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I don't know why, but when I read most of the fanfiction in webnovel, it's like I'm degraded and stupid. No, I'm dumb as it is, but it's like I get even dumber when I read fan fiction here.
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it's good , grammar is nice and readable, plotlin is smooth ,mc cheat is lite and low key ,i binge read it in one day
Very good. The only downside is the slower release which is fine given the substance and progress of each chapter so it balances out pretty well. Also the writing quality, with having the occasional grammar mistake. Overall Rating: 4.6/5 (Then again, I am a LotR fan... so I might have some bias)
Love this story can't wait to see what you have happening next. Author amazing work. Story is amazing.........................................................
Hey man! At the beginning when you mentionned that the fic is inspired by start in lord of the rings i knew that the fic was going to be goatesque. I wasn't decived ! The only downside is that there aren't enough chapter! Keep cooking.
WHY ARE PEOPLE DUMB THIS NOVEL IS AN AWESOME READ IT HAS SPIRIT..AUTHOR WHY NOT PUT AN ANCIENT MECHA IN THE GODS MADE FOR THE HERO NAMED ESCAFLOWNE..the hero can summon Escaflowne anytime in a battle AUTHOR WHY NOT PUT ESCAFLOWNE AS BORN FROM A DRAGON KING a steampunk mecha ..author watch the anime's awesome story..THANK YOU FOR THIS FUN NOVEL
Muy buena novela me encanta la forma en la que combina la historia del libro con el personaje en si. La historia "original" que dice el autor que es la historia que de basó yo no la encontré, me gustaría que alguien me pase un link o cómo encontrarla así puedo hacer una mejor comparación entre una historia y la otra. Pero con la historia sin palabras, se puede decir que es la historia que más espero. Sigue así que vas por buen camino, por más historia así 💪💪💪
揭示劇透
Informações do livro: Aragorn(já adulto) só conheceu a elfa, futura esposa, em Lothloriem(ela morava lá). Ele se apaixonou a primeira vista. A elfa, anos depois ao retornar a casa de Elrond,se apaixonou, ao ve-lo vestido como os elfos e banhado pelas luzes de Valfenda.
amazing extremely well done, really hard to find a fic as good as this on WebNovel, I love it ❤️ 😀 😍 👏 😄 😊
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I've tried to look for a LOTR fanfic before, but to be honest? I've never found anything like this.
Beautiful..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am a dwarf, and I like this book. /////////////////////////////////////////////////
I am being held captive and threatened by some weird, grotesque creatures in to writing a positive review. I've already told them my meat is not for consumption!
I really like that this book actually takes the time and care to get small details of the lotr universe correct. the writing quality is also fantastic overall. I can only take points away for questionable update stability, but I look forward to reading each chapter more.
one of the best lotr and Hobbit fics put there (literally written in fire)
goat fic ...........................................................................................................................................................................
the writing is simply bad, this fic looked like it had a lot of potential but the terrible sentence structure breaks the reading rhythm and makes it hard to enjoy.
i am really enjoying this book as it is well written and has very good character development in my opinion. please don't stop this fic 🙏🙏
Truly good, I expected little since it is a difficult universe to make a fanfic but it exceeds all my expectations, I just hope that the author does not give up and continues the story of the hobbit and then the Lord of the Rings.
As a Lord of the rings fan hench my name and profile pic this is a 10 out of 5
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This review is to say that in the end I regretted translating, I am creating my own version of the fic with a slight inspiration from the Chinese novel. I appreciate your support and advice to improve both my grammar and my writing.
I don't know why, but when I read most of the fanfiction in webnovel, it's like I'm degraded and stupid. No, I'm dumb as it is, but it's like I get even dumber when I read fan fiction here.
[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
it's good , grammar is nice and readable, plotlin is smooth ,mc cheat is lite and low key ,i binge read it in one day
Very good. The only downside is the slower release which is fine given the substance and progress of each chapter so it balances out pretty well. Also the writing quality, with having the occasional grammar mistake. Overall Rating: 4.6/5 (Then again, I am a LotR fan... so I might have some bias)
Love this story can't wait to see what you have happening next. Author amazing work. Story is amazing.........................................................
Hey man! At the beginning when you mentionned that the fic is inspired by start in lord of the rings i knew that the fic was going to be goatesque. I wasn't decived ! The only downside is that there aren't enough chapter! Keep cooking.
WHY ARE PEOPLE DUMB THIS NOVEL IS AN AWESOME READ IT HAS SPIRIT..AUTHOR WHY NOT PUT AN ANCIENT MECHA IN THE GODS MADE FOR THE HERO NAMED ESCAFLOWNE..the hero can summon Escaflowne anytime in a battle AUTHOR WHY NOT PUT ESCAFLOWNE AS BORN FROM A DRAGON KING a steampunk mecha ..author watch the anime's awesome story..THANK YOU FOR THIS FUN NOVEL
Muy buena novela me encanta la forma en la que combina la historia del libro con el personaje en si. La historia "original" que dice el autor que es la historia que de basó yo no la encontré, me gustaría que alguien me pase un link o cómo encontrarla así puedo hacer una mejor comparación entre una historia y la otra. Pero con la historia sin palabras, se puede decir que es la historia que más espero. Sigue así que vas por buen camino, por más historia así 💪💪💪
揭示劇透 Informações do livro: Aragorn(já adulto) só conheceu a elfa, futura esposa, em Lothloriem(ela morava lá). Ele se apaixonou a primeira vista. A elfa, anos depois ao retornar a casa de Elrond,se apaixonou, ao ve-lo vestido como os elfos e banhado pelas luzes de Valfenda.
amazing extremely well done, really hard to find a fic as good as this on WebNovel, I love it ❤️ 😀 😍 👏 😄 😊
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I've tried to look for a LOTR fanfic before, but to be honest? I've never found anything like this.
Beautiful..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I am a dwarf, and I like this book. /////////////////////////////////////////////////
I am being held captive and threatened by some weird, grotesque creatures in to writing a positive review. I've already told them my meat is not for consumption!
I really like that this book actually takes the time and care to get small details of the lotr universe correct. the writing quality is also fantastic overall. I can only take points away for questionable update stability, but I look forward to reading each chapter more.
one of the best lotr and Hobbit fics put there (literally written in fire)
goat fic ...........................................................................................................................................................................
the writing is simply bad, this fic looked like it had a lot of potential but the terrible sentence structure breaks the reading rhythm and makes it hard to enjoy.
i am really enjoying this book as it is well written and has very good character development in my opinion. please don't stop this fic 🙏🙏
Truly good, I expected little since it is a difficult universe to make a fanfic but it exceeds all my expectations, I just hope that the author does not give up and continues the story of the hobbit and then the Lord of the Rings.
As a Lord of the rings fan hench my name and profile pic this is a 10 out of 5
Ouais moi je lâche ce truc c une déception [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=Why][img=Moneybags][img=Relaxed][img=Moneybags][img=Relaxed][img=Speechless][img=Relaxed][img=Speechless][img=Shocked][img=Why][img=Why][img=Sigh][img=Sigh]
This review is to say that in the end I regretted translating, I am creating my own version of the fic with a slight inspiration from the Chinese novel. I appreciate your support and advice to improve both my grammar and my writing.