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I'm in love with this story. I'm patiently waiting every day for an update. It's one of my favorites right now.
Hello, my dearest readers! First, thank you all for the golden tickets, powerstones, and gifts you sent on this book, they are so very much appreciated!! Second, this review will mark the end of the 1st Volume: Azrael and Knox's story (yay!), and the next volume will be about their parents' love stories...not everyone might like this, but I wanted to show how the two were brought in the world (not literally lol)..;) anyways, to all readers who stick with Azi and Knox until the end, thank you so much! T^T
So far..., I have to say...OMG😍😍, I'm obsessed with this book. I read a lot, like really a lot, and it's been a long time since a story captivated me like this one. I think about this novel all the time🥰😍😍😍keep going autor -you are amazing 🥰😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳
This novel is a fantastic read! I loved every moment of it and can't wait for more chapters. The story is compelling, and the characters are so well-developed. Keep up the amazing work, author! (•ө•)♡
an interesting bl story about omega and alpha, updates is consistent too so its good.....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story line seems promising so I'll keep up................................................................................................................
Recommended! The book is good and you won't be bored reading a chapter since there's always happening. Try it! It's a good read, and helps the author promote her book as well.
Hi author~❤️ First off, I want to say that the synopsis is pretty good and makes people want to read the novel. The prologue was very good, but vague. You might want to make clear what really happened to Knox. The transition to the 1st chapter should be improved. I was lost in the 1st chapter, not knowing that it was a retelling of the past. Adding the year might be helpful, IMO. Starting from the 1st chapter, we get to meet Azrael which is good, but the interaction between the two characters can be improved to enhance the chemistry between them for the later meetings. All in all, the suspense is building nicely as I read, so I hope that Azrael will be nicer to Knox so that Knox is willing to return to him, heheh~ Good job and continue writing!!!
I have to say I didn't expect this to be as good as it was. I liked the characters and the action scenes they were pretty nice. The concept of what was written was pretty unique and 'hot' (lol). But I liked the relationship that built up with the characters the most. It sorta reminds me of something I can't put my finger on but either way, pretty solid and hooking. Before I knew it I was reading more and more. The only problem I had was really the transitions. sometimes they happen a bit 'too' fast. That sometimes threw me off. I know it is mentioned where they are going but it would be nice to see their arrival sometimes. That's the only thing from me, everything else hit's right. Good writing.
WELL I have a thought your characters are good but the way of representation of the background world is not so impressive I like the way but I think you make the background world more beautiful
Shameless me giving review to my own book^^ why not though? Anyway, if you happen to find this book, and think of reading it, do read the auxiliary chapters please. I have some warnings and notes in there, for your sake!! Thank you^^
I am hooked with this story and can’t wait to read more. Please keep up a good work author. I will always waiting for new updates 🫶🏻
I'm in love with this story. I'm patiently waiting every day for an update. It's one of my favorites right now.
Hello, my dearest readers! First, thank you all for the golden tickets, powerstones, and gifts you sent on this book, they are so very much appreciated!! Second, this review will mark the end of the 1st Volume: Azrael and Knox's story (yay!), and the next volume will be about their parents' love stories...not everyone might like this, but I wanted to show how the two were brought in the world (not literally lol)..;) anyways, to all readers who stick with Azi and Knox until the end, thank you so much! T^T
So far..., I have to say...OMG😍😍, I'm obsessed with this book. I read a lot, like really a lot, and it's been a long time since a story captivated me like this one. I think about this novel all the time🥰😍😍😍keep going autor -you are amazing 🥰😍😍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🥳
This novel is a fantastic read! I loved every moment of it and can't wait for more chapters. The story is compelling, and the characters are so well-developed. Keep up the amazing work, author! (•ө•)♡
an interesting bl story about omega and alpha, updates is consistent too so its good.....[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
the story line seems promising so I'll keep up................................................................................................................
Recommended! The book is good and you won't be bored reading a chapter since there's always happening. Try it! It's a good read, and helps the author promote her book as well.
Hi author~❤️ First off, I want to say that the synopsis is pretty good and makes people want to read the novel. The prologue was very good, but vague. You might want to make clear what really happened to Knox. The transition to the 1st chapter should be improved. I was lost in the 1st chapter, not knowing that it was a retelling of the past. Adding the year might be helpful, IMO. Starting from the 1st chapter, we get to meet Azrael which is good, but the interaction between the two characters can be improved to enhance the chemistry between them for the later meetings. All in all, the suspense is building nicely as I read, so I hope that Azrael will be nicer to Knox so that Knox is willing to return to him, heheh~ Good job and continue writing!!!
I have to say I didn't expect this to be as good as it was. I liked the characters and the action scenes they were pretty nice. The concept of what was written was pretty unique and 'hot' (lol). But I liked the relationship that built up with the characters the most. It sorta reminds me of something I can't put my finger on but either way, pretty solid and hooking. Before I knew it I was reading more and more. The only problem I had was really the transitions. sometimes they happen a bit 'too' fast. That sometimes threw me off. I know it is mentioned where they are going but it would be nice to see their arrival sometimes. That's the only thing from me, everything else hit's right. Good writing.
WELL I have a thought your characters are good but the way of representation of the background world is not so impressive I like the way but I think you make the background world more beautiful
Shameless me giving review to my own book^^ why not though? Anyway, if you happen to find this book, and think of reading it, do read the auxiliary chapters please. I have some warnings and notes in there, for your sake!! Thank you^^
I am hooked with this story and can’t wait to read more. Please keep up a good work author. I will always waiting for new updates 🫶🏻