Reviews of That Time I reincarnated as The Overlord by _Raphiel - Webnovel

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4.46

  • 寫作品質
  • 更新的穩定性
  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
  • 世界背景

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DaoistX8GgPk

Good flow I suppose, but the grammar needs to improve. Would it hurt you to simply put it in chat gpt for correcting your grammar mistakes?

2mth
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Cultivator_Asura

Good hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

3mth
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DOVYASKI7H

Even though it's fan fiction, it feels like an original story.I've only read up to chapter 20 of the story, so far it's going well. I would also like to see MC's dragon form covering a quarter of the continent in the story.

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iamscared

One of the best OverlordxTensei slime Fanfic I ever read.. I LOVE IT!!!😻 😻😻😻

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ExtraBliss

cool oc characters and base. mc isn't massacre mindlessly after going to Tensura, and still got 'normal' emotions like a true living being

4mth
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KingPumpkin3

Love it you have done a very good job keep it up

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Mr_Ice_Cream

The author knows too little about dimensionality among verses. Overlord characters are bound by the laws of their verse while Tensura characters either violate or manipulate the very laws of the world.

5mth
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alchemist_4229

It's a good novel... characters had me down bad ngl...

6mth
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Mr_Ice_Cream

The author only has a broad viewpoint of Tensura Power System even in the collaboration between Overlord and Tensura it showcased the overwhelming difference between Overlord and Tensura System. Ainz deeply apologize to Albedo and Shelter's remarks of killing the Demon Lord as both of them were unable to figure out the utter difference in power level and cosmology.

6mth
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Blank56666

man please don't stop writing . (≧▽≦q) 😎💖✌️💕😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Prantik_Biswas

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sari_saarinen

harem??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

8mth
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Elemise

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8mth
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suichiro

UP!!!! oh and it's also better if you put picture illustrations of some of the characters, Thanks !!!

9mth
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DaoistX8GgPk

Good flow I suppose, but the grammar needs to improve. Would it hurt you to simply put it in chat gpt for correcting your grammar mistakes?

2mth
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Cultivator_Asura

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3mth
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DOVYASKI7H

Even though it's fan fiction, it feels like an original story.I've only read up to chapter 20 of the story, so far it's going well. I would also like to see MC's dragon form covering a quarter of the continent in the story.

3mth
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iamscared

One of the best OverlordxTensei slime Fanfic I ever read.. I LOVE IT!!!😻 😻😻😻

4mth
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ExtraBliss

cool oc characters and base. mc isn't massacre mindlessly after going to Tensura, and still got 'normal' emotions like a true living being

4mth
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KingPumpkin3

Love it you have done a very good job keep it up

5mth
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Mr_Ice_Cream

The author knows too little about dimensionality among verses. Overlord characters are bound by the laws of their verse while Tensura characters either violate or manipulate the very laws of the world.

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alchemist_4229

It's a good novel... characters had me down bad ngl...

6mth
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Mr_Ice_Cream

The author only has a broad viewpoint of Tensura Power System even in the collaboration between Overlord and Tensura it showcased the overwhelming difference between Overlord and Tensura System. Ainz deeply apologize to Albedo and Shelter's remarks of killing the Demon Lord as both of them were unable to figure out the utter difference in power level and cosmology.

6mth
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Blank56666

man please don't stop writing . (≧▽≦q) 😎💖✌️💕😁❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

8mth
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Prantik_Biswas

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sari_saarinen

harem??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

8mth
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Elemise

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suichiro

UP!!!! oh and it's also better if you put picture illustrations of some of the characters, Thanks !!!

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