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MC who is a newborn has already started thinking about his mother and aunt , if you've read mushoku tensei you will understand that even if mc thinks about his mother's t*ts he can't get aroused because the necessary hormones can't be produced. It is also implied that MC's mother knows his perverted thoughts. What kind of mother won't be creepd out if that wasn't true. Ant the breast feeding scene in chapter 2. Don't waste your time on this if you are sane.
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Nice start ,keeping a perfect balance between story building and lemons I have good expectations for the future .Keep up the good work author 👍
Dude, this story had my curiosity, now it has my attention, so dude being one of the pioneer readers of this story please don't abandon this story please.
MC who is a newborn has already started thinking about his mother and aunt , if you've read mushoku tensei you will understand that even if mc thinks about his mother's t*ts he can't get aroused because the necessary hormones can't be produced. It is also implied that MC's mother knows his perverted thoughts. What kind of mother won't be creepd out if that wasn't true. Ant the breast feeding scene in chapter 2. Don't waste your time on this if you are sane.
Продолжай в том же духе!___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________
Nice start ,keeping a perfect balance between story building and lemons I have good expectations for the future .Keep up the good work author 👍
Dude, this story had my curiosity, now it has my attention, so dude being one of the pioneer readers of this story please don't abandon this story please.
Is this dropped ?? Because it’s been a while since the last posting.