9評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
A novel about an actual mage? Not a battle mage, not an excessively OP mage who is an archmagus at 12 or something like that? Sign me up! In all honesty a great fic with great characterization even if MC is annoying at times, but that's just his character and he grows even if slowly. On the other hand can't wait to see how his personal life will go on. Rooting for Yasaka tbh, dunno if this is a planned harem or not and to be honest don't really care even if dislike the whole harem schtick. Here it would look nicely IMO.
A great story in my biased opinion, though I would recommend not trying to read it in one sitting. Though it’s not boring, it can get dry if you read a good chunk of it at once. Plus his relationship with his daughter is freakin adorable and adds to the story and character development. Well that’s all piece out!
It is more of a slice of life kind of story more than a action or h-anime you can expect from this fanfiction. It is fine I liked story quite a lot actually. The only problem for me is that story falls into repeatence too much. Same thing can be talked about 5 maybe even 10 chapter which is quite boring. Something also being talked about continuesly.
XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP x xpxpxpx xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xpc px px px px px px xp xp xp xp xp xp xpc px px px px px px px px
As Always I Don't Own The Story, I just thought to re-upload because I like the story.
A DxD fic that isn’t about a pervert. I also love the whole premise of hardworking MC that doesn’t get in 10 chapters or so. I also love the character development and the switching of their POV. The Original Story is in Fanficition made by Adrian King Called the Game of Monsters.
A novel about an actual mage? Not a battle mage, not an excessively OP mage who is an archmagus at 12 or something like that? Sign me up! In all honesty a great fic with great characterization even if MC is annoying at times, but that's just his character and he grows even if slowly. On the other hand can't wait to see how his personal life will go on. Rooting for Yasaka tbh, dunno if this is a planned harem or not and to be honest don't really care even if dislike the whole harem schtick. Here it would look nicely IMO.
A great story in my biased opinion, though I would recommend not trying to read it in one sitting. Though it’s not boring, it can get dry if you read a good chunk of it at once. Plus his relationship with his daughter is freakin adorable and adds to the story and character development. Well that’s all piece out!
It is more of a slice of life kind of story more than a action or h-anime you can expect from this fanfiction. It is fine I liked story quite a lot actually. The only problem for me is that story falls into repeatence too much. Same thing can be talked about 5 maybe even 10 chapter which is quite boring. Something also being talked about continuesly.
XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP x xpxpxpx xp xp xp xp xp xp xp xpc px px px px px px xp xp xp xp xp xp xpc px px px px px px px px
As Always I Don't Own The Story, I just thought to re-upload because I like the story.
A DxD fic that isn’t about a pervert. I also love the whole premise of hardworking MC that doesn’t get in 10 chapters or so. I also love the character development and the switching of their POV. The Original Story is in Fanficition made by Adrian King Called the Game of Monsters.