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寫檢討
As long as it is not romantic, it is a good novel. I think I'm witnessing the birth of a fantastic work, but it's too early for another opinion. Of course, a little romance is okay, but most writers start with action, villains, sadness, horror, etc., but suddenly romance comes in and It occupies the entire space of the novel. The writers forget what genre the novel was and keep talking about romance because the writers don't know what to do and just fill the novel with romance nonsense. Writers don't know or don't want to know that if we want romance, there are millions of romance novels to choose from, not horror or villain novels. I hope the author of the novel does not repeat this and does not introduce some girls to the novel to follow the main character for an adventure or does not save a few girls every ten chapters, author please.
Is it possible for an author to come and say to me: Do you want to enter my novel? Haha. It seems stupid when you think about it here. I am not talking about the novel. I am talking to you.
So I was going to write a review when it had a little chapters but I waited for a little more like 40 more but this is taking long for the update so I give my thoughts on this novel it’s good there nothing that makes this novel bad the main character is someone who thinks before he does something and he not like other he is a very clam character the background is good don’t know much about it but it’s good and the writing is the best so give it a try the only thing that’s bad is that it takes to long to update chapters hope this gets better.
As long as it is not romantic, it is a good novel. I think I'm witnessing the birth of a fantastic work, but it's too early for another opinion. Of course, a little romance is okay, but most writers start with action, villains, sadness, horror, etc., but suddenly romance comes in and It occupies the entire space of the novel. The writers forget what genre the novel was and keep talking about romance because the writers don't know what to do and just fill the novel with romance nonsense. Writers don't know or don't want to know that if we want romance, there are millions of romance novels to choose from, not horror or villain novels. I hope the author of the novel does not repeat this and does not introduce some girls to the novel to follow the main character for an adventure or does not save a few girls every ten chapters, author please.
Is it possible for an author to come and say to me: Do you want to enter my novel? Haha. It seems stupid when you think about it here. I am not talking about the novel. I am talking to you.
So I was going to write a review when it had a little chapters but I waited for a little more like 40 more but this is taking long for the update so I give my thoughts on this novel it’s good there nothing that makes this novel bad the main character is someone who thinks before he does something and he not like other he is a very clam character the background is good don’t know much about it but it’s good and the writing is the best so give it a try the only thing that’s bad is that it takes to long to update chapters hope this gets better.
when is the update coming???? ...........