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Finished reading, now I'll read again. That's how good it is, I hope there is more chapters in the future, the plot is interesting and the smut, despite not being the main focus, feel natural and makes you want more
It looks very interesting, I would love to read it, but as I'm not good at English and you can only read the rest on the app it's a bit boring, unfortunately I'm going to wait for it to be an open work.
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Shameless review from The Scholar here. This is a story about a teenager thrown into a world controlled by Mafias. He discovers his talents as a fighter all the while enjoying his new life. For the first time in his life, he finds people who accept him and look up to him. As his memories come back, his goals change and his character quickly develops in unexpected ways.
Finished reading, now I'll read again. That's how good it is, I hope there is more chapters in the future, the plot is interesting and the smut, despite not being the main focus, feel natural and makes you want more
It looks very interesting, I would love to read it, but as I'm not good at English and you can only read the rest on the app it's a bit boring, unfortunately I'm going to wait for it to be an open work.
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Shameless review from The Scholar here. This is a story about a teenager thrown into a world controlled by Mafias. He discovers his talents as a fighter all the while enjoying his new life. For the first time in his life, he finds people who accept him and look up to him. As his memories come back, his goals change and his character quickly develops in unexpected ways.