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This fic (even though it only has 6 chapters) is really good, the grammar is great and the jokes are funny (if you love Lobotomy Kaisen like i do). It will be a treat to see future chapters since this fic has potential to be amazing (even more potential than potential man himself). overall 9.9/10 (Removed 0.1 because slander of blood manipulation is NOT tolerated) It's good.
As the Strongest Adapter - Naohiro stood before the Fraud Mahoraga. Mahoraga asked him, his wheel shivering, "Are you the Most Adaptable Adapter that can Adapt because you are Naohiro?" Naohiro was silent, yet Mahoraga continued, his wheel turning, "Or are you Naohiro because you are the Most Adaptable Adapter that can Adapt?" Naohiro took a step forward, causing Mahoraga to take a step back in sheer terror. Naohiro replied with a simple yet powerful... "Nah, I'd Adapt."
Absolute peak, only complaint is that we never got the farmer fembussy. We did eventually get the Kenjussy tho so…
Thanks for the fic. It's really good. Though I am sure you have adapted to the 5 stars reviews by now! Hahaha!
i read it all....including the omake...iam not sure if i have brain damage but theres a pulsating twitch on the right side of my brain ever since i read the kenjussy omake.
Good story. Pacing could have been better as it felt a little rushed near the end but with the pacing of the source material being awful after volume one I consider a little rushed a huge improvement over the manga
the new readers wouldn't understand the bond of the community during the time chapters were being actively released but this truly was the jujutsu which the readers kaisened upon
one of the best if not the best lobotomized jjk fanfic i have ever read. Stand proud Author you can cook.
It's the best lobotomy kaisen fanfic i have ever read. Amazing comments aswell.
What a goated fic. At the start there were some roadbumps ngl, but the enjoyment I felt reading the fic is one I haven’t felt in a long while. Truly, thank you Jax. Stand proud, you can cook.
This truly was our Jujutsu Kaisen, My vocabulary cannot describe peak, but numbers can. 10/10
I hate that for some reason MC always get sealed or something. I never read or watch JJK. I feel that it is just overhyped like Demon Slayer. I try reading this because webnovel is running out of good FF. I like the story honestly I just think this ff universe is full of stupid people. I don't know if the original is like that or anything but I'm getting tired of people in this JJK.
A captivating fanfic that dives deep into character emotions, offering fresh perspectives on familiar relationships. The plot is well-paced, with engaging dialogue and heartfelt moments that feel authentic to the original.
This is actually insanely good this is my 4th reread and i still can't get over how good this is the community is also PEAK
This is a very good story, more enjoyable if you've read the manga but still good without much prior knowledge.
Definitely a great jujutsu kaisen fanfic to read in free time. It was worth every moment and unfortunately it has come to an end. It was good while it lasted😓✌️
in general it was an above average story (compared to fiction in general) now, speaking of jujutsu kaisen fiction specifically this is the best so far (mainly because it has an ending) it was fun to follow, my thanks to the author 😉👍
Hola hermano, me está gustando mucho la novela, me hice esta imagen portada jaja, ojalá te guste, aunque la novela ya acabó:)) [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=strong]
Well,it's great. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and downloaded webnovel to finish it after reading 80 chapters in Wattpad👍
Peak Cinema. Thank you for your work on the front lines of lobotomy kaisen for all this time. Best of luck to you in the future, author. You’re one of the few who i truly feel deserve the title. To be serious it was well made and you can tell he had passion for the series. Thanks man.
Shameless 5-Star Review. I thought of this idea in the shower and felt it would be a cool concept, so I just sat down and wrote for a few hours. Please give me some feedback so I can improve the story. Btw it's a POSSIBLE ROMANCE. Still haven't decided since I don't want to take away from the story and make it a generic boring mess.
This fic (even though it only has 6 chapters) is really good, the grammar is great and the jokes are funny (if you love Lobotomy Kaisen like i do). It will be a treat to see future chapters since this fic has potential to be amazing (even more potential than potential man himself). overall 9.9/10 (Removed 0.1 because slander of blood manipulation is NOT tolerated) It's good.
As the Strongest Adapter - Naohiro stood before the Fraud Mahoraga. Mahoraga asked him, his wheel shivering, "Are you the Most Adaptable Adapter that can Adapt because you are Naohiro?" Naohiro was silent, yet Mahoraga continued, his wheel turning, "Or are you Naohiro because you are the Most Adaptable Adapter that can Adapt?" Naohiro took a step forward, causing Mahoraga to take a step back in sheer terror. Naohiro replied with a simple yet powerful... "Nah, I'd Adapt."
Absolute peak, only complaint is that we never got the farmer fembussy. We did eventually get the Kenjussy tho so…
Thanks for the fic. It's really good. Though I am sure you have adapted to the 5 stars reviews by now! Hahaha!
i read it all....including the omake...iam not sure if i have brain damage but theres a pulsating twitch on the right side of my brain ever since i read the kenjussy omake.
Good story. Pacing could have been better as it felt a little rushed near the end but with the pacing of the source material being awful after volume one I consider a little rushed a huge improvement over the manga
the new readers wouldn't understand the bond of the community during the time chapters were being actively released but this truly was the jujutsu which the readers kaisened upon
one of the best if not the best lobotomized jjk fanfic i have ever read. Stand proud Author you can cook.
It's the best lobotomy kaisen fanfic i have ever read. Amazing comments aswell.
What a goated fic. At the start there were some roadbumps ngl, but the enjoyment I felt reading the fic is one I haven’t felt in a long while. Truly, thank you Jax. Stand proud, you can cook.
This truly was our Jujutsu Kaisen, My vocabulary cannot describe peak, but numbers can. 10/10
I hate that for some reason MC always get sealed or something. I never read or watch JJK. I feel that it is just overhyped like Demon Slayer. I try reading this because webnovel is running out of good FF. I like the story honestly I just think this ff universe is full of stupid people. I don't know if the original is like that or anything but I'm getting tired of people in this JJK.
A captivating fanfic that dives deep into character emotions, offering fresh perspectives on familiar relationships. The plot is well-paced, with engaging dialogue and heartfelt moments that feel authentic to the original.
This is actually insanely good this is my 4th reread and i still can't get over how good this is the community is also PEAK
This is a very good story, more enjoyable if you've read the manga but still good without much prior knowledge.
Definitely a great jujutsu kaisen fanfic to read in free time. It was worth every moment and unfortunately it has come to an end. It was good while it lasted😓✌️
in general it was an above average story (compared to fiction in general) now, speaking of jujutsu kaisen fiction specifically this is the best so far (mainly because it has an ending) it was fun to follow, my thanks to the author 😉👍
Hola hermano, me está gustando mucho la novela, me hice esta imagen portada jaja, ojalá te guste, aunque la novela ya acabó:)) [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=strong]
Well,it's great. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and downloaded webnovel to finish it after reading 80 chapters in Wattpad👍
Peak Cinema. Thank you for your work on the front lines of lobotomy kaisen for all this time. Best of luck to you in the future, author. You’re one of the few who i truly feel deserve the title. To be serious it was well made and you can tell he had passion for the series. Thanks man.
Shameless 5-Star Review. I thought of this idea in the shower and felt it would be a cool concept, so I just sat down and wrote for a few hours. Please give me some feedback so I can improve the story. Btw it's a POSSIBLE ROMANCE. Still haven't decided since I don't want to take away from the story and make it a generic boring mess.