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While the story started somewhat well it only went downhill from there, the one piece world is portrayed well enough but the way harry interacts with the happenings there is a bit weird for me (not counting the part in the grade I gave because it’s really more of a opinion), but the Harry Potter world is incredibly annoying, you take the people IQ and divide them by 100, then take the most annoying cliches of their reaction and multiply that 1.000 and you have the Harry Potter worls in this story. What I’m trying to say is that the story can even become good down the line but that is if you can go past this part, I dropped and picked up this ff three times until I got to 20 chapters
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the idea for the story is good but poorly executed such as turning pretty much everyone in HP world into idiots and villains, now I get hating Dumbeldor or the aunt family but this was way too much, and worst is how illogical the story is, like using the gacha machine in a shady alley for over 10 minutes with no one including the thiefs to take notice of them and how the drops from it is all about runes... so yeah total wish fulfillment with poorly executed story design i can only give 5 stars to world background cause well they are HP and one piece
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i like it and want more chapters. i'm guessing this is the author's first fic because there's definitely ways to improve in terms of the story and length of chapters, but it's still good. hope for more chapters
The writer is trying to make it a wish full-fill story but it lacks proper plot design.
since there are only 10 chapters so far, i can't really say much about the story but the beginning is interesting. i like the idea that harry is not that naive and also find it intersting that the straw hats can accompany him back to england. Imagine Luffy in Hogwarts when he sees all the food in the great hall or them bringing a sea king over and dropping it in some random lake lol
This is the best harry potter fanfic x one piece for year 2024. The author know how to build a plot, dialogue and put some humour in it. Hopefully the writer update regularly.
While the story started somewhat well it only went downhill from there, the one piece world is portrayed well enough but the way harry interacts with the happenings there is a bit weird for me (not counting the part in the grade I gave because it’s really more of a opinion), but the Harry Potter world is incredibly annoying, you take the people IQ and divide them by 100, then take the most annoying cliches of their reaction and multiply that 1.000 and you have the Harry Potter worls in this story. What I’m trying to say is that the story can even become good down the line but that is if you can go past this part, I dropped and picked up this ff three times until I got to 20 chapters
揭示劇透 the idea for the story is good but poorly executed such as turning pretty much everyone in HP world into idiots and villains, now I get hating Dumbeldor or the aunt family but this was way too much, and worst is how illogical the story is, like using the gacha machine in a shady alley for over 10 minutes with no one including the thiefs to take notice of them and how the drops from it is all about runes... so yeah total wish fulfillment with poorly executed story design i can only give 5 stars to world background cause well they are HP and one piece
揭示劇透 i like it and want more chapters. i'm guessing this is the author's first fic because there's definitely ways to improve in terms of the story and length of chapters, but it's still good. hope for more chapters
The writer is trying to make it a wish full-fill story but it lacks proper plot design.
since there are only 10 chapters so far, i can't really say much about the story but the beginning is interesting. i like the idea that harry is not that naive and also find it intersting that the straw hats can accompany him back to england. Imagine Luffy in Hogwarts when he sees all the food in the great hall or them bringing a sea king over and dropping it in some random lake lol
This is the best harry potter fanfic x one piece for year 2024. The author know how to build a plot, dialogue and put some humour in it. Hopefully the writer update regularly.