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it's really nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] but did you abandon the naruto ff?😥😢 .... ....................... . ......... . ...... .. .
The cyberpunk universe is one filled with stories. This is not the best crafted story. The pacing can be weird. And it reads out as wish fulfillment. But it’s fun, and that’s all you really need for a story. Here has five stars to keep it going.
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it is quite good unlike others who copy-paste, this guy managed to nerf the gaming system in the early stages but is strong in the late stage not overpowered at the start of the story.
so far one of the better cyberpunk fic that are still alive and I enjoy the mc so far
I don't usually leave reviews. I'm mostly ghosting in the background, but I thought to leave this for you, Mr. Author. You're doing a good job. I anticipate more.
It isn't perfect by any means, but so far it's funny. Hope to see more. Please don't fall into the butterfly effect trap, is always so stupid a fanfic character endlessly whining about it.
It's good. There aren't many cyberpunk fics and then 50% of them suck so seeing this is pretty surprising. I'm not sure if you dropped this or not seeing that there hasn't been a chap in nearly a month but I've seen fics go multiple months without chapters just to bulk drop out of nowhere. Keep up the work bro.
it's really nice[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] but did you abandon the naruto ff?😥😢 .... ....................... . ......... . ...... .. .
The cyberpunk universe is one filled with stories. This is not the best crafted story. The pacing can be weird. And it reads out as wish fulfillment. But it’s fun, and that’s all you really need for a story. Here has five stars to keep it going.
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it is quite good unlike others who copy-paste, this guy managed to nerf the gaming system in the early stages but is strong in the late stage not overpowered at the start of the story.
so far one of the better cyberpunk fic that are still alive and I enjoy the mc so far
I don't usually leave reviews. I'm mostly ghosting in the background, but I thought to leave this for you, Mr. Author. You're doing a good job. I anticipate more.
It isn't perfect by any means, but so far it's funny. Hope to see more. Please don't fall into the butterfly effect trap, is always so stupid a fanfic character endlessly whining about it.
It's good. There aren't many cyberpunk fics and then 50% of them suck so seeing this is pretty surprising. I'm not sure if you dropped this or not seeing that there hasn't been a chap in nearly a month but I've seen fics go multiple months without chapters just to bulk drop out of nowhere. Keep up the work bro.