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Even though it's fan fiction, it feels like an original story.I've only read up to chapter 20 of the story, so far it's going well. I would also like to see MC's dragon form covering a quarter of the continent in the story.
cool oc characters and base. mc isn't massacre mindlessly after going to Tensura, and still got 'normal' emotions like a true living being
The author knows too little about dimensionality among verses. Overlord characters are bound by the laws of their verse while Tensura characters either violate or manipulate the very laws of the world.
The author only has a broad viewpoint of Tensura Power System even in the collaboration between Overlord and Tensura it showcased the overwhelming difference between Overlord and Tensura System. Ainz deeply apologize to Albedo and Shelter's remarks of killing the Demon Lord as both of them were unable to figure out the utter difference in power level and cosmology.
man please don't stop writing . (≧▽≦q) 😎💖✌️💕😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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harem??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Good flow I suppose, but the grammar needs to improve. Would it hurt you to simply put it in chat gpt for correcting your grammar mistakes?
Good hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Even though it's fan fiction, it feels like an original story.I've only read up to chapter 20 of the story, so far it's going well. I would also like to see MC's dragon form covering a quarter of the continent in the story.
cool oc characters and base. mc isn't massacre mindlessly after going to Tensura, and still got 'normal' emotions like a true living being
The author knows too little about dimensionality among verses. Overlord characters are bound by the laws of their verse while Tensura characters either violate or manipulate the very laws of the world.
The author only has a broad viewpoint of Tensura Power System even in the collaboration between Overlord and Tensura it showcased the overwhelming difference between Overlord and Tensura System. Ainz deeply apologize to Albedo and Shelter's remarks of killing the Demon Lord as both of them were unable to figure out the utter difference in power level and cosmology.
man please don't stop writing . (≧▽≦q) 😎💖✌️💕😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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harem??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Good flow I suppose, but the grammar needs to improve. Would it hurt you to simply put it in chat gpt for correcting your grammar mistakes?