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This is not a review as much as author making a few things clear. First of all, this book will continue on. This is my first original book out there ever, and I have no intention of abandoning it. So unless something out of my hand happened, this book will continue to the very end. Second, unfortunately, I'm not a full time author. As this book doesn't generate revenue, I can not focus solely on it. As a result, it has a weekly update instead of daily. I ask for your understanding. Last but not least, yep, this isn't your typical Webnovel. I just had a story I wanted to tell and wrote it without consideration for what's trending or not. If you're an adventurous soul who would like to try new things, give it a chance. Perhaps you would like it!
I LOVE IT! the background of this story is interesting, the narrative is well-written. zarqa is both strong and adorable. thank you author for the story really enjoy it!!
Good job, I appreciate it ❤️ A lot of hard work had been poured into this novel! Keep it up!!!!!!! I want to read more!!!!!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Started this off thinking it was going to be a sweet story, but boy, was I wrong. Firstly, I love the slight contrast between Zarqa and Ali Baba, with Zarqa being raised by her dad while Ali Baba was being raised by his mother, both of them having lost one other parent. Secondly, this book has one of the best transitions I have ever read ok the platform. The dark elements that not only feature fantasy but also touch on the reality of humans makes this feel all the more real. I wanna rant about how well written this piece is and how authentic it feels. This is a unique take on webnovels and I've fallen in love with the book. 10000000/10🩷💯
I liked a lot this novel In fact , the fantasy spirit discusses many topics and givethe readers an idea how far we can go with our imagination ..i liked alsow the twist part ...it plays a huge part in the excitement factor ...i believe that alwats the twist part is a big indication of the creativity of the author and its potentials in coming up always with new and unexpected ideas .i didn t finish reading yet but i highly believe that i won't be disappointed at all.. because as they say practice makes perfect ....so the more the better...we can add as a notice that many properties expresses how big is the role that plays the passion in the writing side of the author..it is transfered within each word and each idea...this couldn't been anything but a sighnificance of the limitless capabilities af a writer...nothing but the beetter luck.. I hope i didn t spoil any of the syory told . I gave this review because i m trying to give readers the enthusiasm to read for this author ...it shouldn t be missed at all
The story weaves elements of fantasy, history, and adventure. The plot is well paced. I loved the arabic influence reminding me of the old tales! Highly recommended!
I just finished reading, and it was fantastic! The characters were well-developed and the storyline kept me hooked from start to finish It's a really good story, I love it I can't wait to know how this story will go forward.
This is a great story for those who enjoy a well-paced novel. The author excels in terms of writing quality, character development, world-building, and overall storytelling. It's remarkable how well-written this novel is, especially considering that English is not the author's first language! Please keep writing author and keep up the good work!
As a fan of Sindbad and Alibaba, I can't wait to read and know how this story will go forward... Keep writing and don't stop 😊
Apparently, reviewing one's work is a shameless tradition of Webnovel, and I shall follow through with it 😋 Jokes aside, I'm not fit to judge my own work, because for me, it's something I worked hard on and of course, I will find it interesting. So I will leave away any judgment. It's up to you to tell me what you think of it :D Don't, however, be fooled by the low number of reviews and collections, it's only because I couldn't update daily during the promotion period for new books, which lowered the exposure. Worry not, though, for I've got a good number of chapters stacked, so, the daily update is on!! Please enjoy it 😃
A great story for any starting reader. The lore and concept is interesting and well researched. Give it a try, you won't regret it.👌
"Morjana" I see what you did there. : D Keep updating, i have high hope for this story.
This is not a review as much as author making a few things clear. First of all, this book will continue on. This is my first original book out there ever, and I have no intention of abandoning it. So unless something out of my hand happened, this book will continue to the very end. Second, unfortunately, I'm not a full time author. As this book doesn't generate revenue, I can not focus solely on it. As a result, it has a weekly update instead of daily. I ask for your understanding. Last but not least, yep, this isn't your typical Webnovel. I just had a story I wanted to tell and wrote it without consideration for what's trending or not. If you're an adventurous soul who would like to try new things, give it a chance. Perhaps you would like it!
I LOVE IT! the background of this story is interesting, the narrative is well-written. zarqa is both strong and adorable. thank you author for the story really enjoy it!!
Good job, I appreciate it ❤️ A lot of hard work had been poured into this novel! Keep it up!!!!!!! I want to read more!!!!!!!!👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Started this off thinking it was going to be a sweet story, but boy, was I wrong. Firstly, I love the slight contrast between Zarqa and Ali Baba, with Zarqa being raised by her dad while Ali Baba was being raised by his mother, both of them having lost one other parent. Secondly, this book has one of the best transitions I have ever read ok the platform. The dark elements that not only feature fantasy but also touch on the reality of humans makes this feel all the more real. I wanna rant about how well written this piece is and how authentic it feels. This is a unique take on webnovels and I've fallen in love with the book. 10000000/10🩷💯
I liked a lot this novel In fact , the fantasy spirit discusses many topics and givethe readers an idea how far we can go with our imagination ..i liked alsow the twist part ...it plays a huge part in the excitement factor ...i believe that alwats the twist part is a big indication of the creativity of the author and its potentials in coming up always with new and unexpected ideas .i didn t finish reading yet but i highly believe that i won't be disappointed at all.. because as they say practice makes perfect ....so the more the better...we can add as a notice that many properties expresses how big is the role that plays the passion in the writing side of the author..it is transfered within each word and each idea...this couldn't been anything but a sighnificance of the limitless capabilities af a writer...nothing but the beetter luck.. I hope i didn t spoil any of the syory told . I gave this review because i m trying to give readers the enthusiasm to read for this author ...it shouldn t be missed at all
The story weaves elements of fantasy, history, and adventure. The plot is well paced. I loved the arabic influence reminding me of the old tales! Highly recommended!
I just finished reading, and it was fantastic! The characters were well-developed and the storyline kept me hooked from start to finish It's a really good story, I love it I can't wait to know how this story will go forward.
This is a great story for those who enjoy a well-paced novel. The author excels in terms of writing quality, character development, world-building, and overall storytelling. It's remarkable how well-written this novel is, especially considering that English is not the author's first language! Please keep writing author and keep up the good work!
As a fan of Sindbad and Alibaba, I can't wait to read and know how this story will go forward... Keep writing and don't stop 😊
Apparently, reviewing one's work is a shameless tradition of Webnovel, and I shall follow through with it 😋 Jokes aside, I'm not fit to judge my own work, because for me, it's something I worked hard on and of course, I will find it interesting. So I will leave away any judgment. It's up to you to tell me what you think of it :D Don't, however, be fooled by the low number of reviews and collections, it's only because I couldn't update daily during the promotion period for new books, which lowered the exposure. Worry not, though, for I've got a good number of chapters stacked, so, the daily update is on!! Please enjoy it 😃
A great story for any starting reader. The lore and concept is interesting and well researched. Give it a try, you won't regret it.👌
"Morjana" I see what you did there. : D Keep updating, i have high hope for this story.