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Good novel but I have a question for the author how many more chapters are going to be free to read? it decides whether i continue or not, im too broke to buy chapters
the terrible grammar in the synopsis doesn't fill me with confidence, first impressions matter, and that Synopsis isn't doing your fic any favors.
Es una excelente historia me encantan los personajes pero lo que me encanta más de todo es la personalidad del protagonista... me gustan los protagonistas con personalidad de villanos y que manipulan
Starts fairly light but shows the darker side later on, intriguing novel which I would recommend.
Novel is good but update is too slow otherwise Mc thought,behaviour, manipulation I liked all of them
don't drop this novel author I love the mc behaved, manipulate his mother and sister waiting for time skip when he become 15 years old and i just want u wrote academy arc too 🥲🥲🙏🙏
I rlly hope u don't drop this I am rlly enjoying the story and need like 1000+ chapters fr
ill kill u myself if u drop this ur cooking hard with this oneㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Would reccomend, unique power system to an extent, well, long written chapters and world building is good, give your golden tickets to this man to keep him motivated, will keep reading as long as author keeps the mc a villain and doesn’t soften him up👍
the novel is good, but the author is a beggar for power stones( jk), read the novel but don't give him power stones 👍
Love the story❤️ i am hooked, 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So Brother ,what happened ? Are you not gonna update the novel?I liked this story 😭
Good novel but I have a question for the author how many more chapters are going to be free to read? it decides whether i continue or not, im too broke to buy chapters
the terrible grammar in the synopsis doesn't fill me with confidence, first impressions matter, and that Synopsis isn't doing your fic any favors.
Es una excelente historia me encantan los personajes pero lo que me encanta más de todo es la personalidad del protagonista... me gustan los protagonistas con personalidad de villanos y que manipulan
Starts fairly light but shows the darker side later on, intriguing novel which I would recommend.
Novel is good but update is too slow otherwise Mc thought,behaviour, manipulation I liked all of them
don't drop this novel author I love the mc behaved, manipulate his mother and sister waiting for time skip when he become 15 years old and i just want u wrote academy arc too 🥲🥲🙏🙏
I rlly hope u don't drop this I am rlly enjoying the story and need like 1000+ chapters fr
ill kill u myself if u drop this ur cooking hard with this oneㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Would reccomend, unique power system to an extent, well, long written chapters and world building is good, give your golden tickets to this man to keep him motivated, will keep reading as long as author keeps the mc a villain and doesn’t soften him up👍
the novel is good, but the author is a beggar for power stones( jk), read the novel but don't give him power stones 👍
Love the story❤️ i am hooked, 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
So Brother ,what happened ? Are you not gonna update the novel?I liked this story 😭