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I found this by accident, got interested and was surprised by the 3rd chapter and got hooked on it and it's hard for me to finish a book anymore and i want more. Keep up the good work.
I like the novel and idea but I’m really getting beyond sick of people using chat gpt. It’s so robotic and dry and makes the novel feel so fake it’s hard to describe but it makes the story feel so dry.
It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.
Lo único que puedo decir es una joyita aunque no creo que entiendan lo que escribo, es refrescante lo cuidadoso que es el mc ante sus secretos sin ser muy confiado
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I haven't read it yet but what kind of story is good if it doesn't even have a little romance in it if all it will pertain to is mostly technology sounds like a somebody ain't never had any relationships don't know how to write a romance and it ain't got to be all about it but I would like him to have some kind of partner you know like Natasha or something
this is good.. (if this is translated then the translator did a good job)Keep us the excellent work 👏 👏 👏 👏
Great, keep up the good work👍 It’s a unique story however I’m looking forward to the tech he’ll use to deal with all the overkill characters in marvel
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I found this by accident, got interested and was surprised by the 3rd chapter and got hooked on it and it's hard for me to finish a book anymore and i want more. Keep up the good work.
I like the novel and idea but I’m really getting beyond sick of people using chat gpt. It’s so robotic and dry and makes the novel feel so fake it’s hard to describe but it makes the story feel so dry.
It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.
Lo único que puedo decir es una joyita aunque no creo que entiendan lo que escribo, es refrescante lo cuidadoso que es el mc ante sus secretos sin ser muy confiado
this history has potential , continue history , don't quit it [img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую][img=обновить][img=рекомендую][img=рекомендую]
I haven't read it yet but what kind of story is good if it doesn't even have a little romance in it if all it will pertain to is mostly technology sounds like a somebody ain't never had any relationships don't know how to write a romance and it ain't got to be all about it but I would like him to have some kind of partner you know like Natasha or something
this is good.. (if this is translated then the translator did a good job)Keep us the excellent work 👏 👏 👏 👏
Great, keep up the good work👍 It’s a unique story however I’m looking forward to the tech he’ll use to deal with all the overkill characters in marvel
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