tons. and hope the haren has asuka
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To start this series can be a little slow. However I feel this is not a detriment. The author takes his time connecting us to the characters and his version of this world. If you enjoy a smart Naruto story, I believe this is a good choice.
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pretty slow novel but I liked it. Don't know why there are so many one star review without any actual criticism............................................................................................
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thanks for the fanfic it is my first fanfic and i really like it .................................................................................
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Great fanfic. Really interesting the way OC affects the plot. Thanks Autor [img=strong]
I really enjoy this fanfic first of all MC is not some op character young age like most fanfic were the MC is op at the age of 10 or 11 second is that most jutsu are from the original which is pretty good also they are divided correctly like jonin from land of earth are not using jutsu from land of lighting third it is slow pace but worth it
4.8 if you're not into a slow burn kind of novel, this ain't for you. MC ain't OP as in Super OP, "almost" OP is what I can say. hope this continues
I'd say semi-realistic SI/OC character development in a well known plot line. Good pacing with a nice view into operations of the 3rd ninja war.
I understand if you write a negative review because the novel isn't good... but giving it a bad rating solely because the plot is slow and 'boring'? There are times when I don't understand people. Although it is true that the grammar is poor at times. But for now, it's the only flaw I see...
A failed novel, as if it were a Chinese novel. Imagine he wants to enter a state of Senjutsu, and he hasn't even mastered chakra well? What is this stupidity? He hasn't even learned how to fight, hahaha. Brother, whoever reads this garbage and sees it as normal, congratulations on your backward mind. In addition to that, it's aimless, boring, and frankly negative.
This is an underapreciatted Great novel. The pacing problem go away after the 15~ cap. The MC is not op, but he is not unrealistic weak after years of training.
It's a complete copy of canon doesn't change anything, chapter 133. The MC character doesn't make an effort to change the story, everything happens the same until Minato dies! Surely the Uchiha massacre will also happen the same, the MC is just a spectator in the world of Naruto.
Whats the chiinese raw for this story? its an admittedly good translation but maybe you should provide the raw in the synopsis to give credit to the og
good if your bored out of your skull 25 ch in and i was ready to smash my phone just to end the monologue
I like the history, keep doing a good job, thanks for the updates. .............................. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: :::::::::::::::
Same story just from another character's perspective.....he didn't do anything exceptional hole time except making a better medical drug for making uchiha look good to others. And this thing continues till 50+ chapters idk after this as I'm already tired to this boring story.
Good fanfic, good writing, good story, rare typos, but the author has some annoying quirks, like being allergic to scene breaks. You know the lines like, " =========== " between paragraphs to indicate the end of one event and the beginning of another event? Or use a scene break to note a change in location or change in point of view? Probably 3/4 times when a scene break would be helpful, the author just doesn't use one, so you read the next paragraph go, "wait where the hell am I?" and need to re-read the past few paragraphs to find your footing.
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Very unlikeable und inconsistent MC. His personality is all over the place. He becomes an unreasonably perverted kid at some point, hated by all females he encounters (despite his 'sister') and getting cucked from left to right. The perspective of creating a reasonable Uchiha clan is realised by poorly and unreasonably bashing the rest of Konoha, its other clans and everyone in between. Further the MCs accomplishments while large feel nerfed due to stupidly overcomplicated hardships. All in all no mattet what he does, everything still goes the canon way, since he is a hated leecherous beta cuck Uchiha who isnt blessed by habing a single shred of Charisma (even tho its implied at thr start of the story) Dont bother, no matter how far in it only gets increasingly worse (~120 chapters)
This novel is good, definitely better than majority of the fics on this platform. The low rating does not do it justice. It’s 100% 4+ stars worth, imo. The story progression is decent, the characters are likable, the quality of the writing is good. I fail to see why it doesn’t get the love it deserves. Overall, I great pass-time read and I highly recommend y’all to just enjoy the ride.
Interesting fic but suffers the same problem as many other naruto fic. The author is too afraid to deviate from cannon that I might as well re-read the official manga instead of reading this. I'm currently still holding on to see if the Kyuubi rebellion or Uchiha massacre would change, but if nothing changes, yeah...
Good naruto fanfic. No instant op character nor frustrating slow nerf of character. Though a little explanation about his powerup journey would be good. A great read for people who want smart mc.
I really like the story its nice to see a si story where the protagonist does not just immediatly become op. I also am rather enjoying some of the twists your making from the original plot and am biting my nails hoping you dont kill rin. Overall its a fun story that im enjoying a lot.
揭示劇透 so far, so good, I just wish the author uploaded a bit more frequently. but otherwise it's pretty good
hope the pairing is an oc Uchiha instead of pakura and you should honestly do a timeskip till teenage in. have him get the hashirama cells and increase chakra tons. and hope the haren has asuka
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To start this series can be a little slow. However I feel this is not a detriment. The author takes his time connecting us to the characters and his version of this world. If you enjoy a smart Naruto story, I believe this is a good choice.
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Entertaining keep the chapters coming. .